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Posted: 11 years ago
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 dear...😃
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
n me  not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
but now me cheack all updates ...me just  dear..😛.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 4 ur hard work.👏..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
the job up dear..Clap..

 

 
 
 
 
 




 
keep ing dear...😃
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NOTE: ME'LL NOT COMMENT OR VISIT THEM ..WHO NEVER BE ON MINE..ME ONLY ABLE TO THEM WHO ALWAYS WITH ME
 
 
 
 
Posted: 11 years ago

First of all , I am really very sorry please forgive me for too late update … I have many reasons for late update

The 1st one is from so many days I m in hostel

2nd one is my lappy wasn't with me

And 3rd one is when my lappy came back to me , I hadn't network connection lol

 

And now enough of my bak bak and enjoy this update

Part 18

Both Hugged Each Other With Eaqal Fever , Forgetting The Damm World  ,

Jab Kisiko Pyar Hota He Tab Unke Liye Sirf Ek Hi Ehsas Mayne Rakhta He Pyar , Ek Hi Insan Mayne Rakhta He Aur Vo He Uska Pyar , Ek Hi Duniya Mayne Rakhti He Uske Pyar Ki Duniya

Maan Kissed On Her Tears ,Then Kissed On Her Check One By One And Then Pick Her Nose Tip
Geet Open Her Mouth To Say Something But He Instantly Kept His Palm On Her Lips , She Dumbfounded With His Love , Her Touch Awaken Her Inner Touch

Geet Closed Her Eyes Felling Him, He Took His Palm Back And Brought Her Closer And Slipped His Hand In Her Bare Waist, And Kissed On Her Lips Slowly , Both Drown In Passion

Maan nibbled her lower lips and chewed it for sometime…then done same process with her upper lip
then bit her lips and then suck it hard to sooth her pain

She open her mouth and gave him permission to realize each and every corner of her ….,
Maan was having sweetness of her mouth and Just Then They Heard A Loud Bang On The Door , Maan Made A Puppy Face And Geet Giggled Seeing Him Like This

Maan : Badi Hasi Aa Rahi He Na Tumhe ??

Geet : Tumhe Ese Dekh K Koi Bhi Has Padega !! Look At Your Self

Maan Made A Baby Angry Face ! He Was About To Held Her But A Loud Voice Of Uday Made Him Come Back To Senses

Uday : Maan Where Are U Open The Door ! Pata Nahi Ye Geet Bhi Kaha Chali Gayi ,

Then Both Realize Their Position , Maan Was Only In Towel And Geet Got Lit Wet Due To Their Closeness

Geet Looked At Maan With Baby Face ,

Maan : Geet Ek Kaam Karo Me Washroom Me Jata Hoon , Tum Door Open Karo Aur Uday Ko Bol Dena Ki Me Washroom Me Tha To Tum Meri Wait Kar Rahi Thi !

Geet Impressed With His Idea !

Geet : Pehle Bhi Kisike Sath Esa Kar Chuke Ho Kya !

She Asked Him With Joint Eyebrow , Maan Gave Her " U-R-Impossible" Look

Maan : Iske Bare Me Hum Baad Me Baat Kare Pehle Is Uday Ko Sambhal Le

Geet Twisted Her Lips And Goes To Open The Door , Maan Run To Washroom , Uday Shocked To See Her Here

Uday : Geet , What Are You Doing Here And Where Is Maan ?

Geet Stemmer : Wo…Wo…Wo..

Uday : Wo K Aage Koi Word He Ya Me Jau ?? (Lol)

Geet : Ha Wo Me Maan Ko Puchne Aayi Thi If He Wants My Help In Anything Or Not , But When I Came Here I Just Saw He Is In Washroom So I M Waiting For Him

She Took A Relif Breath , Uday Started Looking Her With Suspicious Eyes ,

Geet : What ?? Sach Keh Rahi Hoon Me

Uday : To Mene Kab Kaha Tum Jooth Bol Rahi Ho , But I Think Something Is Cooking Between You Two , Did You Proposed Him Or He Proposed You ?

Geet : How Did U Know This ??

Uday : Ooohhh It Means I Was Right ,

Geet Gulp Hard

Geet : No I Didn't Mean That !

Uday Started Teasing Her ,

Uday : So What What Was Your Meaning ??

Geet : I Mean Tumhe Esa Kisne Kaha K Mene Ya Maan Ne Ek Duje Ko Proposed Kia , Esa Kuch Avi Nahi Hua Samje ??

Uday : Okay Okay Baba ….. all are waiting for both of you

Geet : ya let's go , maan baad me aa jayega

Both headed toward dining area,

After sometime Maan came,  and join them ...

both were looking at each other from the corner of the eye ….

Geet forward her leg under the table and touched maan's leg ..Maan felt ticklish ….he laughed a little ..everyone started looking at him

Maan : sorry

Geet supresed her laugh ………Maan throw a angry glare to her .geet gulp hard …

After some time Geet again come to her naughty mood ,  she again forward her leg but at the same time maan took his leg behind and uday forward his leg unknowingly ,……..

 Geet again try to touch maan's feet with her one but unfortunetly it was uday's feet
geet smiled looking at Maan but he replied her with joint eyebrow…. Geet felt strange ….. and here Uday felt tickled

Uday came near to Geet and whispered

Uday : geet

Geet came back from her staring session ………..

Geet : hmmm..

Uday : geet ye mera per(leg) he , Maan ka nahi !!!

 Geet felt emberessment …..

Geet (looking down) : I am sorry

Uday(with fake anger) : better you first have your breakfast ,, phir Maan ko tang karna ….okay ???

Geet (without looking at him ): hmmm

Geet looked at Maan with anger filled eyes, he smirks at her ,

(He was next to uday so heard their convo)

She twisted her lips looking at Maan..

They done with their breakfast

Geet goes to her room angrily …. Maan goes behind her
she was about to bang the door on Maan's face but Maan somehow managed to enter in the room ….

Geet (angrily) : what are you doing here ??

Maan : tum itne gusse me kyu ho ??

Geet : wo pata nahi !

Maan hugged her from back

 

Precap : to be continued ;)

 

Next Update On 18 september ,(Tuesday)

Plz plz plzzz bless me with big big comment and lots of likes , its always encourage me to write

THANK U SO MUCH to them who gave me their feed back and sorry for not replying all

 

 

         

 

Posted: 11 years ago
maneet romance and table scene fab



Posted: 11 years ago
Wooo awesome part...
Propose bhi ho gaya... kissi bhi hi gayi... chupa-chupi bhi khel liya...
teasing bhi chal rahe thi... aur ab ruthna manana...
hayeee i din no ki yeh shy shy maan aisa bhi hoga...
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by tamanna1391


maneet romance and table scene fab





thanks😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by divya22


Wooo awesome part...
Propose bhi ho gaya... kissi bhi hi gayi... chupa-chupi bhi khel liya...
teasing bhi chal rahe thi... aur ab ruthna manana...
hayeee i din no ki yeh shy shy maan aisa bhi hoga...


aweee such a sweet one😃
Posted: 11 years ago

finalluyyy u gave the update.. hshhh..
hmmm.. nyc update mishty.. short tha bt i knw ur condition.. hostel jaane se pehle update de hi di. gud grl...
maaneet r besttt... yr old suspense to bta..
waiting fr nxt... hmmm hopefully on tuesday...
Posted: 11 years ago
wow...kya bahana banaye donone...aur geet phans gayi...he he he...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome back awesome update

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