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Ordinary Girl..(Look for a new romance on pg 61) (Page 23)

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
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Brilliant update, no wonder you are tired, it was an emotional upheaval for both Khushi and Arnav and looking after kids... so exhausting!! you handled Arnav's self discovery beautifully.!!!

The field trip and the Nainital countryside were brought to life with your description! 

So Arnav will pull out all the stops to bring Khushi around!! Interesting journey... so plenty of rest before the next updateSmile 


Edited by Drwho - 26 May 2012 at 11:09am

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 10:18am | IP Logged
 thank u for pmBig smile loved it 

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
A fab update!!
The idea of going on a camp was really good...Loved how u described their activities ..

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Yes it was long but it showed us how arnav had changed so was much needed and Loved  the line something soft and goey had spread over khushi awesome

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
wonderful update..

i like this arnav .
he changed 4 better

thanks 4 d pm

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by scarlet_angel

oh god!

it was such a long chapter!!!!

thanks alottt hon!

it was beautifully written...

arnav;s dialogues were awesome!

thanks for the pm dear..:)

love..<3

xoxo

Thanks hon. SmileAm glad you liked it. It took me an entire week to turn this stubborn, headstrong Arnav into the humble creature who would now change his ways as far as Khushi is concerned. 
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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rhearuhi

Yes it was long but it showed us how arnav had changed so was much needed and Loved  the line something soft and goey had spread over khushi awesome

Thank you. Smile Am glad the chapter was up to your expectations. 
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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged

Love the update ...

simplyt FAB nd kinda reminds me alittle of camping ...
 
can't wait tor ead more of ArHi and the precaps sounds good ...
 
Thanks for PM ...
 
PLEASE UPDATE SOON ...

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