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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 38)

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 1:09am | IP Logged
amazin update

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
i just came to know this story..will start reading now..:)

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Nice Update!!!

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged

mesmerizing and warming update!

the update did reflect a part of khusi still struggling with her emotions,she is still struck, she is somehow finding it really hard to trust arnav again and i guess she is absolutely right in her position!

u penned down the emotions beautifully! 

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Excellent update. 

Oh My God, has Anjali seen the video of the terrace scene? I'm happy that she realises what is right for all and is getting over Shyam. I like the way you are developing this plot. 

Also, I love how you very clearly bring out Arnav's and Khushi's emotions...the pain, the regret, the love and most importantly the lack of trust when trust had been there all along. Beautiful!

Keep up the good work.

All the Best for your exams. 

Thank you for the PM!

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Wow that was fantastic convo between bua ji and Kushi 
He so understands Kushi 
Loved ow heis helping her see the light...

Anji knows about Shyam
Oh. My goodness

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
omg it was awsuuum...loved it dear...was waiting for it...thnx 4da pm dear...

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
I'm late but I'm here! Again, a beautiful update dear! Oh. That rhymed! :P

Arnav monologue, Anjali Arnav teasing, his brief conversation with Khushi and his realisation of the change in her stance, Khushi's monologue and Khushi's convo with Bauji! Amazingly done.

I feel a renewed respect for Bauji's character after reading your version of him. He is exactly the kind of person Khushi needed to guide her in solving all the confusion in her mind. You've put it all so eloquently. Emphasising the emotions. Brilliant work!

Anjali watching a video on her phone? Very curious!

Thank you for updating! :D Looking forward to the next one~! Hug

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