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Ordinary Girl..(Look for a new romance on pg 61) (Page 45)

segad IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Thanks for updating.  Love your story

Confused by khushi's emotions in this update.  At one point, she cannot give him another chance.  But towards the end it seems like she might give him another chance.  Oh well, will have to stalk for the next update Big smile


Edited by segad - 13 July 2012 at 11:39am

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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
It was mind blowing dear..u described it beautifully..the scenery,feelings, convo b/w thm.evrythng was amazing.i simply loved it.
Hey!aftr commenting i saw that u've update 20th part.loved it buddy.u described the past very beautifully. Eager for K's reply.:)

Edited by blue-eye - 13 July 2012 at 12:16pm

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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Another update so soon! Be still my beating heart!

Loved the chapter and now waiting with bated breath for Arnav to come back to the table and Khushi to deliver her verdict!

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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
wow two updates.. loved both of them..

it was such a calm still fun ride they had.. so well explained the emotions they went through..

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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by segad

Thanks for updating.  Love your story

Confused by khushi's emotions in this update.  At one point, she cannot give him another chance.  But towards the end it seems like she might give him another chance.  Oh well, will have to stalk for the next update Big smile

If that's how you feel then it means I've been successful in putting her emotions across successfully.

 The girl who was hovering between the question of whether to forgive or not forgive finally came to a decision at the end of the post.. why? she remembered the fundamental fact of Arnav. She also took notice of his vulnerable heart that he had laid open in his eyes in the end. 
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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Excellent...Loved it Clap
The Flash back was Mind-blowing...Arnav has gone through soo many things in this chilhood...Disapprove
Allthrough first khushi dint want to gave him a second chance but after thinking from all the corners she decided to give him a chance...Smile
Cant wait...
Plzzz continue soon

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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
nice one!! der outin was nice.. last line was awwsum!!

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Posted: 13 July 2012 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
Awesome UpdateClap

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