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The Picture Perfect Postcard (Page 3)

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mru_bee

Lovely verse, An. Star  It creates such a lovely visual, especially since I am few hours away from watching it.

He has began his long journey,
Holding on tightly to the hanky.
He knows he has no way out
He has to follow his heart, no doubt.

She has no clue to the sun that shines
She is yet to break out of her confines
But a day will come when the *musibeet*
Will be the one, who will trigger her *heartbeat*

-- Mru



WOW, beautiful rhyming lines! SmileYou've beautifully summed up two journeys. Did you see the episode?




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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Newdime




Aahat darwaje pe hui..paya use khada...
Najre jab woh mili...
Dil se sukoon ki aah nikli...
Ankhone jub thama dil ka haat...
Sanso mai aai gehri aas
Bani phir ankhe dil ka saaz...
Num thi ankhe sunkar dil ka haal...
Na kuch bol agaye...mujko ehsaas hai kiya hai tera haal.
Badaah kar agay apna haat...diya phir apna mujeh saath.
Na bole tum, na maine kuch kaha...phir bhi humne samjhi ek doosre ki awaaj.




The lines are sheer beauty -- meaningful and lyrical. Thank you for writing and posting it. Do write and post more often Smile


Edited by an12345678 - 06 April 2012 at 8:14am

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Thank You Everyone for liking the post. Smile

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by an12345678

Originally posted by Newdime




Aahat darwaje pe hui..paya use khada...
Najre jab woh mili...
Dil se sukoon ki aah nikli...
Ankhone jub thama dil ka haat...
Sanso mai aai gehri aas
Bani phir ankhe dil ka saaz...
Num thi ankhe sunkar dil ka haal...
Na kuch bol agaye...mujko ehsaas hai kiya hai tera haal.
Badaah kar agay apna haat...diya phir apna mujeh saath.
Na bole tum, na maine kuch kaha...phir bhi humne samjhi ek doosre ki awaaj.




The lines are sheer beauty -- meaningful and lyrical. Thank you writing and posting it. Do most more often Smile


Thank you for the praise Embarrassed...I dont do this more often..its a fluke that i get inspired and the words form the lines.

...I got inspired by ur lines  and  Mrus...and it flowed with nonstop and hence the creation of this lines. 

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Newdine: Do it more often now Smile

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by an12345678



WOW, beautiful rhyming lines! SmileYou've beautifully summed up two journeys. Did you see the episode?






I did see the episode in the night. Your words described the scene perfectly. It was well acted by both. Mohan's expressions were the best. I really feel for that character, whether he is fussing over getting back the hanky or empathizing with Megha.

But I just couldn't help but think if only they had set up the scenes leading up to this moment, more realistically. The whole track was so contrived that the effect when Megha finally realizes her folly was lessened for me. It was a powerful moment for Megha. Just I couldn't enjoy it as much as I would have liked.

But NBT does give some picture perfect postcard moments like these. And that will keep me happy for a while. I do hope they give some convincing buildup to such beautiful moment though. Strictly speaking from my pov.

And I hope we get more such moments that inspire such beautiful writing for you Big smile

-- Mru

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Lovely lines, AnClap and Mru too (despite her disappointment with the show and episodeLOL)


It's interesting that two of my fav. MM scenes so far have been about them sitting on the floor together...one was in the lift episode towards the end when they are sitting and eating, the jam moment and finally the 'pyar maanga hai tumhi se' moment.

And in this episode we had this picture perfect postcard as you put it :-)


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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
awesome lines an , mru and newdimeStar ..i really hope more from you guys ..perfectSmile


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