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shart : Rang Gaye Tere Rang Me chk note on 121 (Page 103)

Noshin_Diya Senior Member

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
nice part!!!!!  Rithvik & Maan knows each other seems once they were good friends. well m loving the track continue soon egarly waiting for the next 

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 11:53pm | IP Logged

Guys I am seriously disappointed by decreased likes and comments I gave my most of the times for last update as it was long enough for me 2700 words 
plz guys don't be a silent reader
  its hurts a lot seeing that plz co-operate me it's encourage me a lot


Shart : Rang Gaye Tere Rang Me Part 23

They three reached to home and went to their respective rooms

After some times Geet Penetrate into Maan's room , At that time Maan was reading book sitting on couch Geet came from behind and encircled her hand around his eyes

Maan thought that who it can be other than Geet but he wanted to tease her
Maan touched her hand and act like thinking

Maan : umm…who's this…?? I am not getting u ..I think Mona

Geet : unhu

Maan : Than I am sure it's Gunjan

Geet frowns on that and immediately remove her hands 

Geet : Maan u r sooo

Maan smiles at her antics and grabbed her from shoulder and made her sit on his lap

Maan : Geet me to kya …??

Geet pouted cutely, she was looking so adorable that Maan wanted to eat her alive

Geet : I don't want to talk to u , leave me

She tried to freed herself but Maan tighten his grip

Maan : Geet jab tum gusse me hoti ho to bahot hi

Geet smiled within but soon she covered it with fake anger

Geet : bahot kya..??

Maan : Bahot hi buri lagti ho

He suppressed his laughter 
Geet hit on her arm and twisted her lips

Geet : leave me , I don't want to talk to u , you are so mean

Geet was about to go when Maan tract her and she fall on his chest 
Geet lost herself in him , both had a brief eye lock

Maan : Geet ..

Geet : Hmm
still lost in him

Maan : I was just saying whenever you become angry u r looking damn cute

This made Geet come back to reality , she get up above him

Geet : liar kahike

Maan : ye achha he Geet agar sach bolu to tum gussa karti ho aur agar jooth bolu tab bhi

Geet Made a O

Geet : Maan iska matlab tum jooth bol rahe the he na ..!!

Maan : nahi Geet esi baat nahi he , I was just joking

Geet : Ha ha sab janti hoon me *pouting*

Maan back hugged her

Maan : sachhi Mishty , Tum har vaqt har har emotion me kahi bhi ho kese bhi muje hamesha achhi lagti ho ..!! bas dekhne vale ko meri nazar se dekhna hoga

Maan made her turn into his arm , Geet lost herself in his deep darken eyes 
She smiled and kissed on his cheek

Before they continue their talk

Ritvik shouted : Geet ye kya ho raha he..??

Geet parted herself from Maan

Geet fumblers

Geet : Bahi wo…me..woo

 Then she saw Maan's book and immediately take it

Geet : ha bhai wo me Maan ki books lene aayi thi exams k lie

Ritvik : Tumhari notes kaha he ..?

Maan : Wo mene perfection k sath likha tha is lie

Ritvik : Hmm… Le li books ..??

Geet : ha bhai

Ritvik : Achha Geet Me tumse ye puchne aaya tha k muje mera room batado

Geet : Wo bhai sorry but u have to share room with Maan

Ritvik & Maan together : what….??

Geet : kyu kya hua …!!

Maan : nahi wo I m soo happy for that he na ritvik..??

Ritvik : Hmm me too

Both gave fake smile to each other. 
Geet left from there


Maan was arranging his books and clean the bed 
Maan laid on the left side and then Ritvik put some pillows like making Pillow-wall

Maan : What are you doing….??

Ritvik : Can't u see , I am just making wall between us

Maan : Itni narazgi…?  That now u can't share a bed with me..!!?

Ritvik : nope I can't forgive u for that but may be u forgotten that I have a habit , mere hath pau nind me bahot chalet he

Maan smiled : ya how can I forget that…? Geet also having the same habit

First Ritvik take it easy then he realize something

Ritvik(angrily) : How do u know..??

Maan relaxing : Pata chal jata he…

Ritvik : ese kese pata chal jata he …??

Maan : Hey dude relax , it was just Geet told me , Tera dimag ither uther mat chala

Ritvik : Hmm… Par baat jab tere pe aati he to dimag chalana padta he and one more thing I am not your dude okay..?
Maan : Ha ha pata he ..pata he..!! ab so Ja Good night

Ritvik : And bed dreams

Maan : tere sath rahunga to vese bhi bad dreams hi ayenge

Ritvik twisted his lips and turn himself to another side  


Next Day Morning

Geet open her eyes feeling hot sun-ray on her face

Geet : yawnnn Itni jaldi subah ho gayi

She rubbed her eyes and saw the watch

Geet panicked : OMG it's 11'o clock I am late , Mene Maan ko 9 am ko kaha tha k me collage pahoch jaungi rehearsal hall me , Ab to vo pakka naraz hoga

She immediately got ready and rushed to collage


At college ,  rehearsal hall

Geet saw Maan was roaming here and there

Geet : he Maan k babaji muje bacha lena

Geet goes to Maan

Maan : Geet ye koi vaqt he….!? I am waiting for u since 9'o clock aur tum abhi aa rahi ho great

Geet : I am sorry Maan wo I was sleeping

Maan : Ohh Very Good so Ms sleeping beauty was sleeping and here I am waiting for her very good

Maan was in anger but Geet knows how to melt him in seconds
she hugged him

Geet : Mere champu ko mere vaje se wait karna pada …, I m sorry Maan

She made a cute baby sad face , Which can melt anyone
She looked at Maan

Maan : By making such kind of faces u always pacify me 
he engulf her tight , Geet kissed on his chest where heart located

Then both did some dance practice ofcourse with some naughtiness of Maan as we know champu can't dance sala lolzz
after sometimes then both sit on the bench getting tired , Geet rested her head on his shoulder

Geet : Maan ek baat kahu ..?

Maan : Ms Geet handa kabse permission lene lag gayi huh..??  

Geet : Maan when u and bhai are best friends then I think I should told him everything about our relationship

Maan : ya Geet I have no problem if u wanted to tell but I think he will not like our relation

Geet : but Ritvik likes u

Maan : I don't think so he will like me for u

Geet felt it awkward

Geet : Maan tell me the truth

Maan : Geet kya truth ..? Its nothing__

Geet(cutting in) : Maannn meri kasam tuje plz bata do job hi ho

Maan : ok fine to suno

Precap :

Past of ritvik & Maan


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kiran_rati IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged
nice update
waiting to know past of maan and rithvik
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

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Donnaa IF-Addictz

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged
awesome update
maan teasing geet..
maan n ritwik share a room...
geet want to know abt maan n ritwik...
loved it...

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Rang_ Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiran_rati

nice update
waiting to know past of maan and rithvik
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

Thanks dear will update soon Big smile
Rang_ Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dona86

awesome update
maan teasing geet..
maan n ritwik share a room...
geet want to know abt maan n ritwik...
loved it...

Thanks for ur lovely comment Big smile
Infinity. IF-Addictz

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Awesome part...loved it

ElienoreMG IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Waiting for maan and rithvik's past...

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