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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome dear.
update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

interesting ff...

pl add me n pm whn u update...
waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet is falling for him..so only she blushed..maneet dance.w8ing
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum..

continue sooon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome

loved it 

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Posted: 11 years ago

So this is a surprise update , plz commant πŸ˜Š pm after 9 pm (in india)

part 9 : shart rang gaye tere rang me

At room

Geet : lets select a song for dance

Maan : what about the song "tu jane na " , it will be easy to dance for me

Geet (strictly) : maan , we are not performing to loss the compitition , bt I want to win this compition okay ???

Maan(murmered) : o teri , lagta he tikhi mirchi  bhadak gayi

Bt geet hear that

Geet : what did u just said ? come again

Maan : nothing ,I didn'tsay anything , how can I say anything to you he na !!

Geet : better ,  bt I think we should choose "pyar ki ye ek kahani suno , " we will fire the stage on this song , what say ?

Maan : no geet "tu jane na " is best for this

Geet : maan , u don't know how to dance then I will select a  song

Maan : geet , I agree tat I don't know how to dance but I know how to select a song okay ?

Geet : maan , bt we will not select a song "tu jane na"

Maan : geet sona plz , Mera vala song

Geet : maan don't try to butter me , I will not allow it oaky

Maan : then ok I will not dance with u                      he said with baby angry face

Geet : maan listen

Maan turn his face

Geet : maan suno to sahi

But maan not listning her and trying to saw his baby angry face

Maan(st.) : nakli gussa karne se maan jayegi kya ??

Suudenly one idea stuck in geet's mind

Geet : maan okay , I have a solution

Maan : kya ??

Geet : we can toss the coin ,

Maan : okay then I choose a head

Geet took a coin from her beg and toss it , she catch it and hide between her palm

Geet : ready ??

Maan : ha baba open it

Geet slowly open her palm and it was tail

Geet : look , I win the toss , so do as I said

Maan with baby sd face : off ! okay

Geet smiles with in , actully she has a coin whose both side have same sign tail , so jitna to ushi ko tha lol

Geet : maan , u wait hear I am coming after a sawer

Geet try to go , and maan come after her

Geet (angryly) : maan , y r u coming ? u want to come inside??

Maan : geet I am not coming after u bt this knot lead me after u

Geet : oh my god , now how can I go to take a sawer ??

Maan : if u don't mind I can '

Geet(cutting in ) :what ??? are u out of ur mind ?? u wanted to say u can come with me inside ??

Maan : geet , pehle meri puri baat to sunlo , I was saying if u don't mind I can open this knot , pata nahi tum kya kya sochne lagti ho !

Geet : maan, bura laga ??

Maan : hmm

Geet :  wo I m sorry

Maan : its okay

He smiles , she smiled back

Geet : Now let's dance

Geet play a Cd

Geet lead him and put his hand on her waist , geet put her hand on his soulder and they lock the other hand which is already tied in knok and she came close to him , maan shivered with her touch ,he looked away
bt geet indicate him to look into her eyes

Maan totally lost in her eyes ,

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno

 

Ek Ladka Tha

Ek Ladki Thi

Geet started moving herself forward and backword  in rhythem , maan follow her

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno

Ek Ladka Tha

Ek Ladki Thi

 

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha

Waqt Hi Aur Tha

Jab Woh The Ajnaabi

He twirl her and made her band behind , his hand on her waist
she twirl her self and came infront of his face by holding his nack

Dono Tanah Se The 
Per Woh Kehte Kise 
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi


Yo,Yo Yo Yo Yo

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Maan made her turn round and again pulles her back , she landed on his chest

Gumsum Gumsum Rehte The Dono
Phir Bhi Dil Mein Kehte Dono
Koi Sapna Hum Bhi To Paaye
Ek Din Tute Gum Ke Woh Ghere
Jhilmil Jhilmil Aaye Savere
Masum Badla Jaagi Fizaaye
Woh Mil Gaye 
Woh Khil Gaye
Aur Pyaar Ho Hi Gaya
Jo Chaha Tha Woh Paya To
Hosh Kho Hi Gaya


He slipped his hand on her waist and started dance with her

Both is totally lost in each other , geet shocked to see that maan is dancing

Both ended the dance

Geet : maan , u are a superb dancer , y u lied to me ??

Maan : geet , I didn't lied , actullly I even don't know that I can dance , kabhi try hi nahi kia is lia ,

Geet immideatly hugged him , maan also took her in his embrace

Loosen hug

Geet : maan  , now noone can stop us to win ,

Maan : ya we will win

Geet : but maan u need to learn some more steps okay ??

Maan assure us with his eyes tat he will learn , but suddenly his eyes caught attention on geet's wrist , he held it

Geet's wrist get red due to rashes , actully they dance with their hand tied , so tats y

Maan : geet , what is this ?? tell me where is first aid box ??

Geet : maan , it's not a big prob , leave it

Maan : geettt I said where is first aid box ??

He said so strictly that geet couldn't say anything , she only indicate the place with her other place

Maan (oops I mean both) goes to take box , then maan made her sit on the bed and he sat beside her , and started applying medicine on her wrist

Geet  totally lost in him , she was staring at him , she felt so special today bcoz of his careness
maan sees her staring at him , he ask her with joint eye-brow like what ?? she nodded her head to no no

Geet : maan , I m felling hungry and we can't go to caintin and cant at restorant
with this hand lock
she said with baby sad face , how can maan see his geet's sad face

Maan : so what's the big deal ? I will cook for u

Geet : wow u know how to cook

Maan : ya let's go

Both go to the mini kitchen in geet's large hostel room

Geet showd him noodls's packet
maan made a yuk face seeing that

Geet : I have only this one  , sorry

Maan : aah koi baat nahi , its ok I will manage

Maaneet made noodles , with some fun

Maan : yeh ur food is ready

He took one spoon of noodls and offerd to geet , geet opened her mouth
bt bfor she eat it maan eat it

Maan : hmm yummy

Geet's mouth went O ., : maannn

Maan : o teri , tikhi mirchi sant ho jao , ye lo
he again offerd her , geet still on her funnny angry face

Maan : sona plz eat it na !!

Geet look him from the corner of the eyes , then she eat it

Both smiles at each other ,

Done with dinner

Geet : maan , now I am felling sleepy

Maan : geet u sleep on the bad , I will sleep on couch

Geet : no , u sleep there I will sleep on the couch

Maan : geet I said first na

Geet : bt maan ladies first

Maan : oh , so u r a girl ??

Geet :hawww , what do u mean ha ??

Maan : I mean , noone can say that u r a girl , ur behave , clothes and all just as boys so do as I said
(as I said bfor geet is just as tom boy)

Suddenly geet sees the knot , she smiles with in

Geet : u want to sleep on couch na

Maan : ha

Geet : maan , kanun k hath lambe hote he nd hamare nahi

Maan : what ??????

Geet : maan ,       she sawed him that knot

Maan : oh no !! now what can we do ??

Geet : simple we will sleep togather

Maan gulp his saliva , listaning her

Maan : kya ?         its came like wishper

Geet : maan , I mean we have no other option

Maan : bt geet

Geet : trust me maan , I will not rape u ,

Maan : no I trust u (lol)

Geet burst out of laughing

Maan : oh so u were pulling my leg ha !

Geet : maan , u r champu , how can I rape u , let's sleep I m really felling sleepy

Both sleep togather in bad

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Precap :

Geet playing football in sleep (rolfz)

 

 

Edited by Rachanachag - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AMAZINGGG YAAR
PRECAP IS SOO INTERESTING BECHARA MAANπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Edited by maaniqra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.
so maan can dance...
maaneet ki masti...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear...i liked maan calling geet what is it...teeki mirchi...and that toss coining was lovely...and their cute dance & maan's cooking and sharaarate...wow..shoo cute dear...and geet's dialogue...kaanoon ke haath lambe hote hai...wow loved it...!!!!!!!"πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome...
Omg geet is too smart... Bt sara dimag wrong direction mai use karti hai..
Coin with nly tail... Bichara maan...
So maan is npt pappu...lol..
I will not rape u trust me..lol .. N maan ka ans... Super lol...
Sleep mai football... Maan toh gaya...