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A NEW SS-- FAMILY HOLIDAY (Page 33)

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Hey guys!

Im back with another update after two long months! I have made it long and i hope you'll will really enjoy reading it.

ABOUT THE UPDATE: This is a MIXTURE of the whole FAMILY. I have added a part for everyone, not only the two couples.

NEXT UPDATE: I had been really busy these two months, and thus, i couldn't update! But now, i'll try to update really fast.

Do comment!

Please dont skip the below note:-

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1) Please do not skip lines in these updates, even if the elders are talking. You may think it is boring, but it will fit perfectly by the end of the SS.

2) You'll may find this part with an excess of 'typical drama'.  I realised that after completing the part. But since i have not update from 2 months, i wanted to update quickly and i didn't have time to edit. But even with all this drama, i hope you'll really like the part!

Here it goes:-

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Part 11: Welcome to Singapore!

They stepped onto the aerobridge, In front, Virika, hand in hand, followed by the jumping and laughing Manvi and then Virat, who was thoroughly enjoying himself looking at her. Last came the three elders.

SB: Bauji, apne ek baat notice ki...

D: kaunsi baat swamini beta?

V: Iss jagah se kitne saare dil jure hue hai...(this place is important to all of us)..

SB: Bilkul theek bhabhi...

D: Mein kuch samjha nahi bahu...

SB: Mein batati hoon Bauji, aap ko yaad hai, Viren ne apni pehli case singapore ke ek client ke liye hi lari thi... (His client of his first case was from Singapore)..

V: Virat ne yahi apne singing ki degree achieve ki thi!

SB: Bhaiya ne yaha se bhabhi ko pehla phone call kiya tha!

Vanshika blushed remembering all the memories.  She said "Par didi, aap ko kese..?"

SB: Bhabhi, bhaiya mujhse kuch nahi chupate the!

Vanshika smiled and said "Haan, aur bauji aapne bhi toh yahi ke ek law ke college mein top kiya tha!"

D: Tumne sahi ka bahu, sach mein humare pariwaar ki itne saare yaadein judi (connected) hai iss jagah se!

V: Haan, aur yeh to kal ke baatein hai! Aaj ko dekh lijiye- Jeevika aur Viren itne khush lag rahe hai, ek saath iss safar ko shuru karna chahate hai! Aur Manvi...woh toh khushi se jhoom rahi hai!

'Aur mera Virat ko apne pyaar ka ehsaas issi jagah hoga' Vanshika thought. She knew her son very well. His love for Manvi could be seen clearly in his eyes, he would just never accept it! BUT SHE KNEW...if  Virat would ever realise his love, IT WOULD BE HERE, IN SINGAPORE!

SB: Sahi kaha didi, sabh kitne khush hai iss sheher (city) mein!

They kept chattering about this city.

VirIka:-

Jeevika had Viren's hand clutched in hers! TOGETHER, they started off this wonderful journey through Singapore as they took their first step together into the airport. They looked at each other and smiled. Viren took Jeevika aside and whispered into her ear "Welcome To Singapore Mrs. Vadera, I'll make this trip the most memorable one for you, I promise!". Jeevika looked down, her cheeks went red and she gave a secretive smile to herself which didn't go unnoticed by Viren. He smiled.

"mmhh...mmhh..." someone cleared their throat.

They looked around to find the mischievous Manvi, right behind staring at them!

Viren: Uh...uh...woh Manvi...woh.

M(teasing smile): Its ok Jeeju...mujhe sabh kuch pata hai...aapko kissi bhi baat ke liye koi bhi explanation dene ki zarwat nahi hai! Mein sabh samajhti hoon...

Jeevika hits her head slightly and says "Chupkar Manvi!".

M: arrey, mein toh mazak kar rahi thi! Wese Jeeju aapko ek advice doon?

Viren: Bilkul!

M: Shuru hone ke pehle dekha toh karo ki aap kaha, kiske saamne romance kar rahe ho! Abhi agar mere jagah dadaji hote toh???

Jeevika glared at Manvi.

Viren: Thank You for the warning Saali Sahiba! Mein aage se dhyaan rakhoonga!

M: Good!

Viren: Abh chale?

Manvi nods.

They walk and then Viren stops abruptly.

M: Kya hua jeeju?

Viren: Uh...kuch nahi manvi... mujhe ek kaam yaad aa gaya! Tum dono Virat ke saath aage jao mein bas do minute mein aata hoon... (I just remembered some important work, you'll move ahead with Virat, i will join you'll in 2 minutes)

M: Theek hai..

They smiled and went forward. Viren went back to dadaji and the others.

Viren: Umm...dadaji, mujhe aapse kuch zaruri baat karni hai..

D: Abhi?

Viren: Haan...

D: Theek hai, bolo..

Viren: Umm...yaha nahi, aap zara side mein aaye na..

Vanshika and Swamini Bua exchanged confused glances and looked at Viren who didn't respond.

D: Chalo..

Meanwhile JeeMan and Virat:-

They were walking across the clean glass floor, smiling and chatting.

Virat: Wese, bhabhi...aapse ek baat poochoo? (can i ask you a question?)

J: Haan, virat poocho na...

Virat: Aapko aeroplane zyada pasand aaya ya aap abhi bhi trains mein zyada comfortable hai?

J: Ae..

Before Jeevika could complete, Manvi cut her off.

M: Obviously trains...Yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai kya Virat? inn planes mein koi kese rehe sakhta hai? Yeh bare zarur hai magar Humare trains mein toh aaram se per fela ke soh sakhte hai! Aur yaha? Bas kissi tarah ghus mus ke bethna parta hai! 
(These flights are big but really uncomfortable, one somehow has to fit himself into the crampy space whereas the trains have huge seats, in which, one, if tired, can sleep as well)

Virat: tumse poocha? Har cheez mein apni naak dalne ki tumhari aadat nahi gayi na abh tak? (You still have the habit of poking your nose into every matter)

M: Well, tumne meri di se poocha, aur meri aur meri di ka likes same hota hai! Isliye i'm sure ki di ko bhi trains hi zyada pasand hai!

Virat: Chodo! (Turning to Jeevika) Bhabhi aap batao na? Aapko sach mein flight acha nahi laga kya?

J: Arrey nahi nahi Virat! Mujhe bohot acha laga! aur rahi baat tumhare pehli sawaal ki, toh, dekho, meine trains se hazaar baar travel kiya hai, lekin yeh mera flight se sirf seond time hai...toh issliye, mein trains ke saath bohot familiar hoon..

Immedietely a victorious smile crept onto Manvi's face. Virat looked at her and stuck his tongue out! But Jeevika was not done yet!

J: ...Lekin haan, comfort ke nazariye se dekha jaye toh, im sorry manvi but i agree with Virat...Flights are more comfortable!

Now it was Virat's turn to grin! Manvi just stared at his smile and made a face.

J(seeing Virat's expression): Lekin Virat, tum yeh sawaal kyu pooch rahe ho?

Virat: Woh kya hai na bhabhi, Manvi toh kabse planes ki burai ki ja rahi thi aur usne yeh bhi kaha ki aapke thoughts bhi same hi hai, isliye mein bas confirm kar raha tha!

Jeevika smiled.

Virat: toh, dekh liya der futiya!

M(annoyed): Kya dekh liya, haan? kya?

Virat: Abh itna gussa kyu kar rahi ho?

M: Uhhh... chodo!

Meanwhile Dadaji and Viren:-

D: Bolo Viren...

Viren: Dadaji, mein yaha das din ke liye nahi ruk sakhta... Mujhe yaha se ek hafte mein hi nikalke wapas Chandigarh jana hoga! Lekin, aap log aaram se aayega, koi harbari nahi hai... Bas aapse permission chahiye thi aur aap please, badi maa aur maa ko bata dijiyega...

(Dadaji, I Can't stay here for 10 days, I'll have to return to Chandigarh within a week, maximum. But you'll enjoy your trip and come back later, there is no hurry. I just wanted to seek your permission. Please tell Badi Maa and the elders about it.)

Jeevika with VirMan:-

M: umm...di! Mujhe na iss waqt, solid mirchi wala PUCHKA khane ka man kar raha hai!

J: man toh mera bhi kar raha hai manu, lekin yeh humara India nahi hai, Singapore hai! Inn foreign cities mein humari desi cheeze (things) thodi na milegi?

M: Aap sahi keh rahi ho di, yeh mene pehle kyu nahi socha...

Virat(under his breath): Dimag kaha hai sochne ke liye..

Manvi's ears stood up.

M: Tumne kuch kaha?

Virat: Nahi toh... tumhare kaan aajkal bohot bajte hai!

M: Chup karo!

They make a cute face at each other and continue walking.

Dadaji and Viren:-

D: Magar kyu Viren? Tum jaldi kyu jana chahate ho?

Viren: Woh, actually kya hai na dadaji, jo humare client hai na,  Mr. Mehra, unka case 1 hafte baad hai...humne judge se request ki thi, ki thodi der ki tareekh de, magar woh arrange nahi ho paya...

D: Lekin beta, yeh toh nayi case hai na? 2 hafte pehle hi toh aayi hai?

Viren: Haan, magar mein iss case ko handle karna chahata hoon dadaji, please...

D: Nahi Viren... Waha Inder hai na, woh karlega..

Viren: Magar iss case pe meine bhi thodi bohot research ki hai dadaji...

D: Toh tum ek kaam karo na beta... Apni saari research Inder ko mail kardo aur iss case ke baare mein tumhare jo bhi khayal hai, usse phone pe aaj hi Inder se discuss karke, khatam kardo..

Viren: Par dadaji, chachu waha akele kese sabh sambhalenge?
(How will chachu manage everything alone?)

D: Mein usse phone pe sabh samjha doonga, wese bhi yeh ek saaf case hai, complications ke bina, toh mujhe poora vishwas hai, ki Inder isse akela sambhal lega.. aur agar abhi se woh practise nahi karega, toh aage jake woh kese manage karega?

Viren: Dadaji, please...

D: Nahi Viren..

Jeeman and Virat: -

M: Acha Virat, time kya hua hai?

Virat checked his watch and said "abhi 5:20 ho raha hai".

M: Ok.

Virat: Kyu?

M: Mujhe bohot neend aa rahi hai... pata nahi kyu... sirf 5:20 hi toh hua hai!

Virat: Mein batata hoon kyu... Woh kya hai na, aksar sherni ko 2 -2 ghante mein neend aati hai...

He smirked and Manvi pushed him slightly, annoyed. They went down to the ground floor and waited in a corner for the others.

J: Acha Virat, mein bas 2 minute mein washroom se aati hoon.. mujhe haath dhona hai..

Virat: Ok Bhabhi...

Jeevika left the two and went away. After a moment:-

M: Acha Virat, Jab sablog aa jayenge, toh humlog seedha hotel hi jayenga na?

Virat: Haan haan, bilkul! Tumhare kapre hum wapas Hrishikesh bhijwa denge.. No problem..
(Ya, we will send all your clothes back to Hrishikesh)

M(sarcastically): ha ha ha... Very funny! Mera matlab tha ki kapre lene ke baad aur airport se nikalne ke baad hum seedha ghar hi jayenge na?

Virat: Haan!

M: Tumhara dimag itna chota hai ki tumhe koi baat samajh hi nahi aati, dheere dheere karke, ek do sal ke bache ki tarah samjhana parta hai!

Virat: Tum toh aise bol rahi ho jaise tumhara brain bohot bara hai!

M: Haan Hai! Kya karloge?

They went on arguing.

Dadaji and Viren:-

D: Waise Viren, mein tumse kabse ek baat karna chahata tha..

Viren: Kya dadaji?

D: Mein dekh raha hu, ki tum apne kaam ki taraf bohot dhyaan de rahe ho.. jo ki achi baat hai, magar tum issi chakar mein gharwaalon ko time nahi de rahe ho..

Viren: Mein kuch samjha nahi dadaji..

D: Gharwaalon se mera metlab hai, Jeevika..

Viren looked quite confused.

D: Beta, woh kuch kehti nahi hai, iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki usse koi shiqayat (complaint) nahi hai... Tum usse samay hi nahi de pate ho.. ghar mein poora din office aur, aakhri baar bhi jab tum dono bahar Goa ghumne gaye the, toh Jaiswal ke wajah se Swamini beta ne tumhare saath bodyguard bhej diya tha... Jeevika ke liye tumhari security se zyada aur kuch important nahi tha, isliye woh kuch nahi boli...par beta uske baare mein bhi toh socho na...

Viren looked down. He realised what Dadaji had said was absolutely correct.

D: Abh usse kessa lagega agar iss baar bhi tum jaldi chale jaoge toh?  Isliye mein chahata tha ki iss trip mein tumhe mein kaam se door rakhoo... Meine toh tumhe samjha diya, abh tum decide karo tumhe kya karna hai... tum socho, aur hum kal aaraam se baat karenge...Theek hai?

Viren nods slightly. Dadaji walks off leaving a sad and guilty Viren.

Jeevika:-

As Jeevika came out of the washroom she saw Swamini bua and Vanshika coming down the escalator. They went to the sofa nearby, and sat down waiting for Dadaji. She went up to talk to them. As she approached near, she heard Viren's name in their conversation and stopped to listen about what they were talking.

SB: Bhabhi, humein toh kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai.. Viren ko achanak se dadaji se baat kyu karni hai? Aaj tak Viren ne humse kuch nahi chupaya hai, toh fir abh yeh humse kyu chupa raha hai? Koi bari baat hi hogi na?

V: Haan didi, mujhe bhi kuch ajeeb sa hi laga tha... zarur koi baat hai jo woh humse chupa raha hai..

SB: Bilkul, aur aaj meine usse phone pe baat karte suna tha, woh bohot hi gusse mein lag raha tha... zarur koi baat hai bhabhi..

V: shayad kuch business se related hoga, isiliye toh woh Dadaji se baat karne gaya hai..

SB: I just hope kuch zyada serious na ho..

Vanshika frowned.

SB: wese bauji ne mujhse kal baat ki thi... unhe lagta hai ki Viren kuch zyada hi kaam karta hai aur Jeevika ko bilkul time nahi de pata!

V: Haan, unhone mujhse bhi iss baare mein baat ki thi..

They kept on talking about this. Jeevika's face changed with shock. Many questions were storming in her mind. Why did Dadaji think so? Had he discussed that with Viren? How would Viren react? Would Viren ask her anything about it? What was he hiding? Was it the same thing which he tried to hide from her in the flight? Why would he discuss something so suddenly with dadaji? Was their something serious with his business? Why didn't he tell it to her? WHAT WAS THE PROBLEM?

She was lost in her thoughts when she heard Virat's voice "Bhabhi!". She turned around and saw VirMan staring at her pale coloured face.

M: Di, kya hua? Sabh theek toh hai na?

J: Haan haan, Mannu, sabh theek hai...tu kyu pooch rahi hai?

M: Di, aapke chehre pe woh chamak hi nahi hai, jo humesha rehti hai...isliye meine socha...

J: Arrey, nahi nahi, mein bas Viren ji ka wait kar rahi thi..

M(in a teasing manner): ooo... Toh abh mein samjhi, aapka chehra itna utra (dull) hua sa kyu lag raha hai... Chill karo di, jeeju kahi bhaag nahi gaye hai! Thodi der mein aa jayenge..

Jeevika smiled. She thought that she must wait till they reach the hotel and then talk to Viren calmly and properly.

Virat: Woh rahe Dadaji...Magar bhai kaha hai?

M: Arrey Chep! Ache se dekho... Jeeju unke peeche hi khare hai..

After a few seconds:-

Virat: Oh haan! Dikh gaye, bhai toh dadaji ke peeche chup hi gaye the..

Everyone joins Swamini and Vanshika. Jeevika was continually staring at Viren, but he did not look at her.

Viren: Dadaji, badi maa, maa, aap teeno yahi bethiye, hum luggage leke aate hai..

V: Theek hai beta..

They sat down and waited. The four of them went to the luggage rotation corner.

Viren: Virat, humare paas 7 suitcases hai.. toh kam se kam do trolley toh chahiye  hi hogi..

Virat: Haan bhai...

Viren: Ek kaam karte hai, Jeevika, tum aur Manvi yahi ruko, mein aur Virat trollies leke aate hai.. Waise bhi bags aana chaloo ho gaye hai..

J: Theek hai Viren ji..

Viren: Chal Virat...

Virat: Haan Bhai...

The two of them go leaving the two sisters next to the luggage department. Manvi was looking around when she saw the walking escalator. That was the first time she was travelling abroad and so she was seeing the flat, walking escalator the first time.

M: DI! DI! DI!

J: Kya hua Mannu?

M: Di, woh dekho...

She pointed at the walking escalator. Jeevika turned around and saw it. She smiled at her Manvi's childish behaviour.

M: Di chalo na, uspar chalte hai...

J: Haan, manvi chalenge, bas do minute ruk ja, Viren ji aur Virat ko aane de.. warna woh pareshaan ho jayenge na...

M: Acha theek hai, di, mein bas thode paas jakar dekhti hoon haan?

J: Magar mannu..

But Manvi was too excited, she went ahead and stood looking at it and clicking some pictures from her mobile. Jeevika was standing near the rotation counter and was searching the luggages coming and going on the rack. Suddenly, she saw a big red suitcase coming towards her side, which she recognized very easily as it was very neatly packed up by her only. It was Viren's suitcase.

Meanwhile the elders:-

D: beta, yaad hai meine tum dono ko, Viren aur Jeevika ke baare mein woh baat batayi thi?

SB: haan bauji, magar humein nahi lagta ki Jeevika ko Viren ka zyada kaam karne se thoda bhi problem hai..

V: haan, bauji, woh Viren ko bohot ache se janti hai, woh janti hai ki Viren ko apne kaam se bohot pyaar hai...

D: Tumlog samajh nahi rahe ho... dekho, viren ke paas kaam karne ke liye poori umar baaki hai, magar abhi jo samay woh khushi ke saath apne pariwaar ke saath bita sakhta hai, yeh samay woh baad mein nahi bita payega... isliye mein chahata hoon, ki woh abhi aaram se apni zindagi jiye aur aage chalke toh sirf kaam hi kaam hai!

(You'll are not understanding. Viren has his whole life left for work. But now he is young and he can afford a lot of time for his family, later on he wont be able to spend much time. Hence, I want that he should live a sweet happy life now and later on there will be tremendous work as it is. )

After thinking for sometime:-

V: Aap sahi keh rahe hai bauji, Pichle baar bhi Viren aur Jeevika theek se enjoy nahi kar paye honge... Aap Viren ko samjha dijiye ki woh iss trip ke beech mein Chandigarh nahi jayega...

SB: Bhabhi bilkul sahi keh rahi hai..

D: Yeh hi toh musibat hai beta, meine usse lakh samjhane ki koshish ki, magar woh apne zidd par hi araa hai... Swamini beta tum ek kaam karo.. (Thats the problem.. I tried to explain Viren a thousand times, but he is just not listening..)

SB: Kya bauji?

D: Viren tumhari baat kabhi nahi talega.. tum usse baat kyu nahi karti? Aur Virat ko bhi le lena... Woh kaafi practical hai aur woh Viren ko zarur mana payega..

SB: Theek hai Bauji, magar saare gharwaalo ke beech, mein usse kese baat karungi? Jeevika bhi toh rahegi na?

D: Ek kaam karo beta, tum Viren aur Virat ko leke ek gaari mein hotel chali jao, hum sab doosre gaari mein aa jayenge.. hotel tak ka aadhi ghante ka rasta hai, tab tak tumhari baat aaraam se khatam ho jayegi...

V: Haan, yeh theek rahega..

SB: Jesa aap kahe Bauji..

Luggage area:-

Jeevika didn't know what to do. Last time when she had travelled, the bodyguard had taken their luggage from the counter, while Viren was talking to Jeevika. So she had no idea how the system would work, she thought that if no one picked up a suitcase, then, it would be removed from the rack and she didn't want any criterias with Viren's suitcase, especially at the begininng of the holiday. She didn't know that a bag would keep on rotating until someone picked it up from the rack. Jeevika looked around in search of Viren and Virat, but they were no where to be seen amongst the crowd. She had no option. She decided to pick it up on her own.

Viren and Virat:-

After taking two trolleys:-

Viren: chal Virat, Jeevika aur Manvi humara wait kar rahe honge. ..

Virat: Haan bhai...chalo..

After a moment:-

Virat: Bhai, kuch vibrate ho raha hai kya?

Viren: Haan Virat, mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hai..

Virat looked around and saw flashing in Viren's pocket.

Virat: Bhai! Aapka phone baj raha hai...

Viren checked his mobile, and indeed it was ringing, there was a call from his office.

Viren: Oh haan, meine phone switch on toh kar liya magar silent se hatana bhool gaya..

Virat: Office ka phone? Abhi kaun call karega?

Viren: Pata nahi yaar..shayad Mehra ji ke case ke bare mein koi important baat hogi... mein baat karke dekhta hoon..

Viren picked up the call. It was Inder on the other line.

Viren: Hello..

I: hello, Viren? Tumlog sabh kaise ho? Flight theek se land ho gayi na? Tumlog hotel pohoch gaye kya?

Viren: Haan chachu, mein viren hi bol raha hoon, sabh theek se ho gaya, flight bas abhi abhi hi land hui hai..aap bataiye, aap, chachia ur shlok kaise hai?

I: Hum sabh toh theek hai, tum bas humari chinta mat karo, apna trip enjoy karo!

Viren: Ji chachu...waise, boliye, aapne achanak kyu phone kiya?

I: Woh mujhe dadaji se baat karni thi, unka phone switch off aa raha hai...

Viren: Oh, shayad woh on karna bhool gaye honge..par chachu, hum toh luggage le rahe hai...

I: Haan, acha tum ek kaam karo, tum unhe yeh bol dena ki mein yeh case akela sambhal loonga... aur ek problem aa gayi hai..

Viren: Kesi problem chachu?

I: Humne criminal ke khilaf jo bhi sabooth ikhata kiya tha... woh..

Viren: Woh kya chachu?

I: Doosri company ne usse destroy kar diya hai..

Viren(shocked): What!

I: Haan, toh isliye abh humein wapas se sabh chaloo karna parega..

Viren: yeh toh bohot buri khabar hai, chachu are you sure ki aap yeh case akele manage kar loge? Aapko koi dikat(problem) toh nahi hogi na? Nahi toh mein aa jata hoon, meine dadaji se bhi baat ki thi..

I: Arrey nahi nahi Viren, tumhe aane ki koi zarwat nahi hai...tum aaraam se apni holiday enjoy karo... Wese bhi humare office mein bhi jo lawyer hai na Mr. Bhushan, woh bhi iss case mein meri madad (help) kar rahe hai... tum chinta mat karo..

Viren: Theek hai chachu, mein baad mein phone karta hoon, abhi hum airport pe hai..

I: Ok..ache se rehna.. Bye

Viren: Ji, Bye..

Viren cut the line. He was feeling very angry because all their proof, which they had been collecting from a week, was destroyed. Virat had heard all the conversation.

Virat: Kya hua bhai? Sabh theek toh hai na? Aap bohot pareshaan lag rahe ho?

Viren: Mein tujhe sabh baad mein batata hoon, abhi chal..

Jeevika:-

She stepped forward. The suitcase was coming closer and closer. She lifted it up and "OUCH"!

The suitcase fell on the floor with a THUD and Jeevika fell on her knees clutching her right wrist with her left hand.

She had forgotten all about her hand wound which she had got earlier in the airport. Tears gradually filled her eyes. Her nerves got a little swelled up because of the sudden jerk of her hand. The bag was heavy. Viren's handkerchief which was tied around  her wrist was now deep red because of the blood stain. The blood was oozing out of the napkin and Jeevika was horrified seeing se much of blood.

Jeevika thought: Mujhe yeh bhaari bag nahi uthana chahiye tha, agar mein thodi der tak Viren ji ka wait kar leti toh kya ho jata?

"Viren Ji" Jeevika muttered to herself, "woh kya kahenge jab woh dekhenge ki mera haath aise...?"

She was getting scared as to what all the family members would tell her for her being so careless. Especially, Viren and Manvi! They would scold her so much for being so irresponsible. She gulped. Tears flowed down her cheek, she couldn't bear the pain. It was hurting really badly. She somehow stopped herself from moaning and silent droplets just continued to make their way down her face.

Viren and Virat were walking down along the rack looking for Jeevika and Manvi. Suddenly Viren's feet froze. He saw Jeevika kneeling down, but her back was to him. She was very still which left Viren confused. When he saw the suitcase fallen down next to her he started to add things up. His eyes wandered around for Manvi, but they couldn't find her.

Virat: Bhai! Jeevika bhabhi aise..?

Viren: Virat... ek kaam kar... tu Manvi ko dhoond... Pata nahi woh kaha chali gayi, mein Jeevika ko dekhta hoon..

Virat: Theek hai bhai..

Virat went away. Viren ran to Jeevika. He sat down beside her and put his hand on her chin to lift her face up, so that he could see her eyes. He felt her chin wet. Immedietely he realised that she had been crying. He wiped out her tears and said:-

Viren: Jeevika...tum..tum ro kyu rahi ho? Kya ho gaya bolo na?

More tears wet Jeevika's cheeks.

Viren: chup ho jayo, please, bolo toh kya hua?

He hugged her.

J: Viren ji... woh..woh.. mera haath.

Viren: haath? Kya hua tumhare haath ko?

J: Jeevika lifted her right arm so that Viren would see her wound.

Viren looked down at her hand and saw the blood. As it is his mind was filled with that case and he was irritated because of the proof which was destroyed!  He stood up. His anger rose. He looked furious. Seeing him like this, Jeevika got up and stood behind him.

J: Viren ji...aap aise kyu..?

Viren turned around to face her.

Viren: TUMHE MEINE PEHLE BHI BOLA THA APNE HAATH KA KHAYAL RAKHNE, MAGAR TUM NAHI SUNI... THODE DER WAIT KAR LETI? KYA HO JATA? MERA SUITCASE UTHANE KE LIYE TUMNE APNE HAATH...

He stomped to her and lifted her hand.

Viren: DEKHO! KESE...KESE TUMHARE HAATH SE ITNA SAARA KHOON NIKAL RAHA HAI! TUM JANTI HO KI KITNI TAKLEEF HOTI HAI, JAB MEIN TUMHE AISE DEKHTA HOON, TUMHE DARD ME DEKHTA HOON? ABH ITNA KHOON NIKAL RAHA HAI! TUM HI SOCHKAR DEKHO... AGAR MERI AISE HAALAT HOTI TOH? AGAR MERE HAATH SE ITNA KHOON BEH RAHA HOTA TOH?

After pausing for a moment he said "TUM AISE KESE KAR SAKHTI HO JEEVIKA?".

Jeevika was just staring at Viren. She knew he was shouting because he loved her a lot and couldn't see her in pain. She just stood there, with her head down.

Viren calmed down. He realised that he had screamed at Jeevika. But he didn't mean it in the wrong intention. He released all his anger, looked down, closed his eyes and cooled his head.

Viren turned to Jeevika.

Viren: Woh..Jeevika, sorry, mera bolne ka..

J: Koi baat nahi Viren Ji! Mein janti hoon ki aap fustrated the.. mein samajh sakhti hoon, aap mere ache ke liye hi bol rahe hai... Its ok..

Viren smiled. Jeevika understood him so well.

Viren: Acha Jeevika tumhara haath dikhaao..

J: Koi baat nahi Viren Ji, aap hotel jaake fresh patti (bandage) baand dhena...

Viren: lekin tumhe toh bohot jor dard ho raha hoga na? Itna khoon nikal raha tha..

The pain had actually vanished. It was asif Viren's words had healed her. 

J: Nahi Viren ji, abh nahi ho raha..

Viren: Are you sure?

J: Ji...aur wese bhi, dekhiye na... Bleeding bhi stop ho gayi hai.. Abh mein better feel kar rahi hoon..

Viren: acha, fir bhi, tum ek kaam karo jaake Dadaji aur baaki sabhke paas jakar beth jaao.

J: Na...nahi Viren ji. Sabh yeh dekhenge toh bohot naaraz ho jayenge.

Viren: Kuch nahi hoga Jeevika.. woh toh samajhte hai... badi maa fir bhi agar tumhe daatengi (scold) toh woh isliye kyuki woh tumse bohot pyaar karti hai... Tum chinta mat karo..

Jeevika slightly nodded her head and went to the others.

Meanwhile VirMan:-

Virat found Manvi gazing at the escalstor. He hurried up to her.

Virat: Manvi..

M: Arrey Virat! Acha hua tum aa gaye, chalo na uss walking escalator pe chalte hai..

Virat: Nahi Manvi, abhi nahi..wo..

M: Kya abhi nahi abhi nahi? Tum toh aise bol rahe ho jaise mein yaha roz aati hoon aur isse roz dekhti hoon!

Virat: Abhi yeh important nahi hai Manvi..suno..

M: Arrey, har cheez important nahi important se thodi na hoti hai, mera man kar raha hai uspar jane ka...tum chalona!

Virat: Nahi Manvi, w..

M: Dekho tum chal rahe ho ya nahi? Nahi chal rahe ho toh bata do, mein akele hi chali jaungi..

Virat: lek..

M: Haan ya na Virat, itna time kyu waste kar rahe ho? Jaldi bolo na, waha sabh log wait bhi kar rahe honge! Mujhe jaldi hotel jana hai. Mein janti hoon, ki tum yeh bohot baar dekhe honge issliye tum excited nahi ho, magar mein toh yeh pehli baar dekh rahi hoon na, meri khushi ke liye toh kam se kam chalo na, plea...

Virat: MANVI!

Manvi was shocked.

M: KYA HUA HAI? Tum itna chila kyu rahe ho? Mein beheri nahi hoon, samjhe? Pyaar se baat nahi karna aata hai kya?

Virat: tum mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahi se rahi ho. Abh meri baat dhyan se suno..

M: Kya? Kaunsa pahar khara ho gaya abh?

Virat: Bhabhi! Unko chot lagi hai, bohot zor se, aur tumhe kabse iss stupid escalator ki padi hai! Chalo abh..

(Bhabhi has got hurt really badly, and from so much of time, all you care about is this stupid escalator)

M: KYA! Tum mazak nahi kar rahe ho na Virat? Yeh tumhari koi nahi chaal toh nahi hai na?

Virat: MEIN, BHABHI ko lekar ke KABHI BHI koi kisam ka MAZAK nahi kar sakhta!

M: Aur tum unhe akele chod aaye?

Virat: Pagal ho kya? Bhai hai unke saath! Abh time waste mat karo, chalo mere saath...

They both hurried off to find Viren and Jeevika. As soon as they reached the rack, they found Viren but Jeevika was nowhere to be seen.

M: Jeeju? Di kaha hai? Unko kya ho gaya tha? Woh theek toh hai na?

Viren: Manvi, tum kaha chali gayi thi? Jeevika ke haath se khoon nikal raha tha, abh better hai, woh Dadaji ke paas gayi hai...magar tum...

Manvi did not wait to hear the rest of the story she went off to Dadaji and the elders. Viren and Virat also took the suitcases and went to the sofa. Manvi was sitting next to Jeevika scolding her, Vanshika was trying to calm Manvi and Dadaji and Swamini bua were looking at the scene. As soon as the two brothers joined them everyone stopped and look at them.

D: Arrey Viren, saare suitcases aa gaye beta?

Viren: Ji dadaji, saare paach (5:30) baj raha hai, mere khayal se abh humein jald se jald nikalna chahiye. Dekhiye na, sabh thake hue hai aur hotel pohochne mein bhi toh time lagega.

SB: Haan bauji, Viren bilkul theek kehe raha hai! And anyways, Tomorrow is going to be a fun and busy day! Right?

Everyone smiled.

SB: So chalo, lets go!

Everyone got up and started walking. Viren pulled Jeevika aside and asked her "Tumhe pakka dard mahi ho raha hai na?" Jeevika smiled and shook her head. "And i'm really sorry for shouting at you, but i really didn't mean it in a wrong way!" "I understand Viren Ji.. Its ok".

Viren smiled and they went ahead.

Outside the Airport:-

V: Viren beta, driver o phone karke gaari lane ke liye keh dona..

Viren: Ji maa...

Viren calls the two drivers and tells them to bring the car from the parking lot. The cars arrive after a few minutes. Viren and Virat adjust the baggages into the car.

Viren takes Jeevika and goes to sit inside the car when Swamini bua stops him.

SB: ruko Viren..

Viren: Kya hua badi maa, koi saamaan chut gaya kya?

SB: Nahi.. tum humare saath doosre gaari mein chalo, humein tumse kuch important baat karni hai..

Viren: magar badi maa, Jeevika ka haath.. mera matlab hai ki..

SB: hum samajh sakhte hai Viren, magar Manvi hai na Jeevika ke saath, tum kyu fikar karte ho?

M: haan Jeeju, Mein di ka poora khayal rakhoongi, i promise. Aap buaji ke saath chale jao.

Viren looks at Jeevika and she assures him that she would be fine.

Viren: Theek hai badi maa..chaliye..

SB: Virat..

Virat: Ji bua..

SB: Hum chahate hai ki tum bhi humare saath chalo..

Virat: Mein? Par kyu bua?

SB: hum keh rahe hai na, chalo..

Virat(frowning): Theek hai..

SB(turning to Dadaji): Toh fir hum chalte hai bauji, aap sabh bhi aa jaiye..

D: Theek hai Swamini beta..

The 3 of them sit in the first car and drive away.

D: chalo, hum bhi chalte hai..

J: Ji dadaji...

They sit in the car. Dadaji in front and Manvi, Jeevika and Vanshika at the back.

Jeevika kept wondering what Swamini bua wanted to talk about, to Viren and Virat. She hoped it was not regarding the fact that Dadaji had said (about her feeling bad with Viren's excess of working).

Jeevika felt very weird. That was a strange day. First Viren had hid something from her in the flight, and now this new business problem. She was very confused. SHE NEEDED TO TALK TO VIREN OPENLY AND PROPERLY THAT NIGHT.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Thats all for this update!

I hope you'll liked it. I tried to make it long and funny.

Please do click on the 'like' button and dont forget to give your suggestions as well.

Thank you for reading and liking my SS!

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Finally read it! Big smile

It was such an amazing and long post! 

The wait was just worth it! Big smile

Well, Dadaji was right about Viren working and not spending time with Jeevika. I'm glad that Dadaji asked him to stay back and not go back to Chandigarh! *Sigh* 

Virat and Manvi. Gosh! They will never change. Love it how they keep fighting all the time. Looking forward to Virat's realisation! Big smile I hope that's soon! Will get to read exciting stuff .Embarrassed

VirIka - Loved it how Viren was guilty. And when he was scolding her about not being careful. Loved it! They have such a great understanding man! Heart Seriously! And then coming to that starting main hand main hand wala part.. Embarrassed Aw! I could imagine it all! I'm looking forward to them sorting out that matter!

As a whole, it was just perfect! 

How I wish, you could be the script writer for the serial! LOL

Anyways, Great job! Thumbs Up




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Superb update...
the wait was worth...:)
thnx 4 d pm.
nd pls update soon...


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Good updateSmile
Involving all the characters is always good...
Loved it...Big smile
Thanks for the PM...
Continue soon...

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