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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 74)

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Really nice! :)

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged
You know why I love you so much, dont you ??

Ok there I go with the ramble of mine again !! You write sooo sloow, but I love how much you describe every twitch of Arnav-Khushi's fingers, even a flick of their eyes, and the bundle of emotions you bring along with it !!

It was written to PERFECTION !! I know, I say that for almost every update, but its not my fault that you write so well, that I can ever say anything less than PERFECT !!

The beginning !! The changed dynamics between Arnav-Khushi !!
The whole description of the hug between Arnav and Khushi !! How he realises that though they have been in each others arms forever, this time things were different !1 It wasnt cause he was saving her or she was forced into it, it came out so naturally !!
And Khushi !! Accpeting her happiness !! And probably she's so much more lighter than she has ever been !! The way she says her husband !! I was sooo happy !! And then the question of the stars !! The simplicity of the question !! Haiii, it killed me !! And I had this huge grin plastered all throghout my face !!

Payal !! I love how you writers explore her !! each in a totally different way !! And you did a flawless job there !! The way payal notices the changes in Khushi !! The hug between the two sisters, it reminded me right of the hug i had with my sissy when she got married ! She was so happy !! And this scene, just got its place in my heart !!

The changes she notices in Arnav !! However silent she maybe, she surely knows things ! The way she notices him smiling, the change in the way he carries himself !! Being genuinely happy !! I so wished we could get an Arnav-Payal bro sissy hug !!

And the ending !! Pretty  interesting I guess?!!  What exactly is Payal planning to do ??!!

I loved this update !! MuahhhHug

PS: You know however good you are, you're a little devil !! Forcing me to type so much, I dont even know what Ive rambled on !! Heyy Devi Maiyya !!LOL

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged
love how you portray their thoughts n feeling so beautifully! 
love Payal - so she will be staying with Di, can't wait for the next chapter, hope you can update soon.

n all the best with your 'Campaign for better internet' Tongue 

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
congrats for the new thread

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 5:54am | IP Logged
awesome update dear:)

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
A sensible and observant Payal is such a treat...and Arnav and Khushi moments are simply wow!
Loved the hesitant, not -so-cocky Arnav here and Khushi, ONG, this girl is just brimming with happiness, is not she?
A lovely read...enjoyed it a lot.


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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Beatiful portrayal of the Gupta sisters'  feelings|

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