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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 26)

suadvani Goldie
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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Wow - simply amazing - gosh the emotions simply ooze out of your words!!
I just read 26, 27 and 28 (been awol for a while.. been reading non IF stuff like the hunger games and shades of grey trilogys..) in a way am glad i did as i get to come back and read multiple chapters in one go.. and seriously i have no words..
the words your wrote - Arnav describing how he felt - wow.. the broken grass and injury..  whole dragonfly episode..  bringing humor to a really intense  situation.. amazing.. Khushi reading maa's etter and really getting it.. getting arnavs words and feelings .. wow...
 
I love your writing - wish it would go on and on and on...
cantw aut for the next!

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tinsel IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Fantastic updates!Clap

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Hot_Indo_Chilly IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
beautiful update!

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
I absolutely loved your ff...your vocabulary is phenomenal and you've described Arhi's emotional turmoil with such clarity as i had previously deemed impossible...the long updates are great...i hope you're not considering winding up the ff anytime soon...please keep the awesome work coming...btw good luck with your r exams!!

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
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smileyhug7679 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Oh my god just stumbled upon ur FF
So amazing...
Man u such a vivid and creative writer
We so much of insigh n both Arnav's and kushis feeling in each chapter
Wow u got me stumped there...

I am simply amazed and was so thrilled while reding the chapters. U have given the characters so much depth truly grateful I wish our ipkknd shows this depth in the story ...

Pls pm me when u update

Love ur cynical jokes inbetween serious convo I mean with Kushi character as well as Arnav lved the one liner from Arnav 
This thing keeping ringing always at the wrong time..
Ha ha that was so funny I was laughing like crazy... In such heat of moment that line was a stress reliever...

Lve how ur story has shaped up so eager to know why has Anjali chnaged and is Kushi going to completely accept Arnav now that she has realised and believed wat arnav feels for her...

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ashna27 Senior Member
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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
so i read the entire thing in the one sitting...great work :)

and i really do love the persistence of arnav in this...and i also like his dialogue...the cvs could definately do with taking a page out of your book :)

keep it coming...and do add me to your PM list
Stapleton IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
wonderful story...
read all d parts now...
amazing...

plz pm me

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