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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 126)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
love d update!u r an amazing writer!do update soon.Smile

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
No woman should have to undergo what Anjali's suffering. Shyam is beyond evil. I hope Anjali speaks to Khushi and Arnav about all this so that they can help her through this difficult time. Love the way they're slowly building up the love and trust.
Eid Mubarak everyone.

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
awesome... thanks for the pm

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Fabulous updates.

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
*sigh* I feel like hugging Anjali...and you my dear! Because you got her just right! Her dilemma and her confusion and her fear was so palpable! It was wonderful to read because it felt so realistic and so much like the Anjali of the show! And thank fully in your fic Anjali seems to be using her brains and not shut it down! :) 

And Khushi's feelings are a joy to read! I was wondering which black card board box you were talking about! OF COURSE its the one in which he bought her those bangles! :) And I loved how you said that she was nervous in opening that box before because she didn't know if she could go back there...but now...she has no problem! :)

Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait to read more! 

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
continue soon
nice updt
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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
fantastic update dear:)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
hey hun
awesome, amazing partClapStar
anjie part was superbClap...i've been waiting patiently for the mystery to unravel
i thought it was an intelligent idea to bring that particular scene of shyam interfering with the car to anjali's attentionClapClap. most of the ffs i read always have khushi's involvement..
its such a horrible, tragic n traumatising thing for a wife to know her husband wants to kill herCry. i love how u portrayed anjie's emotions n povStar... poor thing practically worshipped the snake...
i think if i was in her position i would've also felt faint after hearing shyam's conversation on the phoneOuch... it was scary, really. i can totally understand why u had a headache writing this..Ouch
aha i had guessed she was lying about the phone call...
i wonder what shyam must be thinking about this...i mean he's loyal, devoted wife who cant possibly live without, him hasnt seen or heard from him for days n hasnt even bothered to contact him...
this is getting so interesting nowBig smile
 
awww khushi's part was too wonderfulDay Dreaming
i loved her realisation of being in loveEmbarrassed...very beautifulStar
and yayy, she's wearing her 1st gift from arnavBig smile. i hope when she meets him later, she wears them. he'll be pleasantly surprised n shocked. i remember that part when arnav got all depressed thinking she had broken or thrown them away... i think it would be a wonderful sceneDay Dreaming
hmm u go girl...cant wait for khushi's surprise to arnavParty
 
thanks for the pm
eid mubarakHug
take care


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