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A NEW SS-- FAMILY HOLIDAY (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 8:54am | IP Logged

Hey Guys!

Here I am, With another part of my SS!

As i stated before, this time i didnt PM anyone, because it takes too much of time. SO very very very sorry!

I hope you'll like the part.

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Part:3 – On the airport (Part:1)

They get out of the car and the driver takes their luggage out of the car. Manvi holds holds her bag and starts walking towards the gate. She stops after walking a little and sees that the other three are just standing next to the car with no intention to walk in.

M: arrey di, jeeju, aap logko andar nahi jana kya? Bahar hi dhoop mein marna hai? Challoo! Kiska wait kar rahe ho? Yaha par andar ghusne ke liye bhi dadaji ki ghari ka time hai kya?

J: chupkar manvi, dadaji ke baare mein iss tarah se baat mat kar!

Virat: manvi, hum apna luggage haath mein leke nahi chalenge! W...

M: Acha? Toh kya coolie ke tarah sar par utha ke leke chaloge haan?

Virat: nahii yaar! Baat ko poora toh karne do! Hum trolley pe leke jayenge, you know TROLLEY par!

M: yeh trolley kya hai?

J: Mannu, woh woh dekh (she points towards the line of trolleys) woh hai trolley!

Viren: mein aur virat jake trolley leke aate hai, tumlog yahi ruko.

M: dii, yeh chandigarh waale kitnnneee aalsi hote hai na? Khud ka saaman bhi nahi utha pate, ek chaar chake walle trolley par apna wazan dhalte hai! Agle century mein toh log wheelchair mein beth ke jayenge! Khud ka wazan bhi ghutno par kyu dhale jab wheelchair hai.. kyu di? Socho viren jeeju wheelchair mein bethkar aapko command de rahe hai 'jeevikaaa! Meri file dena zara' 'jeevika mujhe kheer khilana zara' 'jeevika mujhe...'

Jeevika laughs.

J: acha sun mannu, mujhe tujhse kuch important baat karni thi! Woh dadaji..

M: arrey diii! Abh fir chaloo mat ho jana! mein..

J: nahi mannu, tu sun! Mein tere bhalai ke liye bol rahi hoon, taki koi mere bhena ko galat na samjhe, dekh yeh teri pehli hawai jhaz se uran hai na? Toh tu kuch mat karna... kahi akele mat jana, jaha jana hai mujhe ya viren ji ko batana, hum tere saath chalenge, theek hai? Aur kuch chuna mat, tujhe pehle pehle thora ajeeb lagega lekin fir bhi tuh chup rehna, dadaji aur swamini bua ke samne koi shararat nahi, theek hai? please mannu KOI BADMASHI MAT KARNA!

M: haan haan, theek hai di! Mein monrat hi rakhlungi theek hai? Chill karo yaar, chutti pe hai humm! Abh yaha pe toh dadaji ke waqt ke rules ke hisab se toh chalna nahi parega na? Mein dadaji se puch kar aati hoon...

Jeevika holds her back!

J: kahi mat jaa, yahi ruk!

Viren and Virat come with 2 trolleys!

Viren picks up his and jeevika's luggage and puts it on one and virat puts his on one.

Virat: eh derfutiya! Yeh trolleys hai na, fir bhi saaman khud hi uthana hai kya?

M: haan, mein khud hi utha lungi, waise bhi mein tumhare jese khud ka bahar doosre pe nahi dhalti!

Virat: theek hai agar tum kehti ho toh khud hi rakh lo apna saaman!

Dadaji and the others come to their car.

D: saaman rakh liya ho toh hum andar chalein, flight ka time ho raha hai! Aur mujhe late jana, pasandh nahi. Aur mein yeh baat bata doon ki kyuki hum abh 10 din ke liye chutti pe hain toh hum koi bhi niyam nahi rakhenge, jisse jab uthna hai utho, jisse jab khana hai khao! Chutti pe ho, enjoy karo! 10 dino ke baad, fir se hum yeh niyam ka paalan karenge!

M: waaahhh!!!!! Thank You So Much Dadajii! (she went near dadaji and was so happy on his decision that she put her hand up to hug him, Jeevika glared at her! She quickly realised that this was *THE DADAJI* and put her hand down quickly! SB looked at her and sighed. Dadaji looked at her strangely.

D: beta yeh tumhare haath mein tumhara bag kyu hai? Trolley pe rakh do na! Tum Vadera khandan ke saath ho, tumhe khud ka bag uthane ki koi zarwat nahi hai.

Manvi immidietely dropped the bag and it fell on Virat's foot.

Virat: Kya kar rahi ho manviii! Marne ka irada hai kya, itna bhari bag kyu leke ja rahi ho, ek mehne ke kapre bhare hai kya? (he forgot that everyone was there)

D: Viraaat! Esse baat karte hain kya logo se? Oh haan, mein toh bhul hi gaya tha ki tum itne samay laptop pe rehte ho ki tumne toh tameez seekhi hi nahi. (turning to face manvi) Manvi bete, tum yeh bag iske trolley pe rakh do, aur uske naadani ke liye mein tumse maafi mangta hoon.

Manvi keeps the bag on the trolley. She was enjoying herself completely!

M: (in teasing mood) arrey nahi nahi dadaji, aap kyun maafi maang rahe hai! Yeh sabh toh virat ki galti hai na, woh hi iski bharpaayi karega. Aap iski fikar mat kijiye, meine isse maaf kar diya hai.

Virat looked at manvi with the *tumhe toh mein baad mein dekhta hoon* look.

SB: acha abh yeh sabh chodiye bauji,  hum late ho rahe hain, chaliye andar.

D: theek ka swamini, chalo!

Everyone went to the gate and viren showed the tickets to the watchman and went inside. Dadaji, swamini bua and vanshika went inside quickly as they didnt want to be late  and the other four came gradually, taking their time.

J: (putting her hand to her ear) arrey, meri ek earring neeche kahi gir gayi. Mein leke aati hoon

Viren: chalo mein bhi chalta hoon tumhare saath, tum akele kaha kaha dhoondo gi.

J: Mere khayal se gate par hi giri hogi, chaliye. Tum dono aage jao, hum aate hai.

They go to find the earring. They reach the gate and start finding.

Viren spots it on the ground near the railing. He picks it up and stares at it. Then turns towards jeevika who was finding the earring looking worried.

Viren thought: Wow! She looks so pretty even when she is agitated.

After 10 minutes of searching,

J: Virenji, nahi mili! Woh earring mujhe aapne hi gift ki thi, im sorry! Meine usse kho diya! Aap ko bura nahi lag raha na! Please, im really sorry, woh...

Viren held the earring in front of her and she was shocked!

J: aapko yeh kaha mila?

Viren: wahi, railing ke paas!

J: aapko yeh kab mila tha?

Viren: mujhe yeh ghuste hi mil gaya tha!

J: Kya!! Aur aapne mujhe bataya bhi nahi! Mein kabse pareshaan ho ke dhoond rahi thi, aur aap yeh earring leke kya kar rahe the 10 minute tak?

Viren: Tumhe dekh raha tha! Dekh raha tha ki kese koi pareshaan ho kar bhi itna sundar lag sakhta hai!

Jeevika blushed at the compliment.

J: aap bhi na!

The earring slipped out of viren's hand and fell down. They both bent down and were going to pick it up when there hands touched, both stopped looked at each other and again there was an eyelock. Viren picked up the earring and jeevika stretched out her hand to take it.

Viren: no no! Not so easily Mrs. Jeevika Viren Vadera!

J: kya kar rahe hai aap? Mazaak mat kijiye! Humein late ho raha hai! Dijiye!

Viren: magar mein bohot serious hoon jeevika! Acha lena hai toh lo, he held it out to her and as she was about to take it he lifted his hand higher and again she was about to grab it when he lifted it even higher, then she jumped and was about to reach it when again he took it higher. She jumped up again, but this time her feet slipped and she fell right into viren's arms. He held her and removed the hair falling on her face. Their eyes met and they had an eyelock.  After what seemed decades, viren helped jeevika to her feet. Jeevika lood away and viren stepped towards her, he held the earring next to her ear and put it on.

Viren: lo ho gaya.

J: thanks.

Viren smiled.

J: abh chale, manvi aur virat humara wait kar rahe honge.

Viren: chalo..

Meanwhile VirMan  

They came to the baggage X-ray. She saw the black, long ribbon-like looking strips covering the passage and got excited.

M: Arrey yeh kyaaa haii? Humein kitni baar check karenge! Firse checking! Isme beth ke jaate hai kya? Wow maza aayega, mein pehle, mein pehle!

She ran off and started climbing the moving platform. 

Virat saw an oppurtunity to take his revenge of what happened outside. So he didnt stop her.

Manvi sat there and went in and came out from the other side after 2 seconds and saw that virat was standing in front of her laughing like a madman.

M: eh! Chep ho kya? Kya hai, kya hai yeh? Bateesi dikha ke hase kyu ja rahe ho? Aur yeh, yeh tum bina check kiye yaha kese aa gaye? Un logo ne dekha nahi kese chor ho tum? Kya security hai yaar! Isse behter toh humari hrishikesh ki railway station ki security hai! A..

The man next to the system (shouting): arrey yeh kya hai madam? (manvi looked at him)

M: Kya?

Man: arrey, yeh sabh karke aap mujhse pooch rahi hai ki kya hua? Yeh machine hai!

M: haan woh toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hai. Toh?

Man: irritated: pagal ho kya? Yeh saaman check karne ke liye hai, insaano ko nahi! Meri system kaharb ho gayi aapke bhari weight se! Kya madammm! Abh iski bharpai kaun karegaa?

M: suno, tum jante ho tum kisse baat kar rahe ho? Tumhari himmat kese hui mujhse iss tarah se baat karne ki! Kya karloge tum? Bolo kya karoge!! Mein bharpai nahi karungi! Mujhe manager ke paas leke jaoge, chalo le chalo! Mein bhi toh dekhooo ki yeh hawai adda banane wale mein kitna dum hai! Aur tumhe toh zarur fire karwa dungi, jo meri galti nahi hai mujhe hi bharpai ke liye keh rahe ho! Haan? aapki toh ese ki tesi! Aapke system mein hi garbar hai, mujhe kuch mat bolo! Yaha ek bara bara board laga dena chaiye tha na pehle hi! Ki yeh saaman ke liye hai insaano ke liye nahi! Aur upar se tum mujhe bol rahe ho! Tumari himmat kese...

Virat kept watching this entertainment, his choudhrain was indeed very talented in arguing, no one could win from her.

Viren and jeevika came and saw manvi on the luggage platform, shouting at the man who seemed to have been petrified, and a nearby laughing virat!

Viren ran to manvi.

Viren: arrey arrey manvi, bas karo! Kya hua kya! Aur tum yaha pe kyu bethi ho! Chalo sab se pehle niche utro!

He helped manvi down.

M: acha hua ki aap aa gaye jeeju!

Viren: kya baat kya hai?

Manvi told him everything that happened.  Viren understood the confusion at once, he took out 5 thousand ruppees and was about to give it to the man.

M: jeeju yeh aap kya kar arhe ho! Yeh  aadmi ek number ka chor haii! Aap isse paise ktu de rahe ho! Woh bhi 5 hazaar!

Viren: arrey manvi, iski system kharab ho gayi toh dena toh parega na!

M: acha theek hai, aap ruko. (turning to the man) Bhaisab, isse theek karne ke liye kitna paisa lagega?

Man: 5 hazaar.

M (shouting): ARREY 5 HAZAAR KYU? KITNE CHOR HO YAAR! BAS DEKH LIYA KI BHAISABH KITNE ACHE HAI AUR 5 HAZAAR DE RAHE HAI, TOH BAS LE LO! KYUU? ABHI CHALO MERE SATH POLICE KO TUMHARE BARE MEIN BOLTI HOON, KYA LAGTA HAI, HUM CHOD DENGE! BILKUL NAHI, SEEDHA SEEDHA BOLO KITNE KA HAII, AUR THEEK DAAM BOLNA WARNA..

Man: ah..wo.woh.um..

M (outraged by the man's behaviour): KYA WOH WOH? BOLO NA!! TIME KYU WASTE KAR RAHE HO, HUMARI FLIGHT CHUT JAYEGI!

Man: 2, 2 hazaar!

M: abh aaye na line pe! (t0 viren) dekha jeeju, meine kaha tha naki yeh sabh log chor hai!

Viren gave the man money.

Man: shukriya bhaisab, acha ho gaya ki aap aa gaye, warna toh yeh pagal ladki mujhe bhi pagal kar deti!

Hearing this, virat burst out laughing once again and stopped the moment he saw manvi popping out eyes staring at him!

Viren took manvi to the corner where virat and jeevika were waiting, laughing.

M: arrey jeeju, aapko toh mujhe thank you kehna chahiye, meine aapke poore 3 hazaar rupaye bachaye!

Viren: haan haan saali sahiba! Bilkul! Thank you so much!

M: your welcome!

Viren: ek minute, ek minute! Yeh saara confusion hua hi kyu? Virat ko toh pata hi tha iske baare mein! Yeh tumhari pehli uraan hai, isliye tumhe toh nahi pata tha, yeh samajh mein aat hai, lekin virat to kitne baar gaya hai bahar, usse toh definitely pata hona chahiye tha.

Virat: haan pata tha!!  Lekin mujhe bhi toh entertainment dekhna tha na! Aur yeh tha mera revenge subha ke liye!

M: VIRRAAATT!!!!!! MEIN TUMHARA MURDER KAR DOONGI! TUM ESA KESE KAR SAKHTE HO! TUMHE PATA THA, FIR BHI MUJHE NAHI BATAYA! UGHHH!! TUM RUKO!

Virat ran foward and manvi after him, leaving  VirIka behind!

J: yeh dono bhi naa! Chuhe billi ke tarah larte-jhagadte rehte ! haha!

Viren: haan! (he went close to her and whispered in her ears) waise, yeh baat mujhe pehle kehene ka mauka nahi mila, magar aap yeh red sari mein bohot hi zyada khoobsurat lag rahi hai! Agar aap roz roz itni sundar lagegi toh mein toh aapko hi dekhte rahunga  aur fir baaki log kay sochenge! (he rubbed his cheek to her soft one) aur fir mera bhi heart dheere dheere fail hone lagega!

Jeevika looked down.

J: Aapke liye hi toh sajti hoon na. Taaki aapse roz roz compliment leh sakoo, warna mein kyu sajti!

Viren: hayye hayye, jeevika! Abh toh mera heart zaroor fail hi jayega.

He put his hand on his heart and was about to fall, when jeevika held him and pulled him up.

J: viren ji, kya kar rahe hai! Sambhaliye!

Viren came close to her!

J: viren ji, sabh dekh rahe hai!

Viren brought her even more closer and said: toh dekhne do na, mein tumhara pati hoon, poora haq hai mera!

J: haan par..

Viren's cell rang. They broke apart.

Viren: abh kauuun he yaaar! Lagta hai, sabh logo ko humare romance se problem hai!

Jeevika laughs.

Viren picks up the phone.

Viren: Hello.

SB: hello, viren, kaha ho tum chaaro?

Viren: ba..ba..badi ma! Woh hum sabh check-in counter ke taraf ja rahe hai!

SB: abhi tak wahi ho? Airport toh bilkul khali hai, zyada bheer bhi nahi hai toh fir itni der kaha lag gayi?

Viren: woh badi maa, aise hi , bas hum aa hi rahe hai...

SB: humlog cafe mein bethe hain, jaldi aao!

Viren: Jee, bilkul badi maa! Rakhta hoon.

Saying this he cut the line.

J: buaji ka phone tha?

Viren: haan, jaldi chalo, woh humara wait kar rahe hein!

J: dekha, meine aapko kaha tha na, time waste nahi karne, aap hi fizool ke baato mein lag gaye!

Viren: toh mera aapko pyaar karna aapko fizool ki baate karna lagta hai!

J: nahi nahi! Meine aisa toh nahi kaha na!

Viren: Matlab toh wahi tha na...

J: nahi nahi, aap mujhe pyaar kare toh mere liye woh din ka sabse acha pal ban jata hai! (she caressed his cheek)

Viren: not bad Mrs. Vadera! Aap bhi kafi kuch seekh gayi hai mujhse!

J:Bilkul! Abh romance bandh kijiye aur chaliye! Buaji aur baaki sabh humara wait kar rahi hai!

Viren: haan chalo.

They head towards the check-in counter.

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I tried my best to add both VirMan and VirIka in this update!

I hope you'll liked it! Do feel free to comment and state anything you didnt like or felt could be better.

--sajanfan004

 

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Hey Guys, 
I really wished to PM all of you, who have liked my ss! but im sorry, whenevr i sit to Update it takes me like, centuriess! SO WHOEVER IS IN MY BUDDY LIST, i can PM them only!
Sorry!
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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Awesome..!

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
loved it waiting for next part...

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
So cute yar plz pm me d nxt part wen u updt. Wink
loved it Smile Shocked

Edited by khusam - 05 May 2012 at 1:46pm

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Awsomeee!
 
 
please keep PMing meee
 
 
ur amazing

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