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mg ff: distance brings us closer#3 pt 47 pg 117 (Page 53)

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by neha5058

omg omg... oye hoye love is in the air..

both blown away in passion and longing for each other...
me<img src="http://images.zaazu.com/img/Heartbeat-animated-animation-heartbeat-smiley-emoticon-000335-large.gif" alt="" /> heart beats are raising...

but kya both jerked suddenly and broke out the moment...me want more..
grrr ye swetha.. me also cop neha... giving accompany to cop mona and cop jyothi...
will boil them 3 times in hot oil... hehehe...
ohhh goooddd...
geet ke father ka accident... haaye ye kya ho gaya... babaji bacha lena unhe...
oops he told them to get married may be bec he get to know about their plan?
oye he was worried for geet's safety.shayad isliye...
chal jo bhi hai tere mind mein hai...
me crying bady for the saddy update...
pls pls...update soon...<img src="http://baleheads.com/Smileys/pray.gif" alt="" />

thanku neha dear... Big smile
acha tum bhi cop ban gayi ho... yaar mona, neha bhi hamare saath hain... chalo hum teeno milkar kuch karte hain...
hai rabba tum dono bilkul besharam hogaye hain... chi chi chi babaji...
acha ji aapko bura laga when jerked away... huh!!!
tum dono kya crying ke competition mein participate kar rahe ho kya.. LOLLOL
update soon i will think of it.. *smirking*
hey neha tumara ss jaldi se update karo then i will update this one... *evil smile*

he he thanku neha di for gvng besharam title..actually iam..he he..thanx for liking my idea..
hey sweetu neha di bhi hai ab hamare hai..chalo us bas***d aur kamini ka band bajathe hai..
U both startd blackmailing sessn again na..jyothi di evil smile n neha di smirking..nw iam gvng dhamki to both of u..u both update fast n fast ur besharam behen wil read happily..lol big smile

mona u r happy... hey babaji... D'ohmy head is spinning... ufff...
tum dono bhi na... main tho achi bachi hu... LOLLOL
hahaha black main session shuru... hey mona this time i wanna include u too...
tum love always wins jaldi updte karo... tab main dbuc closer update karungi... sad dear rose di nahi hain warna di ko bhi... LOLLOL

ha yar missng rose di here..
Chal deal ok..u gve me dbuc i'l gve u love always..i typd half update 3 days back hav to type remaining

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by neha5058

omg omg... oye hoye love is in the air..

both blown away in passion and longing for each other...
me<img src="http://images.zaazu.com/img/Heartbeat-animated-animation-heartbeat-smiley-emoticon-000335-large.gif" alt="" /> heart beats are raising...

but kya both jerked suddenly and broke out the moment...me want more..
grrr ye swetha.. me also cop neha... giving accompany to cop mona and cop jyothi...
will boil them 3 times in hot oil... hehehe...
ohhh goooddd...
geet ke father ka accident... haaye ye kya ho gaya... babaji bacha lena unhe...
oops he told them to get married may be bec he get to know about their plan?
oye he was worried for geet's safety.shayad isliye...
chal jo bhi hai tere mind mein hai...
me crying bady for the saddy update...
pls pls...update soon...<img src="http://baleheads.com/Smileys/pray.gif" alt="" />

thanku neha dear... Big smile
acha tum bhi cop ban gayi ho... yaar mona, neha bhi hamare saath hain... chalo hum teeno milkar kuch karte hain...
hai rabba tum dono bilkul besharam hogaye hain... chi chi chi babaji...
acha ji aapko bura laga when jerked away... huh!!!
tum dono kya crying ke competition mein participate kar rahe ho kya.. LOLLOL
update soon i will think of it.. *smirking*
hey neha tumara ss jaldi se update karo then i will update this one... *evil smile*

he he thanku neha di for gvng besharam title..actually iam..he he..thanx for liking my idea..
hey sweetu neha di bhi hai ab hamare hai..chalo us bas***d aur kamini ka band bajathe hai..
U both startd blackmailing sessn again na..jyothi di evil smile n neha di smirking..nw iam gvng dhamki to both of u..u both update fast n fast ur besharam behen wil read happily..lol big smile

mona u r happy... hey babaji... D'ohmy head is spinning... ufff...
tum dono bhi na... main tho achi bachi hu... LOLLOL
hahaha black main session shuru... hey mona this time i wanna include u too...
tum love always wins jaldi updte karo... tab main dbuc closer update karungi... sad dear rose di nahi hain warna di ko bhi... LOLLOL

ha yar missng rose di here..
Chal deal ok..u gve me dbuc i'l gve u love always..i typd half update 3 days back hav to type remaining

ok deal then.. i will give another update on saturday...
kal tho last exam hain... n tomorrow i have to update L&R

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
 .awesome..

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 2:46am | IP Logged
awesum di...lol..njoyin..it.nd tanz...tanz for de pm..dooo plz...update sooner..i kno ..may 4 iz gonna cum...eagarly waitin...update all...Tongue

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Wonderful updatee

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by neha5058

omg omg... oye hoye love is in the air..

both blown away in passion and longing for each other...
me<img src="http://images.zaazu.com/img/Heartbeat-animated-animation-heartbeat-smiley-emoticon-000335-large.gif" alt="" /> heart beats are raising...

but kya both jerked suddenly and broke out the moment...me want more..
grrr ye swetha.. me also cop neha... giving accompany to cop mona and cop jyothi...
will boil them 3 times in hot oil... hehehe...
ohhh goooddd...
geet ke father ka accident... haaye ye kya ho gaya... babaji bacha lena unhe...
oops he told them to get married may be bec he get to know about their plan?
oye he was worried for geet's safety.shayad isliye...
chal jo bhi hai tere mind mein hai...
me crying bady for the saddy update...
pls pls...update soon...<img src="http://baleheads.com/Smileys/pray.gif" alt="" />

thanku neha dear... Big smile
acha tum bhi cop ban gayi ho... yaar mona, neha bhi hamare saath hain... chalo hum teeno milkar kuch karte hain...
hai rabba tum dono bilkul besharam hogaye hain... chi chi chi babaji...
acha ji aapko bura laga when jerked away... huh!!!
tum dono kya crying ke competition mein participate kar rahe ho kya.. LOLLOL
update soon i will think of it.. *smirking*
hey neha tumara ss jaldi se update karo then i will update this one... *evil smile*

he he thanku neha di for gvng besharam title..actually iam..he he..thanx for liking my idea..
hey sweetu neha di bhi hai ab hamare hai..chalo us bas***d aur kamini ka band bajathe hai..
U both startd blackmailing sessn again na..jyothi di evil smile n neha di smirking..nw iam gvng dhamki to both of u..u both update fast n fast ur besharam behen wil read happily..lol big smile

mona u r happy... hey babaji... D'ohmy head is spinning... ufff...
tum dono bhi na... main tho achi bachi hu... LOLLOL
hahaha black main session shuru... hey mona this time i wanna include u too...
tum love always wins jaldi updte karo... tab main dbuc closer update karungi... sad dear rose di nahi hain warna di ko bhi... LOLLOL

ha yar missng rose di here..
Chal deal ok..u gve me dbuc i'l gve u love always..i typd half update 3 days back hav to type remaining

ok deal then.. i will give another update on saturday...
kal tho last exam hain... n tomorrow i have to update L&R


Originally posted by jyothikrish


u r welcome babu... haan ji mai bhi cop ban gayi... ab mona bani, tum bhi cop bani to mai kaise pichey reh sakti hu... hai na.. jo kaam karenge..teeno milkar sath-2 karenge...
hehehe... abhi besharampanti dekhi kaha hai jyothi tumne.. abhi to dekhni baki hai.. meri frnds se pucho mai kaisi hu.. i mean ol frnds se na ki college frnds se...LOL
han ji bilkul..bhaut bura laga...when he jerked away..ek to bechari ne itni mehnat hai.. window se wo room me aayi to those aur close moments bante the na...par satyanaash... sab khraab ho gaya...wo to participate kar rakha hia.. i am sure mona hi jeetegi..she is crying baby...Wink
ha ha i know how much innocent u r...!!!!
me happy sat ko dbuc milega... ahem ahem...waiting...LOL
chalo exams finish ho jayenge kal..chhutti... hai na..
balle balle... ok dance ho gaya... now we'll get updates...yahhhooo chahe koi mujhe jungli kahe..kehta hai to ji kehta rahe..hum updates ki khushi me nach rahe hai...LOL
kaun sa ss??????????? evil smile... oh ho... mai bhi de sakti hu evil smile...LOL





Originally posted by maneetlover1



hehehe... i know u r pakki wali besharam...LOL
haan  ek dum unique idea hai.. 3 times hi kyo.. 3 times me to unki skin bhi burn nahi hogi... at least 10 times to banta hai na...what say???
hehehe... hum dono ka kya hai..jab dekho hamara black mailing session start ho jata hai... ye to hamari aadat hai but tu kyo bich me ghus rahi hai... now u can't dhamki to us...
dekh tera faida ho raha hai... dhamki hum dono de rahe hai ek dusre ko par update to tujhe bhi milega na...oye besharam... aise -2 updates read nahi karte bachaa... baad me hame blame mat karna...samjhi...



mona... r u on fb????


love you both of you...
muah...
giving a bone crushing hug...
.


Edited by neha5058 - 03 May 2012 at 11:34am

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Hi Jyothi,

First of all, very..very...sorry for the very late reply...I thought I did...see how dumb I amAngry.

Thanks for such a lengthy update...HugHug to you.

Finally, Maneet meet after so many days...hope he should have been there...he never should have left...but what to do, the story is all about itSilly.

Poor Geetu...she is in so much painCry...but couldn't tell her Maan...so worried about everything and scared that she might even lose her love...poor dear it was not ur fault.

Woww...haye haye...Geet so restless and went to her love thru window...kuch toh sharam karoLOLLOL...what a romantic and passionate moment...chalo it relieved some of her pain...even if u have shown another passionate kiss i wouldn't have mindWinkBlushing...after all they met after 2 long yearsBig smile.

This Swetha and SidAngry..grrr...mein unhe zinda chaba lungi.

Sid planning to kill Maan...OMG...but how come Anand met with an accident...well maybe Sid changed his planned or what...me wondering.

So now Anand want Maneet to be married...think he wanted to see her daughter safe and happy...might be even worried whether he will recover or not.

Your Precap is sounding that everything is gonna be revealed in the next update...sounds very interesting...now its making me quite more excited...and it even means that we might get one more very long updateLOL.  I know..I know..never satisfied...but what to do can't help it...aadat se majboorWink.

And I am even excited to read what will Maan do after knowing the truth...all I can say is...Sid to gaya kaam se...me all geared up to join in the plan with MaanLOLLOLLOL.

Waiting for your next update dear.  Please post it soon.

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
arey meri maaa...where are you?
you were supposed to update it today?
kaha hai tera update? aur tu kaha hai?
dekh maine anjana chehra bhi update kar diya par tera kuch ata pata nahi hai..
dekh jaldi se update dede nahi to main love and revenge read nahi karungi and long comment b nahi dungi...jaldi means jaldi...
m giving u a dhamki again...

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