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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 15)

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 2:38am | IP Logged
First of all, I believe congratulations are in order, for the new thread! YOU DESERVE IT!!!
 
I have to say (once again!) I love the pace at which your story is going. Nothing is happening to fast, and nothing is dragging on forever.  You have the perfect timing for everything.  Khushi isn't just falling into Arnav's arms, shes a little indescisive considering their misunderstandings and thats reasonable.  And she still cares for him, making her completely in character.  GAAHH I AM JUST LOVING THIS!  And Arnav's speech -- Holy mother of pearl that was to die for!
 
Goddamnit this is, by far, the best fanfic I have ever read. 
 
KEEP IT UP :D

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Wah_taj Goldie
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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 4:38am | IP Logged
loved it :)

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Just read all 27  chapters and I must say that I am completely bowled over by your writing and storyline. I just love it!  Each chapter is detailed with so many expressions and feelings.  Thank you for writing such an intense love story.  I cannot wait to read more. I hope you PM me the next update.

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged

Wow...that was one hell of an emotional confession! Arnav pouring his heart out to her..so instinctively...how touching!! I hope Khushi sees his sincerity, genuine and ardent love for her and decides to forgive him...although i can see that her heart already has forgiven him, she just has to go of all her fears, inhibitions and reach out for that door now...open her mind to all that lies beyond it...everything that she once hoped for, dreamt of and more...:) thanks for the update and the PM! :) waiting for the next one!

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
great job dear

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
And there we have - another roller-coaster!!!!

Beautiful.. No, the individual scenes stood out even in the bunch - 'cause you have described everything so perfectly; the scenes just can't get lost anywhere!!

Thanks for the PM! And sorry, I wasn't able to comment on a couple of your previous updates! Just caught up with them and - hats off, girl!!!

And yeah - congrats on the new thread!!! 

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
heya

awesome update...

loved how you penned down each emotions...

arnav finally let out his feelings...
and khushi accepted his ma's kangans...aww...

will look forward for the next part...

continue soon...

many thanks for the pm...: ]

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
That was brilliant! Loved every bit of it!

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