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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update can't wait to c wat virat makes manvi do
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome absolutely brilliant
Posted: 11 years ago
nice update continue soon thanks for the pm and pm me
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...

Luved the jeeju-saali nd devar-bhabi scenes...:)

Thnx 4 d pm...nd such a long update too...
Posted: 11 years ago
thank u for the fabulous and long update... :D
it's really good and thanks for the pm
continue sooon 
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by kushalkidewaani


Overall:Man...how do you manage to write soo well??...I'm like totally addicted to your writin...I didnt check my If for days and I came on today just to check if you updated...: and Wow this update was once again commendable yaar...:)...so now lets divide this apprciation comment into segments... :)

Note:Thank you for giving me the note :)...I guess I probably would have been preety confused without it :)

Devar-Bhabhi:I justt loveeed this btis the most even more than the Jeeju-Saali bits :)...I loveed Virat's dialouge when he explains Viren's wishes to Jeevika about getting to know her better :)...I loveeed the Hi-5 part...The part when Virat pulled Jeevika's cheeks was absolutely adorable...But most of all I just love the way Virat makes Jeevika blush :)

Jeeju-Saali:I adored the Jeeju-Saali bits as wel...My favorite was when Viren had mistaken Maanvi for Jeevika...Man that prt made me LMAO...I wouldnt say much abotut this Jeeju-Saali Duo kyunki jab log ye log saath hote hai toh everyone knows ki unka has has ke halaath kharab hone wali hai :)
Precap:As usual,your Precaps always excite me lekin this one yeh wala has over excited me yaar...I cant wait for the update...I mostly excited because as an ultimate VirIkian I get to read very few Virika updates and your precap about the Unchaai thing...makes me over-excited :)...By reading all the three precaps I predict that there wil be more of VirMan in the upcoming part...but I'm excited for that too as I am a VirManian too :)

Obera

Hi... Thank you for such an encouraging comment..
Yeah, you have predicted right- there will be virman in the next update!
I'm really happy that you are liking my update..
Just by the way, if you are a virika fan then why do you have a virman picture?
Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update dear !!!!!! your updates are just mind blowing ,they are super entertaining , just love your writing style .


looking forward to the next chapter .




thanks for the pm .
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
Hope there is more of Virika in the next part.
Continue soon
And thanks for the PM.
Posted: 11 years ago
read all the updates
thanks for all the pm
all parts r awesome especially the virika scenes
update soon
Posted: 11 years ago
just read past few updates... its superb! lovely ff yar.. pm me for the next :)

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