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Wow congrats for new thread!

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congrats on the new thread
waiting for the update...
update soon
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waiting for the update

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OsheenDGr8 Goldie

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KHUMAARI- Beauty With The Beast
PART- 23

Why angry dear??
Poor Maan nobody curses him as much u doBig smile

Updating this part in two posts click LIKE button at the end of 2nd post onlySmile

Maan scooped her shiverring form, shrugging the guilt off his mind. It was she who forced him to take such a step but somewhere deep he knew who actually was at fault.

He laid her on his bed. Once inside the room, her previously ice cold body now started gaining temperature n he was sure she was catching fever.

At this time there won't be any doctor available so there was'nt much he could have done.

As full moon played hide n seek with the clouds in the sky devoid of any stars, wind blew rapidly making faint sounds by hitting trees.

Maan sat on the edge of bed, beside her. He touched her forehead n it was burning but that did'nt bother him much.

He traced his fingers down her soft cheek. Her eyes were closed n for a change there was no fear or repulsion from her side.

Her lips had attained a bluish shade due cold. Letting his thumb linger over them he felt the dryness of her otherwise soft petals.

He felt a sudden urge to moisten them. Without giving a second thought he leaned down, allowing her scent to bewitch him, n slowly licked her lips wetting them then pulled back.

The small contact quickened his pulse. Her taste was entrapping n he could'nt have controlled even if he wanted to.

Usko Aisi halat me dekh kar saansein jaisi ruk gayi
Us pal use dekh mano meri zindagi hi tham gayi...

Na jane ye kya hai jo mujhe uski or khichta hai
Kabhi Jo mehsus na kiya wo mehsus kyu hota hai...

Is Halat me bhi uski Khubsurti chand se kam nahi hai
Use aisa dekh kar khud ko ab rokna mumkin nahi hai...

Uski Saanson me meri saanson ko bharna chahta hu
Bahon me leker uske badan ki khushbu me khona chahta hu...

Ye jo jism me aag lagi hai use bas bujhana chahta hu
Par Dil ke ek kone me uske darr se darta hu...

Darta hu mai apne inn jazbaat se
Khudko kahi kho na du mai usme, darta hu iss khumaar se...

-By mishtiritu (Rituja)

Removing all thoughts he filled her mouth with a scorching kiss, pressing his hand on either side of her. Everything else blurred when he felt her shaking hands circling around his neck, pulling him closer.

Geet felt something warm over her lips then it left her. She felt the same touch again but this time it stayed there.

The lips pressing against her were demanding alomost like trying to draw something out of her, yet the feel was warm n comforting. She was feeling hell cold n wanted the warmth more. So she ended up holding him tight n pulling him closer, unconciously.

She responded to his kiss with equal intensity while Maan settled himself completely over her since she was so ready.

As her soft mounts met his firm chest, he realised that the most pleasurable thing on earth was she below him.

He left her breathless his lower lips still touching her upper one. He was still not satisfied so took her lips once again commencing the kiss once more.

Maan moved his hands below her waist supporting her to arc towards him not leaving a nook untouched. He entangled his legs with hers completly entrapping her.

Geet wildly moved her hands on his back, trying to gain his heat same time charging his each cell.

She pushed n came over him, not knowing what was she doing. She tried to open her eyes but they were drowsy n heavy so she just did what her body at the moment demanded.

She placed her trembling lips on his neck n Maan was surprised by this Geet. He let her proceed, enjoying her audacity.

Rubbing her lips on his neck she snapped open his shirt buttons making his torso bare.

She hugged him tight absorbing the heat emitting from him. She placed her cheek on his chest moving it slowly. In the process she unknowingly shifted a bit down pressing him right on the spot.

Maan groaned n turned her below him. He rubbed his stubble against her cheek making her moan.


That sensuous sound added to his hunger unleashing the beast in him. He harshly pressed his erection between her legs, to calm himself a little, earning a gasp from her mouth.

But it only increased his want to new heights. He madly kissed her neck, nipping n bitting her skin.


Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 07 April 2012 at 12:47pm

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He was playing with her, teasing her senses. She tried to embrace him desperatly but he pinned her hands, locking his fingers with hers.

He continued his assault going down n down untill his lips found the barrier between them n her skin.

When she opened his shirt, why can't he?? With the thought he tore her kurti with his teeth. Leaving her hands for a sec he removed her kurti completely, throwing it into a far cornor.

He relished the taste of her skin on his tongue, it was like honey dulcet n sugery but not enough.

He clenched her bra, she made him bare n now was her turn. He roughly pulled off her bra ripping the hooks.

The view of her assets was exquisite. His desires were flaming probing him to break every limit, cross all boundaries.

He left her hands to feel his fantasy that had today come alive. It was the first time he was getting the chance to fondle them in real.

He slightly glided his fingers over her mounts slighty touching her buds making them beg for his love. He looked at her enchanting face illuminated by moonlight.

Inspite of her state, a rosy hue crept her cheeks. He placed a wet kiss on her cheek before taking her hungry buds into his more hungry mouth. She hissed with pleasure, throwing her towards him simultaneously pressing him more to herself. Her fingers moved inside his hairs, caressing his scalp.

Their hands moved over each other, desperately while he made love to her breasts.

He grabbed her salwar to pull it down when his eyes drifted to her squinted ones, n he left her abruptly.

He was panting heavily n so was she. The temptation was so empowering that for once he thought to grab her again n take her there n then. But somthing was stopping him. Conscience? He did'nt knew because it never called to him before.

Its not fun when she not concious. He tried to reason, but it was difficult n almost impossible to control when she was lying like this on his bed.

He took his shirt n made her wear it. While closing each button his mind tried to betray him. Only he knew how he controlled himself n even he did'nt knew why he controlled himself.

Finished with world's most difficult task he again laid down on bed. Unlike previous nights this time Geet snuggled closer to him as no blanket cold suppliment the warmth possessed by him.

Eventually fighting the tornado of emotions, he gave in n slept off in her arms.

CREDIT(S): The lovely poem by mishtiritu...
Luv ya dear n no thnx since u don't like itHeart


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love2_soma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
chalo maam ko kuch toh akkal hai...geet k behonshi ka faida nehi uthaya...liking dis maan...

awesome n mindblowing update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...


Edited by love2_soma - 07 April 2012 at 12:30pm

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Craziest_MG IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
oohh...that was hawwttt.
Beast controlled himself...omg...what a surprise.
Shruthe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
As always it was an awesome update...

Loved it!!!!

It was a shocking surprise to see this side of the beast MSK...

Thanks for updating... just cant wait for the next update... to know Geet's reaction... 

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