OMG I have tons to say, but will need to wait until later. I just took a quick break from packing b/c I HAD to read your new FF/SS. What you wrote about the location/scenery was extremely descriptive and I could picture it vividly in my mind. Great job!!! Oh and I love that our 'lead' is a sexy mechanic. A sexy mechanic possibly turned tycoon at a later date!?! Those self-made men are the dreamiest...hahahaa Hope that's where this is headed...eee
Oh and Anne, I've been meaning to ask you about your policy on asking for quicker updates... Please note that I have always used a 'can't wait for the next update' line rather then telling you to hurry...hahahaa However, I'm wondering if telling you not to update until I get back from my trip will get you to ADD 5 extra lines to an update!?! Let me know if that will work b/c I'll gladly ditch my usual boring line...hahahaa
Great start and can't wait to see some interaction b/w Khushi and the hottie mechanic!!! K, well back to packing...ugghhh
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