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OS: I Can't Believe I Fell in Love With You! (Page 3)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
So cute!!

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedSo cute

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
very well written..I think this is going to happen tomorrow except for last part..they would drag it till IPL semi / final for Kushi to forgive him :-)  But rest of the things, I have a strong feeling will happen tomorrow..and finally Kushi might pass out or move to pool side..either is possible..

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
beautifully written os...absolutely loved it!

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written...loved it Clap  Clap
 
 

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Your words moved me. I loved the emotions being played out. In a normal scenario I would have expected Arnav to be more confused when she says those words to him. But you cleared it upfront itself. That he was feeling betrayed that she would love someone else. Her words cleared that doubt in him and hence his immediate remorse.

Even Khushi's words were not how I expected it. I always had imagined in my mind that she would confess her love in anger, screaming at him (Thanks to the spoilers). But this was more of a muted anger and defeated confession.. But the feeling was very intense.

Whatever you have written, its brilliant! Loved it! :)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
                                            I m speechless...I mean it's just soo mindblowing...i totally loved it...Amazing work love...Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
awesome.. khushi's outburst is so beautifully written.. loved it..

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