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A NEW SS-- FAMILY HOLIDAY (Page 42)

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
loved it cant believe u update after ages woooe, thanks for the pm

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
very nice update..n very long update too..
worth reading..but precaps are very interesting so plzzz update soon..

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Too good, first of all thanks for updating finally, and a request, actually a warning please update fast, you cant keep us waiting like this, waiting for the virikalicious scenes you give.
Secondly like the bhabhi devar and jeeju sali scenes, i personally adore them a lot, so natural they are together,. Specially when virat teases jeevika, pulling cheeks, too beautifully put up.
Also the small things you looked in was awesome!
In all a much awaited update was good. 
Update sooner,
Thanks Smile Pm me 

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
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story! pls pls pls pls update soon waiting for the another blast... 
Thanks for the PM too... update soon waiting ! and pls have some virika 



Edited by nishyrelan - 09 November 2012 at 9:06am

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Overall:Man...how do you manage to write soo well??...I'm like totally addicted to your writin...I didnt check my If for days and I came on today just to check if you updated...: and Wow this update was once again commendable yaar...:)...so now lets divide this apprciation comment into segments... :)

Note:Thank you for giving me the note :)...I guess I probably would have been preety confused without it :)

Devar-Bhabhi:I justt loveeed this btis the most even more than the Jeeju-Saali bits :)...I loveed Virat's dialouge when he explains Viren's wishes to Jeevika about getting to know her better :)...I loveeed the Hi-5 part...The part when Virat pulled Jeevika's cheeks was absolutely adorable...But most of all I just love the way Virat makes Jeevika blush :)

Jeeju-Saali:I adored the Jeeju-Saali bits as wel...My favorite was when Viren had mistaken Maanvi for Jeevika...Man that prt made me LMAO...I wouldnt say much abotut this Jeeju-Saali Duo kyunki jab log ye log saath hote hai toh everyone knows ki unka has has ke halaath kharab hone wali hai :)
Precap:As usual,your Precaps always excite me lekin this one yeh wala has over excited me yaar...I cant wait for the update...I mostly excited because as an ultimate VirIkian I get to read very few Virika updates and your precap about the Unchaai thing...makes me over-excited :)...By reading all the three precaps I predict that there wil be more of VirMan in the upcoming part...but I'm excited for that too as I am a VirManian too :)

Obera

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Awesome update...Smile
The way u have depicted the small incidents is wat makes this SS more beautiful...
Loved it...Clap
Thanks for the PM...
Cant wait for the next updateSmile

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
awesome update can't wait to c wat virat makes manvi do

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
awesome absolutely brilliant

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