Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
really luved all ur writings... u r awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just loved it...
wow...is a perfect word
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Posted: 12 years ago
heya

awesome update dear..

loved how you described khushi's thoughts and confusions...

very well written..

many thanks for the pm..: ]

continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was very beautiful and very well written. I loved it. When Khushi was reading the letter and she was understanding every word, this was just beautiful. I have read this letter or have seen people discuss it, use it in their fan fics but the way you have used it, Omg... That was just awesome. I loved both the sibling scenes too. Lovely update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey it was super duper long awesome update. Just the way it is liked.

So at last khushi has believed arnav loves her. That's so sweet n lovely. N khushi actually laughed after a very long time.

Anjali knows smthing or the other.

Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
really liked how she realizes the feelings! and anjali i thought you would be smart enough to think about what might your husband be doing! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
I've been reading through your fan fiction.
 
Really good work. Highly charged and very emotional.
 
Thanks. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...i read ur FF at one shot...and god u write amazingly...u give every detail so flawlessly..that u actually have me glued to the screen...i would love to know what happens next!!
could u plzz PM me when u update!!!
thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww, The Sister Scene Was Cuteee :) 🤗 This Is Getting Good; The BESTTT Point, Arnav Realizing His Love 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow - simply amazing - gosh the emotions simply ooze out of your words!!
I just read 26, 27 and 28 (been awol for a while.. been reading non IF stuff like the hunger games and shades of grey trilogys..) in a way am glad i did as i get to come back and read multiple chapters in one go.. and seriously i have no words..
the words your wrote - Arnav describing how he felt - wow.. the broken grass and injury..  whole dragonfly episode..  bringing humor to a really intense  situation.. amazing.. Khushi reading maa's etter and really getting it.. getting arnavs words and feelings .. wow...
 
I love your writing - wish it would go on and on and on...
cantw aut for the next!