SS- Betaabi- DISCONTINUED!!NOTE PG 18 - Page 8

Posted: 11 years ago
omg
who 's the person
waitting eagerly for the next part
ausumn update
cont soon
Posted: 11 years ago
loved ur update...awesome ss...please continue soon...:)
Posted: 11 years ago
Tht was very good,continue soon and thnx for the pm.
Posted: 11 years ago
Mindblwong ss Well i hav just read 1 part so im bit confuse of dis bhabhi dewar conver well surely read...
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by virika-deewani


Amazing update! loved it. Lol at Viren and Virat's thoughts! pmsl! πŸ˜†
Was waiting for you to update this. πŸ˜›
Please do continue soon πŸ˜ƒ




Lol thanks rose. And will do soon πŸ˜ƒ

Tina

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Love_kryran


Hey just read your full FF now! I absolutely love it! I wonder why Arjun reacted like that! Can't wait for the next update please update sooon! πŸ˜ƒ




Thanks Priya. You will know soon. Don't worry. And will update soon. Thanks πŸ˜ƒ

Tina

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by jenna_p


Good update ...😊
Loved the hilarious thoughts of Viren and ViratπŸ˜†
Cant wait to read the next part...
Thanks for the PM...continue soon


Thank you. will do πŸ˜ƒ

Tina
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by nacima


just came across your ff, it's wonderfull


Thanks. 😊

Tina

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by KT_4eva


Tinuuu! πŸ€—
Arjun! πŸ˜‘ He has proposed Jeevika before right? And wa heart broken when he came to know that she also has a child! πŸ˜†
Gosh I couldn't stop laughing at Honey and I could imagine Viren's expressions! πŸ€£
Rhishikesh? Wow! πŸ˜ƒ 
Can't wait to read more .. And itna chota part? πŸ˜²
Next time longer and it's an order! πŸ˜†
But amazing part! πŸ˜ƒ
Continue asap! πŸ˜Š


Deepuu! πŸ˜† Hmm you will find out soon if he has or not πŸ˜‰. Maybe he was heart broken maybe not. πŸ˜› Lol I know when I imagined Viren's expression even I couldn't stop laughing πŸ˜† Yes Rhishikesh πŸ˜‰ I know yaar will try to do longer parts but first you should as well πŸ˜†. Aap ka hukm sar aankhon par πŸ˜‰. Thanks yaar. πŸ˜ƒ Will update soon. 😊

Tina

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