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New FF:TERI MERI PREM KAHANI-part-52(complete)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
                                Yadein rahe jate hei...
The last rain is just ready to departure from the station, at that moment a young boy coming very hurriedly from the over-bridge, The train is then already started moving so the boy running with the train. At that time one man give his hand to the boy and he hold the hand and jumping to the compartment.The man asked the boy angrily-----
-kar kya rahe ho? pagol ho kya? aise koi train pakadta hei?
-sorry sir.
-tum ladke bhi na itni jaldi kya hei tumhe? theek hei tumhara sit number kya hei?
-14A
-Are ei to hamara saath hei.
The man take the boy to their compartment; their were two girls and four boys sitting in there and practicing some music, all the boya and girls stopped as they saw the unknown boy. The man tell the boy-----
-wo hei tumhara sit
-Thank you.
One girl of the group asked him----
-tum kaha ja rahe ho?
-Dehradun
-hum Mumbai ja rahe hei; actually kya hei ki aj Mumbai mei ek bahut bada buisnessman ka bete ki shaadi hei to unhone hume gana gane ke liye hire kiya hei to actually we are a song band. Can I ask you a question?
-ha
-tum kaha se a rahe ho? matlab tumhe dekh kar lag raha hei ki tum bahut thake hue ho, isliye. . .
-jail se
-kya?
All them were shocked.so they stopped interaction with him. After some time the boy said the girl-----
-mujhe tumhara guitar de sakte ho?
-kyun? the girl asked with wonder.
One boy of their team said the girl----
-de do.
The girl gave the guitar to the boy, the boy started playing the guitar. A beautiful tune with so much melody and melancholy which made them surprised. The boy closed his eyes, a glimpse of a face appears infront of his eyes, ek phool si chehera, uski khoobsurat muskaan, uski swapno se bhari ankhe, the boy opened his eyes; a droplets of tears fell from his eye.The boy stopped playing guitar. The girl asked-----
-kya hua tha? tumhe dekh kar to nehi lagta ki tum koi gunah kar sakte ho, phir tum jail kyun gaye the?Itne acche guitar bajate ho tum, bolona kya hua tha tumhara saath?
-galad! sab galad , meri taqder meri zindegi sab kuch jhut hei sab.mein gunhegaar hu , ek bahot bada criminal hu, kisike sapne, ashayein, aur pyar ko mein mar dala ,kisi pyar karnewale ki ankho mei jab nafraat bhar jata hei , tab wo nazre anjaan ho jata hei,uski ankho mei bhi mei  wahi dekha tha, wahi nafraat aur wahi darr jo ek criminal ke liye hi dikhta hei.

-kiski ankho mei? kaun hei wo?

-meri zindegi.
The boy started his story.

                                     kriti



Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 03 October 2012 at 11:57am

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
please do not post them separately... do post them all in a single thread :)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
great start...rely emotional...




plsss continueee



and do pm me



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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
hey pls pm me wen u update.. it's a nice story..

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
Great start pls do pm ur next updates
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
great start - pls post this part 1 in the thread wherein u had introduced the characters - pls make all the updates in a single thread with an index so that it will be easy for us to re-read it
 
Guys, since the writer is a new comer, I thought of making an index:
 
Part 1 - Yaadein Rahe Jate Hai - Page 1
Part 2 - Kahi to Hoga Woh - Page 1
Part 3 - Koi Armaan Hei Jo Khaas & Part 4 - Dil ke paas ... Milenge Koi - Page 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2919161&TPN=2
PArt 6 - Is Dil Ke Paas Aa...IS Dil ke Raas te & Part 7- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2919161&TPN=5
Part 9 - Shamil Hei Tu Rooh Mei ...Tu hi meri zindagi -  & PArt 10 - Jaha Hei Teri Baahein...Mera Sahil WAhi - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2919161&TPN=7
Part 13 - Naata Samjhe Na... Ye Dil Mera - Page 10 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2919161&TPN=10
Part 14 - Pal Pal Mein Poori ...Sadhiyan Bitayen - Page 11 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2919161&TPN=11
Part 15 - Iss Pyaar Ko Mein...kya naam dooon & PArt 16 - Dil Kya Kare . . . Terie Bina
- Page 13 -  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2919161&TPN=13
 Part 17 - Ajeeb Dastaan Hei Ye... - Page 14 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2919161&TPN=14
 


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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 1:44am | IP Logged
'KAHI TO HOGA WOH'
'Good morning dadi'----Shefali came with a big smile in her face. Today is a very important day for Arohi. Dadi asked----
-Morning Shefali!tum akeli tumhari dost kaha hei?
-pata nehi dadi!  Arohi kaha chali gayi, ehi to thi lagta hei ki upar chali gayi.
-mein samaj gayi, aj itni badi din hei uski zindegi ki wo aaj job join kar rahi hei, isliye shayed purani yadein...aj agar uski ma-baap hota...
-dadi mein dekh kar ati hu
  Shefali was ran and came to Arohi's room. There was no one. Shefali was surprised.
-kaha chali gayi! ye ladki bhi na.
 Shefali came to the roof. this place is one of the favorite place of Arohi. Whenever she feels sad she came to the roof. Shefali came and started searching.
   "papa apko pata hei aj kya hei, aj apki beti naukri join kar rahi hei, ha kaam bahot chota hei, lekin aap hi to kehte the ki profession passion ho na ho lekin passion profession banhi jata hei. aur apko to pata hei ki mujhe books padna kitni pasand hei.aapko yaad hei papa. meri 8 saal ki birthday mei aap mujhe ek book gift diye the, mein abhi tak wo kitab sambhal kar rakhi hei, kash mein aap dono ko bhi...mein bahot buri hu papa, isiliye aap dono mujhe chod kar chale gaye na...
 her voice is chocking, she is weeping.
Shefali was stood behind her and heard everything. Now she came and tell Arohi---
-tu eha akeli kya kar rahi hei?
-aaj papa aur mom ki bahot yaad a rahi hei.
-dekh is baat ke liye na mujhe rona chahiye tujhe nehi
-kyun?
-kam se kam tu apni ma-baap ko dekhi hei, kuch yadein ek tasbeer hei unlogon ki teri paas aur mein to aap ma-baap ko dekhai nehi. unlucky to mein hu
-tu phir se shuru ho gayi Shefali hum koi nehi hei teri?
-tum dono hi to meri sab kuch.
-tu mujhe kabhi rone nehi degi na?
-wo to sochni padegi. ab neeche chal.kya hei ki jab mei sentimental ho jati hu tab mujhe bahot bhookh lagti hei arohi.neeche chal na.
-ok chal.
They came to the dinning hall, dadi said---
-arohi breakfast karlo aj tumhari joining hei.
After breakfast ; they were ready to outing.dadi said----
-dekho mein hamesha chahati thi ki tum bahot acchi ek inssan bano lekin ek baat yaad rakhna umar ki aage nehi, umar ki saath badna chahiye. itni aage mat baad jao ki zindegi ki maja na le sako.
-kabhi kabhi halat insaan ko badal deta hei , chalti hu.
shefali said---
-mein sambhal lungi dadi tension mat lo.
They were walking in the road. Arohi said---
-tujhe pata hei kal mei ohi dhun phirse swapno mei suni
-phir se, dekh arohi aisi kuch bhi nehi hei, are suni hogi whats the big deal
-tu samaj nehi rahi hei, ek aisi dhun jise mei incompletely janti hu, iski matlab kya hei?
-iski matlab hei ki koi hei jise ye dhunki aage ki part bhi pata hei
-aur kaun hei woh?
-woh mujhe nehi pata
-dekh, ye real-life hei, koi movie to hei nehi, ki ek prince charming ayega, ek dhun sunaega aur mujhe pyaar karne lagega...
-oi dramebaazi band kar
-mei nahi tu kar rahi hei dramebaazi.
-tu jo bhi bol Arohi mujhe poora yaken hei ki koi to hei kahi to hei aur woh tujhe jarur milenge
-ho gaya chaal
Arohi feels irritated an go away. 

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
good update kriti - that was a pretty quick one -
good to see that u are continuing in the same thread - good start - seems to be a very interesting story - pls continue
 
 

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