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Ordinary Girl..(Look for a new romance on pg 61) (Page 23)

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Posted: 26 May 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smelling_salts

Originally posted by Drwho

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Brilliant update, no wonder you are tired, it was an emotional upheaval for both Khushi and Arnav and looking after kids... so exhausting!! you handled Arnav's self discovery beautifully.!!!

The field trip and the Nainital countryside were brought to life with your description! 

So Arnav will pull out all the stops to bring Khushi around!! Interesting journey... so plenty of rest before the next updateSmile 

Thank you for your kind words. To be honest with you, I'm discovering something that I had never known before by writing this FF. The characters have their own life in your head and do not really listen to what you want them to do. They just flow with their actions into your mind and make you write the stuff. It is interesting that in my mind Arnav wishes to change himself and wishes to tell Khushi "Mujhe apne rang main rang de." 

I AM exhausted but the darn couple doesn't let me sleep. LOL Chapter 13 is full of passion and keeps me awake with its happenings. 

@ bold above, you are an inspired writer, that is the reason it flows so naturally!! Oh so these two are giving you sleepless nights are they!! like wayward children refusing to behave!

Well, send them to the 'naughty' step !!

Looking forward to the passionBig smile

 

 

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Posted: 27 May 2012 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
So glad both are getting to know each other on diff levels.
Can't wait for Arnav's deeds

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Posted: 28 May 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
read it all in one go..superb story...realization of Arnav and Khushi was subtle. Awesome

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Posted: 28 May 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by guyinoblivion

read it all in one go..superb story...realization of Arnav and Khushi was subtle. Awesome

Welcome to my FF and thank you for liking it. :) Next chapter coming soon. Wink
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
So then.. after a lot of tussle between Arnav and Khushi, they've finally come forward to have a word with you about their past..steam is rising from their bodies for the moment.. full of passion to come. Read on.. Wink  I wish to know if your heart beats increase along with Khushi and Arnav's when you read what they go through. Smile  Don't forget to like the blog link and comment here please. Thanks! 

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Superb update. Awaiting for nxt

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
amazing update ...loved how they strted to get into each other...hope kushi can put the past behind her and move on...keep on writting...

Edited by flowers4u - 29 May 2012 at 7:32am

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by flowers4u

amazing update ...loved how they strted to get into each other...hope kushi can put the past behind her and move on...keep on writting...

Thank you. Smile BTW, I love your signature quote "Don't waste a minute not being happy. If one window closes, run to the next window — or break down a door."... absolutely right! Wink

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