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A NEW SS-- FAMILY HOLIDAY (Page 44)

urmil Goldie
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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged
nice and long update...would love to read abt negative character affecting virika...thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Ryt now i wud suggest jus add a character between virika. And may be after sum tym between virman. Act its ok if nobody is brought between virman.

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Nice wala update tha ji...
mujhe sabh kuch padna manzoor hai ...woh tracks interesting honge jo apne likhe hai...

thnx 4 d pm...

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
awesome update,loved all the virika parts,superb.Continue soon n plz add more of virika romance!!
As for the suggestion,then i dont mind a third character,jealous viren will be a treat!!
PS:but nothing shud affect virika romance!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Superb part...Clap
Loved all the interactions between all the characters!!!


As for the suggestion...
For Virika-since they are married and matured any third person should not affect their relation...

You can add the third person virman since dey havent confessed...


Thanks for the PM...
Cant wait for the next update...Big smile

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
VV bro's - Gosh! Viren is one smart ass! LOL 

 woh kya hai na, mujhe tere messages check karne hai... tu kin kin larkiyon se din bhar flirt karta rehta hai, woh dekhna hai.. actual mein na ...tumhari jasusi (spy) karna chahata hoon!

ROFL I couldn't believe that Viren said all this! LOL And the way they were stretching on certain words was so funny! LOL They both just rock it! Embarrassed

VirMAn - The way Manvi was avoiding Virat! LOL And keep the phone under the pillow.. So me! ROFL Virat never leaves a chance of pulling her leg.. But, Manvi is no less too! LOL I wonder what will happen when the go out! How will Manvi avoid then? LOL It's gonna be EPIC! Big smile 

VirIka - Ahh.. The PERFECT couple! 

Viren was hugging her really tight and she was not comfortable. His grip over her was so strong that she could hardly move from her position. She lay still. Till 2 in the morning she could not sleep but when she looked next to her she saw Viren sleeping peacefully.

That was just.. Aww!Day Dreaming I could image it all.. Embarrassed How I wish I was in place of Jeevika. Blushing Dreams will remain dreams! LOL Cute Viren.. Sleeping! Embarrassed 

Aw! She wore a white suit! Embarrassed So sweet.. Well.. I guess then we get to see romantic scenes in the next part.. A lot blushing and all! Wink And that was really sweet of her! Not too wake him up! And then leave a note! Embarrassed How sweet can they get man? Day Dreaming 

Devar-Bhabhi - Love the way Virat teased Jeevika! Wink And what Virat said about the compliments thingy.. It was so true! Embarrassed 

Omfg! Viren is so adorable! Embarrassed woh aapke iss white dress ke baare mein humesha bolte the, ki aap isme kitni sundar lagti ho, etc    Sweet guy! Embarrassed 

Loved how Jeevika was worried about Viren's sleep and Virat as pulling her leg! Big smile How predictable of him! LOL 

JeeMan - Oh, God! The excuses Manvi made.. ROFL It was just epic.. I could really imagine their expressions.. Gosh! LOL Hilarious Manvi! LOLAnd she teasing Jeevika! Wink Seriously everyone was behind her! LOL

acha? Aur kaun tease kiya aapko? Dadaji aur ghar ke baaki bare (elder people) log toh aisa karenge nahi, aur khud Jeeju toh aapko nahi irritate karenge na? Hrishikesh se aapke koi students ne call karke aapko pareshaan kiya kya? Ya fir Chandigarh ki mona aunty ne?

This cracked me up! ROFL  I mean like seriously.. LOL 

meine PANTARS nah PARTNER kaha..

Another one! LOL  Gish.. These sisters! Tongue 

The PRE-CAP - It seems so hilarious! ROFL

SUGGESTION - A negative character which would affect VirIka. Oh, so perfect! I think it's a great idea! Big smile

Well, for VirMAn and VirIka .. Umm! Not pretty sure about that now! Ermm

But, whatever you write will be a treat ti watch! Big smile

P.S - I'm thinking to continue my FF. Ahh.. I keep changing my mind! Tongue

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
It was tooo... Gud dear..

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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