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Ordinary Girl..(Look for a new romance on pg 61) (Page 19)

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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

nice story...i wish she'd tell her sis n grandma abt wat happened...i think its unfair to push a girl back to d guy who doubted her char evenif she love him...

Wonderful thought Ashred! Sometimes when a person is too hurt, it takes them time to open up. Khushi is not a character that can be pushed towards anyone without her own free will. Nope. So she is going to come up and talk about it herself. I am glad you are looking at it as more than a story. You're actually looking at the deeper meaning! Smile

My mother says, one never knows what goes on between a couple. It may look like they're an unlikely pair but they may be just ideal for each other and sometimes it may look like a pair made in heaven- only for the parties involved, it's hell. 

We seen it often in reality, don't we?Confused My FF wishes to bring across a single message. 

"Love involves a peculiar unfathomable combination of understanding and misunderstanding."- Diane Arbus

It is found that people in love go through constant struggle between understanding and misunderstanding; forgiveness and repentance.  

I don't want Khushi in my FF to go through a compromise of any sort!  I want Arnav to fully understand and acknowledge that he's done her grave wrong and make amends by understanding her better. 

If only people communicated better by telling each other what they think and try to understand each other; if they talked when they made mistakes, even if it hurts and even if it involves guilt, remorse, forgiveness and falling in love again, we wouldn't be having so many divorce cases around the world. People wouldn't fall out of love then. 

Sadly I can only make that happen in my story and not around the world. But I sure as heck am going to make sure my Arnav-Khushi understand it. Smile

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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 12:26pm | IP Logged

now i simply cant wait for the chapter!

 

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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Hmm excellent preacp, I was slightly confused initially about whether this was happening in the present tense or was a flash back, then went back to read chapter 11 again! and so it is clear now that it is happening in the present.

I feel these two need to have a complete no holds barred show down. That is the only way the demons of the past can be exorcised. Something needs to happen to show Arnav that Khushi is a changed person as a result of what he has done and that he cannot put her through such agony again!

Likewise Khushi should be shown by him how much he wants her forgiveness and what it means to him, and to what lengths he will go to earn that forgiveness...

Anyway excellent precap and eagerly awaiting chapter 12Smile

Love your mum's thoughts about what goes on between couples, its a weird world which only the two people understand and no one else!!!

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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Hey really liked ur FF..Please PM me when u update.. Smile

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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Drwho

Hmm excellent preacp, I was slightly confused initially about whether this was happening in the present tense or was a flash back, then went back to read chapter 11 again! and so it is clear now that it is happening in the present.

I feel these two need to have a complete no holds barred show down. That is the only way the demons of the past can be exorcised. Something needs to happen to show Arnav that Khushi is a changed person as a result of what he has done and that he cannot put her through such agony again!

Likewise Khushi should be shown by him how much he wants her forgiveness and what it means to him, and to what lengths he will go to earn that forgiveness...

Anyway excellent precap and eagerly awaiting chapter 12Smile

Love your mum's thoughts about what goes on between couples, its a weird world which only the two people understand and no one else!!!

I'm stuck on a particular scene at the moment due to Khushi's feelings in Chapter 12 and am waiting for her to realize what she must do to retain her dignity as well as to feel what Arnav is going through. 

As to my mum's thoughts.. yup, I thought it was all crazy thinking until I met the man of my life and went through my own set of ups and downs.. LOL seriously mums do know the best! Wink

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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 3:58am | IP Logged
i'm glad u understood wat i wanted to say...it doesnt happen mostly... :)
agree with ur post...glad arnav will realise d extent of damage he had done...
i tend to think more abt d girl than d guy...bit feminist i guess... :)

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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shimmeryscarlet

i just came upon this FF n i think its awesome!
plz accept my buddy request..:)

i love how arnav is portrayed in ur FF...:)

Thanks ! Smile
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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

i'm glad u understood wat i wanted to say...it doesnt happen mostly... :)
agree with ur post...glad arnav will realise d extent of damage he had done...
i tend to think more abt d girl than d guy...bit feminist i guess... :)

The show is all about Arnav whereas my story, me being a female is all about the female lead and her feelings. Smile  Your views say nothing wrong, in fact I think it's good for a woman to keep a little feminist in her alive- not let the feeling empower her completely but a part of her needs it I think. 

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