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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 54)

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged

This update left me feeling nice about Arnav and Khushi, the turmoil in their hearts heading towards a calm that only love can provide. I am glad they are questioning each other and getting answers as well, a positive sign; it is difficult to come to terms with one's feeling after the pain the two went through.

Arnav is smitten and how and our ever crazy Khushi and her dhak-dhak, that girl is a master piece I tell you.

Anjali was correct in her assessment of Arnav and Khushi's relationship and she must now be happy the tides have changed; her instincts about the future too seem to be bang on target.

What will the future be I wonder?

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
I can't think of anything else to say but WOW, that's what this part was.
 
I was so touched by how well you portrayed all their emotions; first Anjali then Arnav and Khushi, it was simply beautiful
 
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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Thanks for an amazing update
Loved it for the first both of there're ready to listen to eachother 
Usually they just want to talk ...NAND no one wants to listen 

 I'm so happy Kushi was asking questions and Arnav was ready to answer
So sweet because ou hearts become one and then hey hugged
Wow

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varshapan Senior Member
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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Oh! this was better than Good... this was awesome!!

love the way you weaved in the - hamari dhadkanein ek ho jaati hain - conversation in here. makes it so much more appropriate than the inebriated confession during holi.

brilliant!! 

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barunlove Goldie
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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written!!! Loved it!!!

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arushi05 Goldie
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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
it was simply fabulous. this chapter simply took my breath away. really loved the way khushi resolved to ask arnav about her queries and clear her doubts of accepting him finally in her life. and i really loved the way arnav answered her questions and in return made the confession which he would have made on the night of akash and payal's wedding if the terrace scene would not have happened.
you simply brought back the "heartbeats becoming one" in a beautiful way. this chapter made me relish the old flavour of  the serial with which i had initially fallen in love.
hope something like this is shown in the serial in the future. 
frankly speaking nowadays i wait for your updates more than waiting for the episodes to air.
kuddos to youClap

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
amazing update dear:)

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
such a beautiful chapter.. i was not sure when i was smiling, sad or chuckling away..

enjoyed it a lot..

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