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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Okay I love love the title...love the song Everytime we touch by Cascade...my all time fav!!!Big smile So seriously was even more excited for the update lol! LOL!
 
Rhea God seriously cant get over her...love how strong she is!!! Love the whole family..Ranbir too...n thanks for clarifying all the relations!! N the dadi, Khushi scene was just to sweet!! Love dadi doin her braid n Khushi bein able to talk about Arnuu to dadi..seriously these type of relationships are very few now a days..so love!!! Smile
 
N haha God Rhea harrased Khushi about clothes like my cousins do lol ...dipstick lmao havent heard that forever ...love how Aman silently left the two girls lol!!LOL
 
Ufff Arnav ur already handsome dont need to do anythin else Embarrassed lol...he seriously eventhough he wont say this... is tryin to look best for Khushi...n aww the bro sis moment was to die for...come on Anji see what your bro is goin through already!!Wink
 
Okay can this get any more romantic...the dori haye Embarrassed..okay Ill shut up before you KILL me with more romance..which I dont mind at all Wink...Ill come back just to read your story lol LOL OMG I died Arnav touchin Khushi like this Embarrassed..love how he automatically got drawn to her...n him remembering about the past...aww they are to bloody cute...n uff Khushi slow your roll!! LOL OMG jeezzz I would have freaked out if someone came up to me n said that it wasnt them that touched me Shocked...Arnav stayin away frome Khushi ...hmmm...how will you enjoy when Khushi is a stubborn sherni n she will have your undivided attention wether you like it or not!!Wink We will see!! *evil laugh* lol!!LOL
 
Aliya superb update Clap...thank you for the PM...seriously cant waite for the next update!! Now how am I suppose to go to sleep!!??!!! Hmmm...I think Ill listen to Everytime we touch!! Lol!LOL


Edited by Banginbengali - 25 April 2012 at 8:24pm

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 12:17am | IP Logged
I loved the update. It was amazing. I can't wait to see what Rhea and ranbir have planned. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 12:37am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Hey dear
Love the update to the core
I really want to know ki Reha and Ranbir kya karne wale haiTongue
Love ArHi moment
Do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

PS: Love the title of next chapter...Want to read moreEmbarrassed

Lots of Love
Geet


Edited by sweetdesire - 26 April 2012 at 1:08am

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Banginbengali

Okay I love love the title...love the song Everytime we touch by Cascade...my all time fav!!!Big smile So seriously was even more excited for the update lol! LOL!
 
Rhea God seriously cant get over her...love how strong she is!!! Love the whole family..Ranbir too...n thanks for clarifying all the relations!! N the dadi, Khushi scene was just to sweet!! Love dadi doin her braid n Khushi bein able to talk about Arnuu to dadi..seriously these type of relationships are very few now a days..so love!!! Smile
 
N haha God Rhea harrased Khushi about clothes like my cousins do lol ...dipstick lmao havent heard that forever ...love how Aman silently left the two girls lol!!LOL
 
Ufff Arnav ur already handsome dont need to do anythin else Embarrassed lol...he seriously eventhough he wont say this... is tryin to look best for Khushi...n aww the bro sis moment was to die for...come on Anji see what your bro is goin through already!!Wink
 
Okay can this get any more romantic...the dori haye Embarrassed..okay Ill shut up before you KILL me with more romance..which I dont mind at all Wink...Ill come back just to read your story lol LOL OMG I died Arnav touchin Khushi like this Embarrassed..love how he automatically got drawn to her...n him remembering about the past...aww they are to bloody cute...n uff Khushi slow your roll!! LOL OMG jeezzz I would have freaked out if someone came up to me n said that it wasnt them that touched me Shocked...Arnav stayin away frome Khushi ...hmmm...how will you enjoy when Khushi is a stubborn sherni n she will have your undivided attention wether you like it or not!!Wink We will see!! *evil laugh* lol!!LOL
 
Aliya superb update Clap...thank you for the PM...seriously cant waite for the next update!! Now how am I suppose to go to sleep!!??!!! Hmmm...I think Ill listen to Everytime we touch!! Lol!LOL

I love Cascada! Have you heard the song Summer of Love? I probz will use that as a title for the near future ;) 
Aww, I love Dadi as well! She's going to play a big role soon. Haha! More romantic bits to come but not for a while ;) 
Khushi is way to stubborn! And you will find out how much in the next chapter

Thanks for lamba amazing comment! 

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DarkDove

RES!
sorry for not commenting on part 4 :(

Hey Vita!!!

I loved chapter 4! 
The way how the met was wow!!!! Omg, he did not recognize her :( 
Awn! Khushi cried for him!!! Stupid arnav! 

Chapter 5!!!

He tied her dorys and she didn't even knew that it was him!?? I would have screamed too if someone who i thought was tiding my dorys together but finding out it was not that person!! I would have thought that it would be a ghost! LOL

He is attracted to her!!! Embarrassed

And your writing style, it leaves me breathless! 

xxx

Boo! Hello! It's fine as long as you comment i'm happy :D 

I know Arnav is naughty right for not recognising her, I blame Amilia for distracting. She was too busy complaining to Rhea she didn't recognise him! 

Awww making me blush! Thanks soo much!

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aveiro

Originally posted by DarkDove

RES!
sorry for not commenting on part 4 :(

Hey Vita!!!

I loved chapter 4! 
The way how the met was wow!!!! Omg, he did not recognize her :( 
Awn! Khushi cried for him!!! Stupid arnav! 

Chapter 5!!!

He tied her dorys and she didn't even knew that it was him!?? I would have screamed too if someone who i thought was tiding my dorys together but finding out it was not that person!! I would have thought that it would be a ghost! LOL

He is attracted to her!!! Embarrassed

And your writing style, it leaves me breathless! 

xxx

Boo! Hello! It's fine as long as you comment i'm happy :D  *Screams wehn vita boos haffieLOL* Hi! you scared me! aawn! your happy as long as i comment! wowie, me feeling honored! 

I know Arnav is naughty right for not recognising her, I blame Amilia for distracting.Ah! Amilia Embarrassed *blush* i don't like her!LOL  she is so annoying and the typical dumb gf! She was too busy complaining to Rhea she didn't recognise him!  Crappy potatoes! she really was too busy! 

Awww making me blush! Thanks soo much! Your welcome! Here i have an surprise for you! let me treat you for lunch for giving us such an beautiful update! 

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DarkDove

Originally posted by Aveiro

Originally posted by DarkDove

RES!
sorry for not commenting on part 4 :(

Hey Vita!!!

I loved chapter 4! 
The way how the met was wow!!!! Omg, he did not recognize her :( 
Awn! Khushi cried for him!!! Stupid arnav! 

Chapter 5!!!

He tied her dorys and she didn't even knew that it was him!?? I would have screamed too if someone who i thought was tiding my dorys together but finding out it was not that person!! I would have thought that it would be a ghost! LOL

He is attracted to her!!! Embarrassed

And your writing style, it leaves me breathless! 

xxx

Boo! Hello! It's fine as long as you comment i'm happy :D  *Screams wehn vita boos haffieLOL* Hi! you scared me! aawn! your happy as long as i comment! wowie, me feeling honored! 

I know Arnav is naughty right for not recognising her, I blame Amilia for distracting.Ah! Amilia Embarrassed *blush* i don't like her!LOL  she is so annoying and the typical dumb gf! She was too busy complaining to Rhea she didn't recognise him!  Crappy potatoes! she really was too busy! 

Awww making me blush! Thanks soo much! Your welcome! Here i have an surprise for you! let me treat you for lunch for giving us such an beautiful update! 

Are we seriously going out for lunch? *Does Happy Dance* Haha! Someone never treated me! the meaniee!

You don't like Amilia! You don't like yourself ;) eh? 

It was you who encouraged me to write this story so it's good to feel honoured 

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