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Arshi FF: THE VALLEY OF LOVE- update at page 76 (Page 2)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
sounds very interesting... I am already loving it..bring it on meniWink

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 9:13am | IP Logged

Chapter 2

Khushi was the life of Yashvardan and Radhika. She was the light of Ramida house. Without her presence the whole house is dull and gloomy. And now Khushi was went for a medical camp at Mumbai for one week.

Manhotra's lives in a well organized society in Delhi. They maintained a good relationship with all their neighbors in the society. Khushi was the main reason for this bonding. Everyone over there knows her well and loves her a lot, as like she. Now as she was not here everyone over there miss her badly and as a result, everyone keep enquiring about her to Radhika and Malik.

Yashvardan Manhotra was the well known industrialist in India as well as in the world. He was considered as "the king of the business". His business style and the way was undefeatable. He was the best in all ways. His strength was his family, he only surrender his head before them. Actually he only accepts his defeat before his soul, his Khushi. He was a very possessive father and a best friend to his daughter.

Radhika Yashvardan Manhotra, even though she was the wife of a multi-millionaire, she is so down to earth. She is kind and simple. Khushi was her life...her "gudiya"...her gudiya rani.. She knows her very well, after all she is a mother. They  were like buddies, sometime Khushi calls her as "radz". Radhika is the only one person allowed in between father and his daughter's space. But sometimes yash does not allow her too, as he was a very possessive father. But that never made a difference to her at all, because she was a really really understanding wife as well as mother, who loves her family more than her life.

 Khushi's relationship with her parents was different. Her parents was her best friends forever. She shares each and every moment in her life with her parents. She was simple and charming, and most importantly less talkative but not as silent too.

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Evening

At ground

A group of boys were practicing the football in the ground. Then Sam  approach them and said

Sam-"hey guys...did you know??"

Jhon-"about what Sam??"

Sam-"that a new family came to live in our colony..."

Jhon-"ya..we heard about it...some Raizada's ..right?"

Vijay-"ya...I saw their house name plate.. its.. its.. shanthi... or something na?"(try to remember but fails)

Sam-"its Shanthivan , you idiot.."

Vijay-"whatever..."(giving a not interested look)

Jhon-"so what about them Sam? Is there someone of our age?"

Sam-"oh.. I came up you to ask the same ! yaar.."( making a sorry face)

Jhon looks him so disgustingly, where Vijay smiles.

Vijay-"I thought that you are up with something...but as usual nothing???"

(starts laughing)

Sam-"o.. at least i know  the correct house name...so don't show up your teeth that much.."

Vijay and Jhon exchanges a look.

Jhon-"ok..fine.. did you submit your maths project? Last day for submission is on Thursday..okay?"

Sam-"o..no..man..!!"(tensed up)

Vijay-"what happened?"

Sam-" i thought the last date is on Monday..and what will I do now..?

Maddy is also out of station..o..crap..!"



Edited by meniranjana00 - 09 May 2012 at 6:18am

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
Hey i just read your story and its fantastic great job thanks for pm cont soon

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Very interesting start and i see you have thought a lot about the story from the character sketch. one tiny request i would make ia when you do the dialogues space it out a bit( when hou type) with the character so its easier to follow. I hope you do not mind me saying that. Coz you havs many characters in the story its easier to keep track like the second chapter was easier.

Very interesting concept

Edited by TeleFan - 05 April 2012 at 8:20pm

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
Interesting story. Nice.

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
hey a very interesting start its lovely can u please pm me when u  update its fantastic specially the characters are all awsom do continue soon

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
Congrts n best wishes on ur new venture...thnx for the pm..sorry for the late reply,i ws really busy.
loved it..

Edited by Dew_drops - 06 April 2012 at 7:27pm

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Starnice start..Clap

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