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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 49)

Psychedelic Goldie
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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Nafisaaa Hug Welcome back!! :D Oh how I missed this FF and I absolutely loved this update! :D

Totally grinning here! The way you described their feelings and then the interaction! The silence spoke volumes!! I'm gushing! You completely had me with Khushi's question! You could say I was as flabbergasted as Arnav! :P Kudos to her mind for being able to think enough to form the question when under the assault of his mischievous gaze! LOL and how they both were appreciating the physical allure the other held! Free from everything that held them back on prior occasions.

Oooh.. and what surprise is Arnav planning for Khushi? I'm veeerry curious! 24 hours seems so long! And I for one totally dont mind that Shyamu and Anjali have been forgotten and update after such a long time deserved to be Arhilicious! :P

The dragonfly no longer wanted to fly away.

That was my favourite line from this update! :D

Looking forward to more frequent updates from you now that exams are done! I'm so glad ur back! :D


Edited by Psychedelic - 16 June 2012 at 12:38am

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amv63 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Great update...and one that was long long awaited!
What on earth is Arnav planning for Khushi? It's got him all fired up hasn't it? Looking forward to finding out.
She is slowly beginning to trust him - enough to at least laugh out loud in his presence like she used to a long time ago! And he seems as if he's got the most precious gift in the world! Awww
Hope you're well rested now and rarin' to go!
Thanks for the PM.


Edited by amv63 - 15 June 2012 at 10:08pm

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tvbuf IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Wow - what a sweet OS.

Please PM me for next part, eagerly waiting Smile

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
lovely updateSmile
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
WOW!!! u say this was just offhanded, not a thought out chapter, girl i really want to read something then that u have thought out and planned to perfection.
Loved it!!! No other words describe what or how well i could actually picturize that last part where Khushi asks her question and Arnav gives his nod and she laughs out unable to hold it back.
Now u have made us addicted to such types of updates and so u have to provide the antidote so plz update soon.

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varshapan Senior Member
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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
oh yeah!! you updated... you know it feels so good to read this again. almost like a pail of water after days spent in the scorching desert... it may sound exaggerated but you get the drift.

and what an update! don't worry... it just beautifully takes off from where you left. arshi had to have this private moment. how else would khushi's mind know and be reassured that it had done the right thing in taking a backseat and allowing the heart to plummet ahead. and arnav too needed his hopes to be kept afloat for all the genuine sincere efforts he was making in getting their relationship back on track.

and of all the things khushi had to ask about the bathroom tap!! oh, i love the way you put in surprising comments in between. these are those moments of genius - take a bow! 

overall, loved the update, as always. and now am eagerly waiting for arnav's surprise. 
thank you for updating immediately after coming back from your exams and sacrificing much needed sleep :)

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Hi Doe-eyes, welcome back. Hope you have done great on your exam.

The update was super fantastic. Loved all the ARHI moments. That was a wonderful journey to ARHILAND Day Dreaming

Please update the next part soon.

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
AAAHHH!! You're back!!! WOOHOO!! Well thank god girl!! :) :)

Ok so serious question..How long do you take to write a chapter..Because the metaphors alone would take me a day to write!! I cannot say this enough but you write beautifully!! Wonderful!! And aawww...Armav made her laugh!! God that is so cute!!! The cuteness of this chapter killed me!!!

Thanks for the PM hon! :) Can't wait for the next update! 

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