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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 55)

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Awesome yaar. That was too good. Loved the ending.

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Bad? Are you kidding me? I'm glad I replied to that other PM before reading this. I feel like I'm flying without wings and I have not had Redbull! :P

That was sooo beautiful. The laughter dying out but not into awkwardness and I love your Arnav because he does not now say "Mujhe tumhe batane ki koi zarurat nahi" when Khushi asks him questions cause this Arnav wants her to know him more than anything!

And how sweetly he confessed everything! Even the admittance of breaking the tap, I could imagine a much younger, sheepish looking boy stiffly nodding his head and looking in awe as the girl he loved laughed away to glory! What a beautiful image it makes! :)

And go Khushi!! I love how she is asking all the right questions for her heart to reassure her brain that her love truly is being returned manifold and she can trust him! :) That he has accepted her as she is and she is HIS! <3 And she does not resist instead almost awaits physical contact with him! Lovely progression! :)

And of Anjali's involvement in keeping the photo? I'm glad! :D It reminded me of that first time she saw the picture of Khushi from the photo shoot when Arnav could not stop staring at it! And what she is hiding and the video she was watching.. Very curious. I'm assuming the two people she means is Arnav and Khushi! :)

And the Dhak Dhak.. Well, they did feel that out in the rain by the car na? But now with no other barriers withholding them, it gains all the more significance! The moment was truly sigh inducing! If I may say so, I felt it was more perfect than the Holi confession on the show because right now the only drug your Arnav and Khushi are under the influence of is Love!! :D :P

Hug for writing so beautifully!

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Beautiful Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 1:00am | IP Logged
amazing update. Beautifully written

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 1:09am | IP Logged
finally they confessed wat they feel for each other...khushi has started trusting him...do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 1:31am | IP Logged
omg dear it was just beautiful...loved it very much...oh man this arnav is sooo sweeet...i mean how does he do it...its kinda like the same arnie in the show at the moment like when he called just to say that he was sorry for hitting her on the head n how they talked to each others heart n omg i just fell in love with this ff all over again...it was just tooo romantic when he showed her how his heart beat for her...totally loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Haww that was marvelous. Finally, a much-needed conversation between the two! They don't even need to speak a bountiful amount of words, just a few simple questions, but the right ones, and some heartfelt answers, and that's all they need :)

Lovely, lovely chapter! Especially loved what Anjali saw and the hug <3

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Oh.My.God! It was so breathless!

Even If i had fainted at end, there is no doubts cos that I hyperventilated so much.

Without saying those 3 magical words u enchanted the whole chapter with love! U r a beautiful and loving witch! I love the words that are coming from ur hands!

Now, I'm really glad, ur exams are giving u a way to make us happy!

Thanks for the pm

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