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mg ff: distance brings us closer#3 pt 47 pg 117 (Page 89)

Mishti13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
lovely update
aww maan in pain he hurts himself
geet in pain too seeing maan in pain
ahh sid and swetha hate them
thanks for pm
cont. soon
sorry for late comment 

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sstylishdoll Goldie

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
Sid or shweeta toh gaye

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aliceyue27 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged

continue sooon..,,,

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Ash1991 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
amazing update...

lvd it...

update soon wanna see wt has maan planned fr sid n swetha...

maanvi is so cute...

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janu_2006 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
gr8 part..
thanks for pm dear..

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Niharika.Nair IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Sorry for the late replay...
It was  so good, the family bonding of maa-dada and baby!! I feel really bad for seeing the pain Maaneet undergoingCry hope the culprits will soon be punishedAngry

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minnie_tweetie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 1:59am | IP Logged
beautiful updates jyothi
right from part 42
sorry was out of town and then fell ill...

u wrote everything beautifully dear...
sorry for short comments yar
now waiting for maaneet moments eagerly

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Cherishh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Hi Jyothi,

Finally, I could make it here with some time at handBig smile.

Coming to the update, it really was awesome, just mind-blowing...and the ice on the cake is a very long update...muahhh...muuuaaahhhHugHugHugHug...just loved every bit of it...finally the much awaited part I wanted to read and just enjoyed it to the core.

Just can't see Maan so angry and hurting himself...aiyoo...itna bhi humare Maan ko mat rulao Jyothi...just can't see him like that...yeah..yeah..I know that was the emotion that needed to be expressed importantly, but what to do can't take in...but really loved the way you have written his heart out...the Maneet moments were really nice and romantic in a very emotional way and happy to see Geet though scared back to being herself with Maan...arree loved he is angry on Sid and Swetha as we will get to see the real MSK back into much I was smissing itDay Dreaming...i just want him to eat them alive.

The thing which I loved the most is the bonding between the father and daughter (Maan-Maanvi)...though they have apart for long and together for a very short period the bond between them is just so lovely...awww...poor baby how she was crying seeing Maan was so heart-touching...and the way Maanvi is...u know..just like U deserve this look...was very dominating...the MSK really can't stop falling for his two princesses in his life...muahh to them for bringing so much of happiness in his life...and Maanvi is really papa ki beti...dekho toh sahi how she is angry she is on her mother...she really is a cutie pie..muaahh..

That really was indeed an awesome update dear...and the precap ufff lagta hai ab sab Maan ko gussa karenge..can't wait our choti MSK ke looksWink and woowww more Maneet moments...ahem..ahem..bring it on real soon awaiting more than ever eagerly.

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