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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 12)

sarchanu Senior Member
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
it was a really nice update 
loved the show of emotions 

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dmg123 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
WOW...seriously the last to parts were brilliantly written!
I was so amazed by the way you are able to depict the emotions of the characters. I really liked the scene when Khushi makes Arnav coffee and when Arnav gives Khushi's his mother's bangles.
 
Keep up the great work!
And also...congratulations on this second thread...you totally deserve this!
 
 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
<3 it ty for pm

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
splendid! each scene flowed beautifully from one to the next, that was wonderful! 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Hey that was a super long update that was just superb!

So finally arnav spoke out all his feeling i'm so happy. He told all that he had in his heart.

Khushi will take time to overcome this n thats obvious but she has also started feeling. Was really when she took the bangles.

But it was really beautifully written. Update soon.

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
this is just awesome :D u have such a soothing way of writing and i love how the pace of the story is going on!! :)

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
loved arnavs speech about him being in love with khushi from the start and loved how she accepted maa's blessing!

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
can't believe i just came across this today =O

this is fab Star

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