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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 69)

fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Beautiful Update. The ARHI moments are just wow. Day Dreaming Payal's feelings are also portrayed beautifully. Hope you can update soon dear.



Edited by fffan123 - 06 July 2012 at 2:15pm

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE
LOVED IT
CONTINUE SOON
THANKS FOR THE PM

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Wow... Too good. Clap
Such a cliffhanger !!!!!! Too anxious for the next update.

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
wow depiction of kushis feeling was so well written 
she felt at home she wanted to be complete
and move dmore into him to feel cosy 

payal wow so many feelings from payal she feeling guilty and also observed all the things about arnav wow loving this payal...

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
wow! this payal is also more sensible... sleeping in di's room to make up for her absence and to take care of her.. indeed!! :)

oh, so in that case what would khushi do now? oh am waiting for that.

loved the update.. although i would say you seem to have given it a lot more critical go-through... you seemed more restrained with the flow. don't worry about the bloc... it will just keep you restrained... let go and write as you normally do and you are brilliant!

i think this is the best FF on IF... although i also love Gargee, Maya and Shreya's work. 

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
Very cute!

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
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hey hun
lovely, beautiful partClapStarBig smile
arhi were just WOWDay Dreaming...it was just so magical. loved how u described everything, inclu their feelingsEmbarrassed
payal was a surpriseBig smile i really enjoyed reading that scene. she's so sensibleThumbs Up
i guess the best moment for me was reading about khushi being happy n admitting itThumbs Up am so so glad that she's opening up n making attempts to move on, believe in her husband n esp getting back to her old selfBig smile
and yayy, finally after so long..arhi will sleep in the same room. its gonna be so cute n funnyLOLEmbarrassed...cant wait. i just love payal for doing thatStar
thanks for the pm hun
i really hope ur connection gets sorted out...i know it can be such a painOuch
take careHug


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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Omg...wow!!!
I just loved this update!!
Khushi genuinely happy...and thank god payal wasn't dumb enough here she realized khushi's pain...
Great update!!!
They both are sooo happy it makes me happy...:D

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