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OS: I Can't Believe I Fell in Love With You! (Page 5)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
That was a really heart-warming piece. Just amazing!

Please pm me your future work. ThanksSmile

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Pour it out khushi, poor it all out.. How I wish u would actually.. but would arnav actually believe it? Anyways, yours did.. and Im glad he did :p I loooved the way she just stood there, shocked and said: i cant believe I fell in love with you. And then she goes all ASR, grabs him by the shoulders no less and screams her words into his face! YEEH power! i love loved this OS!!

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
A wonderful OS! I loved your way with the words, especially when bringing out both Arnav and Khushi's innermost thoughts and feelings. Keep it up! Smile

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
Oh, I'm in tears! literally in tears and now I have to explain why to my mum :s

This is just beautiful...I hope the CVs read this and it knocks some much needed sense into their heads...I mean I went from wanting to strangle Arnav to punching Shyam in the eye and to hugging poor Khushi...the pain was so real I can feel it in me...beautifully done :) And the resolution ten times more beautiful



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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Wow. Smita, you raise my hopes for the show.
 
This is EXACTLY whats needed!! Khushi confessing, and then, expressing every bit of herself, until Arnav realizes, and comes out and joins her under the stars...awwwh!
 
Im gunna hug you for writing something like this !Hug and can we really hope one of the cvs or writers of the show stumble upon this, and realize that such a thing in the show would be so sensational, so beautiful, and just so perfect and needed!! And, no doubt Barun and Sanaya would do justice and beyond to such a scene like this!!!
 
BEAUTIFUL OS!!
 
- Dee

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
hey i jst loved it

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Arrr what a beautifull OS onlinif it wasreal loved it plase dk continue and could u please pm me
Wen u update

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
Really good! Great job!

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