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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 85)

bhadraprasad IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
well written. Thanks for the updateSmile

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
You are exceptionally extraordinary a writer. I don't want to belittle the beauty of the two updates you just put up. 

I was going to sleep when I found your PM and without second thoughts, I started reading your updates. It's 2:14am right now and and can confidently say that I'm glad that I decided to read your work rather than go sleep! ;-)

All I hope now is that mummy doesn't find this out and scold me for sleeping late. Hehehehe! :-P

Keep up the great work. 

And because I want to...I'll give you a hug for your wonderful works. *BIG HUG* :-D

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Ok I hope you can hear me screaming because that is EXACTLY what I'm doing!! Girl!!! 2 updates in one?! Have I died and gone to heaven?! I think so..:P :P 

Now I'm DYING to know what this video is about!! What does Anjali know?? And I'm glad she knows SOMETHING because I would imagine it would make Arnav's and Khushi's job a lot simpler! And I HATE Shyam! He has the balls to call up Khushi and assume that Khushi would be thinking about him! He needs help!

And I loved the metaphor with heaven and land and purgatory. Because that describes Arnav's state of mind so wonderfully! He really is stuck in purgatory! Torn between what is right and what matters to his Di. Its so sad and beautiful at the same time! And you mentioned the ferris wheel again!! *smiles brightly*

And you have a knack for writing WONDERFUL pool side scenes! LOL! :D They are all such a delight to read! All of these scene are so well thought out and articulated! And GAAAHH!! He kissed her on the inside of her wrist! My inner fan girl is doing somersaults! Not only Arnav's heart! Hehe! :D And how cute is that he wanted to hear her heartbeat! That is so sweet! :) :) I CANNOT WAIT TO READ what happens next!! :) :) Thanks for the PM :) 

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
I think I quite like this tender Arnav you have created.

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
lovely

thanks for the PM

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
free! free! free!!!

yippee... two updates.. it's sale season :)

where to begin... ohkay.. a big thanks for the two lovely updates...

khushi is listening to her heart. and arnav has had the humility to not even start asking for her forgiveness since just asking for it would not atone for his mistakes... he has to set all the wrongs right.

and they have also realised that shyam is far more dangerous than they thought.

and finally, anjali... this was a wonderful twist. and so believable - something that any wife might see on her husband's mobile. so she finds the most sinister aspect of her beloved husband. that he is capable and has tried to kill his beloved wife. and does not show any remorse for it. that was brilliant! i mean after so many assumptions and predictions about nk's famed camcorder which turned out to be a dud, you come up with a winner. lady, take a bow!


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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Omg two updates...whAt a treat!!!!!:D
Amazing updates...both of 'em...
I'm srsly speechless...because I know no amount of Praises can do justice to the way you've written all the emotions...be it Anjali Arnav or khushi-simply beautiful!
I loved that both Arnav and khushi got their importance and we could read each one's pov...brilliantly written!
Thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Incredible!

I think that about sums it up for me.  Awesome, Outstanding would work too

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