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Ok guys so here I am with update (2700+ words )
I am seriously disappointed by decreased like and comments but still I am here with long update and 1 poem
Plz plz give me long long comments and lots of likes
Part 22 Shart : Rang Gaye Tere Rang Me
5 days went well'
All is happy in their life and got settled in their new home ', Maan and Geet were having good time with each other and Maan never left a single chance to be with His Geet and he has became more naughty now a days
There is more 5 days left in competition and 15 days left in exam
Maaneet in Geet's room ...
Maan was sitting in Geet's room and Geet was sleeping in Maan's lap and he was caresses her hair
Maan : Geet ..
Geet : Hmm..
Maan : Don't you think we are doing smething opposite from others ...??
Geet : opposite ...?? Kya ..?
Maan : jaha tak mene dekha he GF bethi hui hoti he and BF uski god me soya hua
Geet get up and encircled her hand around his neck , pulling him more closer
Geet : wo kya he na champu ! Hum wo ashik he jo log karte he wo kabhi karte hi nahi
Maan : Achha ...!!!
Geet nodded cutely which can melt anyone in second
Maan come above her and pinned her to the bed .., and slowly came close to her and started brushing his lips with her and kissed on her cheek near lips
Geet got the idea that he want to torture her and a naughty idea came in her evil mind
She rolled over maan and came above Maan and held his hands more strongly
Than licked his lower lip , and kissed nearby his lips , than kissed his earlobe and bit it
She open his shirt button with her mouth and started kissing his chest and bit his nipple .Maan groaned as he felt a current run down his spine
Maan glared at her which she returned with a smirk..
Maan : Geet it's enough of your torture otherwise I will go wild
Geet : giggled softly '!
Geet : Than who is stopping you ..!!!
She smirks at him'
Maan : achha ye baat he wait Ms Handa.., I will saw u who is the MSK and what is the punishment to torture him ..!!
He immediately rolled over her and cruse her petty body under her rock solid body and pinned her both hand to the bed
Geet gulp hard seeing him like this
He digs his long finger on her waist and started to make pattern there 'and his lips got busy in licking her lips
Then he came on her neck and started to suck the place with so much passion
she tried to freed herself but her tiny afford didn't do anything
She closed her eyes feeling him
He started licking his collar bone .., Geet bit her lower lip to control her moan
Maan came down and pull her top a little to explode her waist
He rubbed her belly and then started licking that portion
Geet moaned : Maan please ,
Maan : kyu bahot maza aa raha than a muje torture karke ..huh !
He said huskily , and on this Geet pouted cutely
Maan : Don't look at me like this otherwise I will eat u alive
Geet : I am all yours Maan
Maan freed her hand than in no second he took her petal lips with his and started to kiss her hungrily
He gave her open mouth kiss than he nibbles her lower lip and sucks it hard
his hand was busy in exploding her , he was about to unzip her top
Before they continue a loud knock came on the door , both felt annoyed and frustrated
both were panting heavily ,Maan rested his forehead on her
Geet : Maan get up ! I have to go to open the door and better you go in wash room
( Maaneet don't wanted to tell about their relation to everyone , it was geet's wish as she don't wanted to be teased by her friends )
Maan made a puppy face
Geet : No , It will not work on me now , just go
Maan went to wash room half heartily and Geet open the door.
Uday : Geet me kitni der se knock kar raha hoon ', Where were you..??
Geet : Uday wo..me'wo.. Ha wo me na wash room me thi is lia !!
Uday ( with suspect ) : Hmm' okay wo I just came to tell u that Ritvik is came to meet u !!
Geet ( excitedly ) : sachhii '!!!!
Uday smiled at her excitement
Uday : Ha Muchhi '.!!
She hugged him and he hugged him too'
Geet : yeeehhh .., I am so happy , u know
Uday : ya I know about your happiness !
Geet : Achha when will he come '.??
Uday : umm , actually don't know as he told me that he will give u surprise !
Geet : hmm okay
Uday left and after that Maan came out
(Maan didn't hear anything as wash room of Geet's room is far away from door )
Maan hugged her from back ..,
Maan : what happened Geet '?? You are looking extremely happy ..!! May I know the reason behind my princess's happiness ?
Geet smiled and turn in his arm
Geet : Maan can u hug me tight ?
Maan hugged her tight
Maan : Geet , what happened ?
Geet hide her face in his chest
Geet : Nothing Maan
They stood like this for sometimes .., Geet was in deep thought
Geet (ST.) : I think , muje Maan ko Ritvik k bare me sab bata dena chahiye , I should not hide anything from him
Geet To Maan : Maan , Wo Mene tumse ek baat chhupai hai ..!!
Maan : which one..?
Geet : wo I told u na that I have only my father in my family
Maan : so ..??
Geet : so I lied u .. I have also one brother
Maan : But Geet why u did this ..? I mean agar tum muje pehle batati to kya fark padta..?
Geet : Maan it's a long story ., except my friends no one knows about my family past
Maan looked at her in confuse
Before Geet could complete her cell rang , she pick up it
her cell phone was loud enough so Maan can here caller's voice
Geet : Aap aa gaye ..!! Itni jaldi ??
Caller : why..?? Aren't u happy for that ?
Geet : Nahi esi baat nahi he .., I m so happy Ritvik that u r coming in india after so many years
Ritvik : Mil k baat karte he aapse
Geet : Ok bye love u
Ritvik : Love u too
Then he cut the call
Maan made a baby face , Geet saw him and thought to make him burn in Jealousy
Geet : how much he cares of me ., I really love him a lot
Maan ( with fake anger ) : Who was he '??
Geet (naughtily ) : He koi jisse me apni jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hoon
Maan grabbed her from shoulder and his sudden jerk made her fall on his rock solid chest and he made her stand on his feet
Geet was dumbfounded with his rudeness
Maan : Geet u r only mine and only mine none other can even touch u
Geet was just seeing in his desireful eyes
Both had a brief eye lock .
Geet was 1st to broke the eye lock and kissed on his cheek
Geet : Oh my possessive boyfriend .., I was talking to my elder brother
Maan :Brother ..?? ohh I m sorry
Geet : Maan don't be sorry I am so happy to see your possessiveness toward me !
Maan : Sachhi '??
Geet kissed lightly on his lips ..
Geet : Muchii .now I have to go .Ritvik is waiting for me
Both parted from each other and Geet went to his brother who was waiting for her in living room
Ritvik is Geet's brother who lives in London , His father (Geet's father) is not talking with him and he broke each relation with him when he was just 16 yr old
( I don't want any bash if anyone has problem that here Vivin is Geet's brother lolzz)
Geet immediately rushed to him and hugged him , he hugged her back too
Geet : I missed u soo much in these years
Ritvik : I missed u too Geet
He kissed on her forehead
Geet hit on his arm
Geet : liar
Ritvik : nope sachii I missed u
Geet : Achha ji '.!! Then why didn't u come to meet u in all these years ..!!
Ritvik : I m sorry Geet but u know the reason
Geet nodded in positive
Ritvik : vese ye achha ji aur ese words to tum kabhi nahi bolti thi , may i know the reason ?
Geet : wo ..wo kuch nahi bhai ese hi
After while rest of gang including Maan
Geet introduce everyone to her bro ., everyone know about her brother and his past and her bro also knows about everyone (except Maan) as she always tell everything to him
After introducing everyone she came to Maan
Geet : Ritvik , aur ye he ..
Ritvik : Maan ', Maan singh khurana Right..?
Geet : ha but how do u ___
She was suppose to say that how does he know as she never mention him in her talks
Ritvik (cutting in) : But Geet u never tell me about him right..?
Geet : Ha wo Ritvik Maan se ham sab kuch din pahle hi mile so and phir aapse baat hi nahi ho payi
Uday : Ritvik u must be having jet-lack , u should take rest
Uday said that to change the topic
Ritvik : Hmm ok let's go
Ritvik eyed on Maan which Maan just returned with a smirk
Geet found something sticky between Maan & ritvik just like they knows each other but they are enemies of each other from ages
Ritvik left and Geet came near Maan
Geet : Maan how do u both knows each other ?
Maan : Geet I think u should ask this to your BROTHER
He said the word "BROTHER" with bitterness
Geet just nodded her head and went to Ritvik's room
At Ritvik's room
Geet : Ritvik
Ritvik : are Geet tum ..!!
Geet : Ritvik , now will u please tell me how do u know Maan ?\
Ritvik with fake smile : why ? Maan didn't tell u ?
Geet : if u don't wanna tell me than fine
Geet's anger just takes a tole on her , he throw the door
Ritvik knows her anger,
Ritvik : ab is Maan k chakkar me mene Geet ko bhi naraz kar dia
He goes behind her and shouts
Ritvik : GEETTT '..
Here Maan also realized that because of Ritvik he makes his Geet upset and he rushes to sunset point
( Maan & Ritvik both know that when Geet get upset then she used to go at sunset point)
Both's car parked at the same time , both get out of the car at the same time , both saw each other
Ritvik : what are you doing here ?
Maan : What if I ask u the same question ?
Ritvik : I am here for my sister
Maan : so I am here for my Girl
(He was about to tell that he is here for his Girlfriend , but then something stopped him he thought about Geet and stops )
Ritvik : Girl'?? What..?? What did u said ?
Maan (with stammer) : WO'I 'mean'to ..say that ..ha Geet meri Friend he jo girl he' ha
He took a relief breathe
Ritvik smiled : tumhari abhi tak wo jooth bolte vaqt haklane (stammering) ki habit gayi nahi
He said like he is just forget what happened ..like he is just forget that now he is his enemy
than suddenly he remember his own word that he has habit of stammering whenever he lies
Maan felt strange but inside he was happy also
Ritvik : aur nahi jooth bolne ki
Maan : some people can't trust anyone
Ritvik : some people can never spike the truth
Maan : what can anyone do if someone believes lie than truth
Ritvik : here is no one who is trustworthy
Maan : it's all up to u
Before both can continue their never ending fight they saw someone's anger spitting eyes , it was none other than GEET'
Both saw her with baby face which she returned with shaking her head negatively
she goes away in anger and sit on the bench nearby
Maan & Ritvik both just stared at each other
Ritvik : I don't want to see my princess upset
Maan : same here
Ritvik : we have to act like we are besties in front of her
Maan nodded in yes yes
Both went to Geet, who is sitting on the bench
Maan sit on the right side to Geet and Ritvik sit on left one
Ritvik : Princess esa kuch bhi nahi he jesa tum soch rahi ho
(Ritvik used to call her princess when she is angry or upset)
Maan : Ha princess
Ritvik glared at him being a possessive brother as he has only right to call her princess
Maan gulp his saliva
Maan murmured : ye bhai bahen (bro & sis) sirf angry glare dena hi jante he
Maan to Geet : I mean Geet Ritvik is right actually we were best friends
Geet raised his one brow
Ritvik : Geet he means we are best friends but vo hua yu ki ham dono london me sath rehte the and we were room-mates and then without informing anyone I mean without informing me he just went to India and when I suddenly saw him here I was angry on him that why he didn't inform me .., so we were just fighting u know just like two friends who met after sometimes so like that
Maan : ya Geet he is right
Geet : Aap dono sach bol rahe ho na '!!!
Maan : Geet tuje muj pe bharosha (trust) nahi..??
Ritvik muttered under his breath : Tuj pe to bharosha kia bhi nahi ja sakta ..!!
But Geet heard it
Geet : Ritvik what did u just said..??
Ritvik with fake smile : umm nothing wo just I am telling that he is not trustworthy , dekha nahi kese muje vaha chhod k aa gaya tha ..!!!
Maan : Ha to ab sorry bola na
Ritvik : sorry har cheez ka malam nahi hota
They started their cold war again
Geet : now u both just keep quiet and short out your differences quickly, I don't like this cold war
Maan : okay okay don't be angry ,now all is fine and ye cold war to ham salo se karte aaye he jabse ham mile so it's quite normal , nothing serious
Than maan to Ritvik : he na Ritvik '???
Ritvik : Hmmm.. He is right '!!
Geet : ok then let's go ..!
Maan & Ritvik : hmmm'.chalo
All three drove off to the home
Geet was driving the car and Ritvik was beside her and Maan was behind
He was back in his chatter patter style and starts his nonstop talks
Ritvik : ye sala kabhi nahi sudhar sakta
Geet (st) : aap uske sale (brother in low) banoge
Then Geet to Ritvik : sahi kaha aapne
Geet : I am so happy that Ritvik and Maan are best friends so I think Ritvik won't mind of our relation
conceivably she knows about their present relation
Pyar karna to itna aasan hota he jitna aasan bota he palke japkana
Par pyar nibhana utna hi muskil hota he jitna muskil he bina palak japkaye sona
Aur pyar k bina jina matlab palko k bina jina
Aur apna pyar kisi ke lia kurbaan karna matlab jeete jee apni palko ko donate karna
There are many undefined words in this word Love is one of them
Kai logo ne mujse pucha kya hota he pyar ka matlab ., kya hoti he pyar ki paribhasha (definition)
Jisko kisi paribhasha se samjaya jaye vo pyar hi nahi , aur jo pyar ko samjane bethe vo to insaan hi nahi
(poem by me copyrighted)
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