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SS- Betaabi- DISCONTINUED!!NOTE PG 18 (Page 10)

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by divyabhallax

when are you gonna update tina?
and pelase update your story- love love love 
xx


You also visit that site?
And will continue soon with that story too.Big smile

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by virenjeevika

Originally posted by KT_4eva

Originally posted by virenjeevika

Originally posted by KT_4eva

KAmini you haven't continued from such a long time! Shocked
I just loved it!! Continue soon or I'll kill you! LOL


arre yaar deepu yahan bhi kamini?Shocked


Kya karun ogh Tinu main hun adat se majboor! ROFL


Tu ise zyada filmi ho sakti hai kya? LOL

You never knowww..LOL Wink
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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KT_4eva

Originally posted by virenjeevika

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Originally posted by KT_4eva

KAmini you haven't continued from such a long time! Shocked
I just loved it!! Continue soon or I'll kill you! LOL


arre yaar deepu yahan bhi kamini?Shocked


Kya karun ogh Tinu main hun adat se majboor! ROFL


Tu ise zyada filmi ho sakti hai kya? LOL

You never knowww..LOL Wink


Your right!
tujhe koi samaj nahi sakta LOLTongue
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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Nice update! I love all your FF's please do continue soon and sorry for the late comment. 
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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged

Really sorry for the Late update guys.  I will try my best to update regular. Thank you for reading my story. Hope you guys like the next part.

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A Handsome hunk in jeans and t-shirt looked up. He was wearing sunglasses but took them of as soon as he saw them.

Manvi- Hi Arjun!

Arjun Malhotra, Yash Malhotra's one and only son. Yash and Anand, jeevika and Manvi's father were best friends when they were in Delhi. Arjun, Manvi and jeevika are friends since childhood. After Anand died Manvi and Jeevika moved to Rishikesh. Yash had wanted the girls to stay with him but Beeji refused. Ever since then Arjun frequently visited them in Rishikesh .

Arjun broke into a huge smile seeing them.

Arjun- oh my god! I missed you guys so much.

Virat and Viren both looked at each other still confused then looked at Arjun angrily as he went forward to hug both the girls.

(Why the hell is he hugging Manvi and Bhabhi!)

( He's hugging MY wife like that's he's  right! Ughh! How can Jeevika allow that doesn't she know only HER HUSBAND has the right to hug her like that! I could so kill him)

(That's it! Doesn't Manvi know everyone is looking at them!)

Virat cleared his throat which made them break their hug.

Virat- Uhhm Uhmm

The three of them looked at him confused except Viren.

( Wah mere bhai! I will remember to thank you later)

Arjun looked at Manvi then Jeevika questioningly.

Manvi- Arjun Yeh virat hain aur yeh...

Before Manvi could finish Virat cut her off

Virat- Hi arjun

He lends his hand out to shake with a fake smile which Arjun accepted Happily.

Arjun- Hi Virat, nice to meet you

(Nice my foot)

Arjun turned towards Jeevika

Arjun- So what's up honey?

Jeevika looked at him shocked then at Viren who was glaring at him

(GOD! First he dares to hug her and now he's calling her Honey? Doesn't he no She is taken! Bloody flirt)

Manvi sniggered looking at Viren's expression whilst Virat looked on amused.

Manvi- Arjun I think you should meet him first

Manvi then went and stood next to Viren

Manvi- Arjun meet my Jeeju!

Arjun looked at him shocked

Arjun- Jeeju? Meaning ?

Viren- I will explain I'm Viren, Jeevika's husband.

Arjun- WHAT!

Arjun knew Jeevika had gotten married but hadn't really seen Viren as he was abroad at that time.

Arjun composed himself and went near Viren

Arjun- Hey I'm Arjun. Me Manvi and Jeevika know each other since childhood. Sorry about that yaar.

Viren looked at him confused

Viren- Sorry for what?

Arjun- I always flirt with Jeevika and now it's become a habit sorry couldn't help myself.

Viren gave him a smile

( Wow! So he did know she was married! And always used to flirt, now what the hell does that mean!)

Jeevika who hadn't spoken a word since they met finally spoke.

Jeevika- So Arjun what are you doing here?

Arjun smirked

Arjun- oye hoye! Kyun now that you have a husband can't I come!

Jeevika- no it's nothing like that was just wondering as you came after such a long time. Not to mention you have changed.

Arjun looked at her curiously and then smiled

Arjun- but you haven't changed at all! That same figure, same attitude...

This time Virat cut him off

Virat- Really? I thought bhabhi has changed after giving birth

Arjun looked at Jeevika and spoke slowly

Arjun- gave birth? You mean you have a

Jeevika nodded

Jeevika- Yes Arjun, meri ek beti hain

Manvi- Arjun di has...  I mean how long will this

Arjun put on his glasses and broke in Manvi's sentence

Arjun- I need to go, I have a important meeting I will come again, soon.

Saying that he left leaving the four of them alone.

Virat and Viren were confused. Manvi and Jeevika looked at each other both of them knew why he left meeting was just an excuse.

Virat- What happened to him?

Jeevika- Nothing Virat, He likes to go to his meetings on time.

Viren- Looks like you know a lot about him.

Manvi – of course jeeju! We were best friends!

Virat- were Best friends?

Neither of them spoke the Vadhera boys looked at each other and knew something was wrong but this was not the right time to ask.

Viren – I think we should go now Alisha must have woken up by now to.

Jeevika nodded

Manvi- par chaat toh kayi hi nahin!

Virat frowned

Virat- hum toh bhool hi gaye teh isko khaane se kuch bhi alag nahi kar sakta

All of them laughed.

Virat- bhai, bhabhi aap log jaye main is bandariya ko chaat khila kar laata hoon.

Viren- you sure?

Virat- Yes bro go.

Jeevika and Viren headed back to the Car. Viren looked at Jeevika and A Idea crossed his mind. He held the door open for jeevika and quickly ran to sit in his seat. Jeevika closed her eyes as Viren drove the car out and leaned back. After a bit Jeevika opened her eyes as she wondered why it's taking them so long to get home. She looked out the Window and Realise they have gone past the house or more like Rishikesh!

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So what do you guys think? Sorry it is a bit rushed as I have to go out somewhere and I promised to update my FF this week. If I hadn't updated today then wouldn't have able to all week. Please do leave comments or press the like button.

Tina

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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Amazing update! loved it. Lol at Viren and Virat's thoughts! pmsl! LOL
Was waiting for you to update this. Tongue
Please do continue soon Big smile


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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Hey just read your full FF now! I absolutely love it! I wonder why Arjun reacted like that! Can't wait for the next update please update sooon! Big smile




Edited by Love_kryran - 23 June 2012 at 10:40am

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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Good update ...Smile
Loved the hilarious thoughts of Viren and ViratLOL
Cant wait to read the next part...
Thanks for the PM...continue soon

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