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mg ff: distance brings us closer#3 pt 47 pg 117 (Page 54)

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anu13

A most awaited update Jyothi...another great update of DBUC.

It really was a very emotional update.

As you said, yes it really is a very sad and a happy moment/day of Khurana's and Handa's...what all they might have planned for Maneet's weeding...but really the fate played a very bad and a big role in their lives.

So finally my doubt has been cleared about Anand's accident thru this update.

This Sid...Angry...I am hating him more and more with each update.  What an evil plan to get Geet into his life...but how come he forgot that Vicky knows about it too...as he is the one who beat the hell out of him. 

I just wonder how he is gonna survive his life with Maan knowing everything about him now..he surely is gonna turn into a dead meatDead...me gonna enjoy it a lot as I have been saying it in the last couple of my comments...as I love to see the great MSK back in action.

So Geet did sense something wrong..but couldn't figure it outCry.

It really has been a tough phase in Geet's life...poor girl...what not she was going thru all aloneCryCry and it would have been much more worse if Maan wouldn't have been there for at least sometime with her.

Well, one more thing I wanted to know...so is Anand at the same time revealing the truth to everyone..I mean other members of the family...while Geet telling this to Maan...well you might reveal it in your upcoming parts...but just was eager to know it.

What an Amazing way to build up the story dear.  Just loved every bit of it.

Looking forward for the next part.

Most importantly, thanks a ton for such a lengthy update with 2 of the 3 revelations that you promised in your precap...thought you might give just 1 update...but woowww...double damaka...these 2 updates are definitely damakas only...as it clearly all our thoughts about the past...waiting for your next part dear...keep coming...hoping even it will be a lengthy one and much more awesome one with your brilliant writing.

Hey Anu,

thanku thanku so much dear... awww loved ur comment...
yes its very sad and happy day both...
yes vicky knows about sid and he too remember sid... i will tell u that in next half of the update...
i am so so happy that u liked the update...
aww kissy to u too... actually me going to shopping with mom... holidays haina ji...
will update both after coming back... Big smile

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anu13

Hey Jyothi...

Thanks for the update dear.

So you finally realized the seriousness of our dhamkis...good girl.

I know you came to know that if you wouldn't have updated...then we really would have handed you over to our MSK to look after you for not listening to usLOL.

I know you have been busy with your exams...but what to do, now knowing that you finished with your exams, how could we not give you a dhamkiLOL.

Well...jokes apart...thanks a lot for considering our requests dear.

It really is becoming now a very interesting day as you gonna even update D&L...sweet..sweet...kissy to your hands...and hats off to your brain for thinking and finally deciding to give us beautiful and lengthy updates of your FFsROFLROFLROFL

Me now all waiting to read your next update of DBUC and D&L...keep coming...I wouldn't mind even moreWink

hahaha what to do when u guys are giving me such dhamki's... LOLLOL
but i love ur dhamki's too... Embarrassed
acha u dont mind by my hands are paining and mom is scolding me... Cry
but dont worry anything for u... Big smile

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shifat

it was so emotional update...n i hate dis sid so much...update soon...

yes dear... i too hate sid...
dont worry MSK in action after few updates... Big smile
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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Remya_Pillai

Loved the first half...
So sid did this.. But sid s unaware that vicky noes the truth,rt?
Geet's love for her dad s so serene and limitless...
She not even once questioned her dad's decision..
I think ds day she will cum to noe that sid did this and thus she will leave the house...
I would like to kill sid by myself..Angry

thanku di... Big smile
well u will come to know about vicky in the next half...
yes she sensed something serious so she didnt question anything...
dont worry di...soon MSK will be in action... Big smile

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:38am | IP Logged
mindblowing maan us sid ka aisa bura haal kare anand ki baat sach ho jaye fir use pata chalega ki msk se takkar lene ka kya anjaam hota hai continue soon eagerly waiting for next part
next part is also too good ab main chahti hoon ki sid ko pata chale aisa karne ka anzaam continue soon dear

Edited by sakshi04 - 07 May 2012 at 12:13am

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Awesome part.
So dis way maaneeet gt married.

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
maneet married infront of  geet dad geet dad slipped in coma everyone celebrated her birthday  maneet became one is sid ki to



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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
awsem update maneet married because geet dad condition kill; sid shweta 

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