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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 49)

Mendesarmy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
really gr8 update 
thanx for the pm

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arushi05 Goldie
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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged
hey i read all the chapters of ur ff at a go. what a fabulous ff u write. this ff truely describes arnav and khushi's relationship very well. all the characters in this ff are very well portrayed. really love how well u portrayed khushi and arnav's inner feeling and how well u showed arnav's repentance and khushi's turmoil of feelings for this new changed arnav. must say gud work. 
now coming to the new chapter that is chapter 31. it was the most sweet chapter with the view that khushi is slowly coming to accept the ways of her heart and letting it rule her mind. 
eagerly waiting to read more from ur writing.

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
simply mind blowing...such control over the subject...awesome!!!!

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kyunki_iloveu Goldie
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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
woww..another update soo soon...
love ittt
soo happy ur exams are done
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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Nafffiii ! eeek... you're back, baby ! :D 
I hoping you're exams went well.

Wohoo... I know i'm commenting late than the update you sent out.. I just read.. and well... 

It made my night, thoroughly ! and a smile just broke out.. such a heart tingling, sweetly mischievous, and a  relaxed thoroughly enjoyable update ! 

This was just the perfect comeback, and aaaha ! Khushi's so sudden and unexpectedly random ! and she did not blush, ahaa.. success ! and Aww @ Arnav ! 

Truly loved the ending, could vividly imagine it, just as excited now for Arnav's reaction-response ! 

ps; missed your updates since so long ! <3

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maazia Senior Member
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 12:57am | IP Logged
I've been reading your story for the past two days, the first time. It is really wonderful. The way you portray emotions and feelings is superb. And I'm really glad that you've kept ASR and Khushi's character intact. Just the way it should be.
Good that your exams have finished. Now you can update soon Wink

May you pass with flying colours.



P.S. Thanks for the PM


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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vandana73

thanx for such a lamba wala update
that was truly beautiful
such an insight into their minds  and the changing dynamics of their relationship being acknowledged by both of them
thanx for the PM

Actually, I should be thanking you for bearing with me all this while...really sorry it took me this long to post an update, but I hope you understand :) And thanks so much for liking the update!! It's very reassuring that you found the progression in their relationship appealing, coz I was a bit uncertain about whether it was consistent with the previous chapters...hadn't worked on this for so long, you see...so thanks!!
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MistiofMistz

wicked... hope everything is fine 

thanks so much :) 

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