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Shart : Rang gaye tere rang me part 7
So hear is the biggest update , 2198 words , so plz give me bigg commant 

thank u so much to them who alwayss cmnting on my work 
hear I have one que , after 1 or 2 week I wanted to update my one ff /ss alternativly  , so whichu want on alternative base ? An intricate knok , redio love frequncy or shart , it depends on votes 

Geet : matlab kahi me bhi champu ban gayi to !!!

Geet ran from there by saying this , maan try to catch her bt couldn't

Maan : geet ruko to , geet

Geet stop and showed her toungh : luuu

 Maan : koi baat nahi baad me dekh lunga ,  geet ki bachhi

He also went inside

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All gathered in huge circul ,

Dev : I ll round the bottle

He round the bottle , bottle's mouth stop toward ARMAN         

Arman : oh no !

All cheared : dare dare dare

Arman : ok dare

Ridz : oh yes ! I'll give u task ,

She act like she is thinking

Ridz : haaa , look at that main gate , climb up on it and shout " I AM GAY" three times

All were dumbfounded with ridz's task

Arman : but basket , I am not gay

Ridz : I know arman bt it's a task

Arman : par isse to sab girls me meri reputation ki dazziya udd  jayegi , plz give me other task plz……….. he pleaded bt in vain , he looked at geet and said her to help him bt she said she can't do anything as this is a game and each game has their own rule , she can't breck

Now,  arman has no other option , he go to the gate and climb on it

Everybody cheering him "come on arman come on , u can do this "

Arman (wishpered) : I am gay

Ridz : shout Arman shout

He get some courrage and shout I AM GAY I AM GAY I AM GAY

All the people who were out side of the gate , they are started laughing on him , suddenly one idea get in to his mind and he shout  I AM NOT GAY 3 times and then climb down

Ridz : this is cheating arman

Arman smirks : every thing is fair in love amd war

Geet : so this is LOVE or WAR ??

Arman change the topic to ignor geet's question : let's play further

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Again bottle turned and it faced nupur

Mayank : truth or dare ?
nupur(with attitude) : dare

Mayank : ok so I m sit  opposite to u , so its my turn to give u task, and your task is U HAVE TO SHUT YOUR MOUTH TILL 2 HOURS

Nupur : nahiii

Geet :omg nupur bhusan aur chup

Nupur : theek he , task accepted

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Again bottle turned and it faced UDAY , and as the rules of the game manyata is opposite to him so she ll give the task and bfor mona say anything uv said Dare

Mona : think at once

Uv : I have no need for think twice

Mona : okay so ur task is AFTER TODAY U WILL NOT MEET ANY OF UR GIRL-FRIENDS

Maan shocked hear Girl-friendS

Uv : ok done

Its difficut for him as he is a ply boy

Geet murmed in uv's ear :mahenga padega

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Again bottle turned and it faced KHUSI

Arnav is opposite to her

Arnav : truth or dare ?

Khusi : truth

Arnav : ok so I am asking u a question " do u love me ?"

Khusi : as usual NO

Sam : arnav tera sapna pirse tut gaya

All laughed

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Again bottle turned and faced SAMRAT

Gunjan gave him task that HE HAVE TO DO STUDY HARDLY FOR 2WEEKS

Sam : padhai ????? wo bhi 2 weeks !!!!!!!! mar gaya

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Now the turn of BANI

For bad luck or good luck , geet was opposite to bani and maan was opposite to dev

Bani choose truth instead of dare

Geet : ok so I am asking a question :did u ever love anyone in ur life ?"

Bani wanted to say something bt realising maan beside her , she didn't say anything and all is waiting for her answer ,

She never says lie to geet nor she hide anything frm geet , for bani geet is everything , a silent tear made his way and came out of bani's eyes , noone see that but geet see that , for geet bani is her little gudiya , how can she see her gudiya in tears

Geet instantly got up and go to bani , she cupped her face with her both palm

Geet : kya hua bachha ?

Bani nodded her head to no no

Geet : apni di se share nahi karogi ?

Maan comes forward and held bani's hand : gudiya tell me

Geet : she will tell me

Maan : no I am her brother so she ll tell me

Maan pulled bani

Geet : so what ?? I am aslo his sister

Geet pulled bani

Maan : but we have blood relation

Maan agin pulled bani

Geet : but we have emosnal relation , and emotional relation is much grater then blood relation

Geet again pulled bani

Maan : ya I know that , and I have an emotional attechment with bani

Maan again pulled bani

Geet : ya but she will tell me

She pulled bani

Maan : no , she ll tell me

He pulled her again

Both held bani's hand and pulling her to their side

They continue their fight that to whom bani will tell her prob ? and in their fight they are pulling bani , pour soul was soo shocked to see that her bro can fight , in her whole life she never see her bro's fight

Dev came forward

Dev : ek minute , u both can continue ur fight bt why are u pulling bani's hand , she might be hurt

All : Ooo

Maaneet : ha ,

They left bani's hand and continue their fight

Maan : she ll tell me

Geet : no me

Maan : me

Geet : kaha na me

Bani(shouted ) : STOP ITTT BOTH OF U 😡, I ll not tell anything to any of u

Geet : dekha maan , she is not telling me jst bcoz of u

Bfor maan can say anything geet drag bani to other side , there is one bench , both sat there

Gee cupped her face

Geet : bachha can't u share ur problem with me ?

Bani : di plz I can't

Geet placed bani's hand on her head and said : tumhe meri kasam

How can bani says no now

Bani : wo di actully I ………I …..i

Geet : bol bachha

Bani closed her eyes tighten , not able to face geet and said in ong go

Bani : I love dev

Geet : then why are u not telling it to me ??

Bani : di my love is not more then my di , I love u more then anything and u also love him so I didn't tell u

Geet overwehlmed by her love , she also loves her

Geet :who said u that I love dev ?

Bani :means ??

Geet : first tell me , do u really love dev or  it's just a attraction ? I mean are u sure about ur fellings?

Bani : ya di , I love him  , bt…..

Geet closed her mouth

Geet :shhh I don't love dev

Then geet tell her everything that how they play a game to find out her fellings , bani happy that geet is not in love with dev and dev also loves her

Bani : di plz don't tell this to bhai (bro)

Geet : ok I promiss

Then both goes to others

Maan : what happen ?

Geet : ya wo actully i was asked her tat did u ever love anyone in ur life ?"so she remember her parents I mean ur parents

Maan goes to bani and hugged her side way

Maan : me hu na gudiya don't worry ok

Bani : ji bhai , but tell me one thing , why are u changing ??

Maan : what ?? he is confused😕

Bani : I mean u never ever fight with anyone , something is changing

Maan : nahi gudiya , nothing is like that

Bani : are you sure ?

Maan : yup let's play further

Geet twisted her lips like huh

Now maaneet sat beside each other

 

Bani turned the bottle round , and it stops between maan & geet

Nupur : oh it's tie

Maaneet twisted  their lips

Sam : need solution

Bani : I have a great solution

Dev : kya ??

Bani : why don't we give task to both of  them ?

Uv : but which task we can give to both ?

Bani act like thinking

Bani : we can tide bhai's left & di's  right hand , and they have to stay togather like this for 6 hrs

All : yes it's great idea

Maaneet : nooo ,

Uv : geet it's a task, u have to follow it

Geet : oh god ! why I am always stuck in this game , same as last time I have to do this..she said sadly

Maan : last time ??

Geet : nothing

Bani came forward and tied their hand

Bani : now u both have to stay togather , it ll help u to solve ur silly fight

She smirks

Geet : bani I ll see u ..she said with funny anger

Maan :me too …he also said with same expression

Maaneet see each other with  funny angry faces

Uv's phone rang , he picks the call

After the call

Uv : hey guys listen , exam ki date aa gayi he

Mayank : omg i have to go

Gunjan  : ya we have to go

Nupur : by god mene to exam k lia kuch kia bhi nahi

Uv : ho jayega …he smirks at her plan (he meant by copy)

Sam :  gunjan's task will helps me in exam .. he smiles at gunjan

Geet paniced : oh no !!

All rushed to collage exept maaneet

Geet : omg , examsss , I have to do something

She tries to go forgetting that her hand is tied with maan's hand  , that's why when she tried to go that knok held her and she hit herself on maan and both fell down on the floor 

Geet is above maan , there is not a single gape for air also , there were noone

Both were lost in each other's eyes , forget their fight also
geet felt a new felling inside,,  same as maan , he is looking her angelic face , and her deep eyes , geet is all lost in his calm eyes , which always shows her a sweetness and inocence

A flirks was on her cheek irritating maan , bcoz of it he can't see her face , 
he touched her cheek  , geet closed her eyes and he removed it and placed it behind her ear

Both were still lost in eachother and geet is still above him

Bt their drolling seasion irrupted when geet's cell ring 
geet  tried to get up but she again fall on him bcoz of tat knok on her hand 
maan held her from waist

Mahiii mahi ve mahi mahi ve mahiii☺️

Maan : ek minute

Geet : hmm

Maan helps her to get up ,but again bcoz of that tide of knok she about to fall but bfor she fall , two strong arms held her from waist 
that time geet felt thousand butterflies flying in her stomack

Maan left her as again her cell rang

(kabab me haddi phone  )

Geet recived it ,

It was her ded's call

Geet : ded , are you coming na !!

She talked for sometimes and then cut it

Maan :your ded ?

Geet : ya he is coming ..she said with happy face

Maan : it seems that u are so close to your ded

Geet : yes , she is everything for me

maan : and mom ?

geet wanted to ignor that mother's topic

geet : maan , we are getting late let's go

maan : but how can we go , I mean …….. he sawed her the knok

geet : we can take a taxi ,bcoz we can't drive

maan : ok

both take a taxi and reached to collage

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Precap :

EXAM + DANCE(?????) + Becoz of knok on their hand they have to stay togather👏
plz sujjest me a song for maaneet dance

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Edited by Rachanachag - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome

loved it 


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 dear...😛.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 4 PMing me..😊..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
4 ur good job..👏👏..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
ur updates..⭐️⭐️⭐️..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
keep the  job up dear..👏..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
keep ing dear...😃
 
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb bani love dev good and all like all punishment in game but armaan's is the best maneet tied together



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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...
chalo thank god bani loves dev n now no more acting...
lol geet n masn fighting... maan is changing n m loving it...bt more dan dat m loving ki geet is feeling... bani is smart ... nice dare...
i vote for both shart n IN
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Posted: 11 years ago
 Awesome part deat..
 Love it...
   
 
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loved it...
awesome...
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awesome
loved it
cont soon
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Superb... Loved it...
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part 7
nice part...
cont soon dear...