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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 130)

arushi05 Goldie
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Well i lost the first position but still i am second. Awesome awesome awesome. I am loosing count in saying to you that you are an awesome writer.
I never expected the bangles to be khushi's surprise but i must say that was the best surprise ever along with the red saree.
I really liked how you made arnav undo all the wrong things from that place where he had before taken a wrong decision.
The way you expressed arnav's helplessness and fear in doing the right thing and bring about the topic of engagement was very well portrayed.
You left us on a cliffhanger!!
Thanks for the pm. Will be waiting for the next chapter

Edited by arushi05 - 24 August 2012 at 7:08am

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Lovely lovely lovely! :D

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preetihere IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Oh that was beautiful!! After all that anxiety and the lovely long drive..A ring! i somehow had that feeling yet it is so beautifully written!

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Wow that was amazing...
Loved the whol surprise from kushis side and everyone mercilessly teasing her
Poor girl feel so bad oft hat she is been teased by all..
Ad eh way Arnav heart felt constricted looking at her in red
Wow. Nice feelings from both of them displayed to please a other


Loved it  poor jewel maker 

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Wow, how romantic...what we cannot get on the show we are getting from you, so much love, awesome...love how she wears red and the bangles, those bangles to represent such happy times, the best part of the show...and the carriage and him fulfilling her dreams...super...

Thans for the pm. Feel bad for anjali though.

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swetha_ch IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Such a lovely update!
Thanks for the pm..

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amv63 Senior Member
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Loved Arnav's surprise. Pearls and diamonds are my favorite combination. And the pearl is reminiscent of the string he broke from her choli when they first met. Perfect.
And yes, we mothers tend to drag our girls to meet long-lost relatives before they go away for long stretches. That's your punishment for being away from mum for so long. How are we supposed to manage without you? So no complaining!!!Wink
Good luck at uni.

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
What a fantastic Eidi you've given us with these fabulous updates, DE!!! Hug

I've been waiting so eagerly to know what the surprise he'd planned for her was, I never imagined it would be something so simple, yet so exquisite and so fundamentally right! What a fabulous description of a woman in love!


How did you plumb into the depths of a complex, delusional mind like Anjali's and with such sympathy and understanding? You managed not only to make us understand the workings of such a mind but achieved the almost impossible- made us feel sorry for this unfortunate woman whom life has treated so badly.ClapClap

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