SS- Betaabi- DISCONTINUED!!NOTE PG 18 - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
please cont soon and pmme wen u update
Posted: 11 years ago
thank you everyone for all your lovely comments. i will update soon and maybe try to update today or tomorrow.

thank you

tina
Posted: 11 years ago
Part 5-

Manvi and Virat were walking ahead with Alisha whilst closely behind them were Jeevika and Viren.

Viren Was looking at jeevika. She had only gone for a night and he missed her dearly. Alisha was just an excuse but not that he didn't miss his daughter as well.

Viren – I missed you

Jeevika gave him a straight smile.

Jeevika- I missed you too but not that much!

Viren raised his eyebrows at her.

Viren- Oh really! And my I ask why?

Jeevika – We were having too much fun!

Viren pouted

Viren- Without me?

She nodded.

Jeevika- of course without you! Anyways did you not miss Alisha?

Viren- of course I did what kind of a question is that?

Jeevika- then what are you doing here go and spend time with her!

Viren looked at her amused

Viren – hello! Madam , why are you so angry!

Jeevika- Just!

She tried to walk ahead but viren pulled her back

Viren- not so fast! Why are YOU angry, aren't I supposed to be the one being angry at you!

Jeevika looked at him shocked

Jeevika- why are you angry at me?

Viren- oh wow madam bhul gayi! You were the one who left without my permission and top it all of you left without telling me!

Jeevika looked down

Jeevika- sorry!

Viren- Sorry, sirf only sorry! I deserve more than that

Jeevika looked at him confused.

He was smirking looking at her confusion.

Jeevika opened her mouth to ask but stopped as Manvi and Virat came to them alone no sign of Alisha!

Jeevika- Manvi , Alisha kahan hai?

Virat- Bhabhi she went to sleep, so we called dabbu to take her home.

Jeevika smiled and thanked him.

Manvi noticed a chaatwala and jumped in delight.

All of them looked at her amused

Manvi- di chaatwala , chalo nah , I'm really hungry!

Virat- Sherni kuch bhi kar sakti hain par bhuki nahi reh sakti.

Manvi glared at him and turned towards Jeevika again.

Manvi- di, chalo nah please

Viren spoke before Jeevika could

Viren- Manvi , come on! Even I want to taste it

They started walking towards the chaatwala when Jeevika recognised someone standing there. Someone she knew very well.

Jeevika stopped walking.

Manvi, Virat and Viren realised she was not with them so they turned around and looked at confused.

Manvi- come on di,

Jeevika- nahi!

Viren- kyun?

Jeevika looked at that person again nervously.

Jeevika- because I don't want to!

Manvi noticed something was wrong and looked in the direction Jeevika kept looking in.

Manvi then saw HIM!

She looked at her di and laughed

Whilst Virat and Viren looked at her shocked

Manvi- di, is that why you don't want to go

Jeevika looked where manvi was looking and nodded

Jeevika- haan!

Virat- what's going on? And why are you laughing so much!

Manvi- di , ab toh we have to go !

Manvi grabbed Jeevika's hand dragged her along ignoring her protest!

Viren- koi please bataye ga whats going on?

Manvi – abhi pata chal jaye gah jiju!

They went and stood in front of the person.

Viren and Virat were shocked and confused at the same time.


Sorry for the late update!
Posted: 11 years ago
hahahaha tinuuu!! m d first oneee!! LOL 
lovedd itt!! uthao na alisha ko sulati rehtii ho!!
chalo koi ni!! and whis d persona!?πŸ˜†
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by kanishkakaran


hahahaha tinuuu!! m d first oneee!! LOL 
lovedd itt!! uthao na alisha ko sulati rehtii ho!!
chalo koi ni!! and whis d persona!?πŸ˜†


hehe meri behna shes only 5 months what do u expect  her to do! n as for the person just wait for the next one and this time i willl save it!! πŸ˜†
Posted: 11 years ago
Im second yayyy plz pm me and tell me wen ur updating
Posted: 11 years ago
Plz continue soon..n do pm me wen ever u update..
Posted: 11 years ago
Good update😊
Continue soon..
Posted: 11 years ago
who is the mystery person interesting brilliant as always
Posted: 11 years ago
please continue asap i love it and love virika

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