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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: kyunki_iloveu

lol...tht was completely funny...Wht The.and unbelievable...suitable for both boy and girl..lol..


True that! ;) :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww cute OS...
luved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awww cute OS...

luved it..


Thank You! :) 

Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww so cute n funny, love it xx
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArhiDeewani

Awww so cute n funny, love it xx


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyaluver1

omg so adorable :) lovely os 


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... that was a cute piece...loved their little interaction... hope to see this on the show... how nice would that be...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank You! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is my third attempt at posting and i just pray that this time i make it :s

Where do i start? This is perfection!!!! I mean, honestly, if i had to pick out my fave parts i would end up pasting the whole OS here:p

Lol i still can't stop sniggering, which doesnt help as everyone is giving me eyes right now :p and i am probably redder than u were when u wrote this;) khushi's 'haw. Badmaash' is so the perfect reaction to arnav-thats probably how i have been reacting ever since he started being all naughty in the days before they got married.

Truly, it feels like you stepped into the minds of each and every character- and captured the soul of IPKKND! The transition from the gentleness arhi share which suddenly turns to passion and just as suddenly turns into an adorable fight and then to jocularity- i can so imagine their married life like this! Khushi as adorably crazy and unpredictable as always- and arnav's temper quick to flare and quick to die, that omg combination of tenderness and mischief. You brought them both alive in this OS, and very few people have succeeded in that.

The ending was just brilliant! I laughed out loud at that point. I dont even know to explain how ingenious that was- khushi's responses to arnav's timeless catchphrases were just- awesome! And of course tge escapades of the crazy raizada parivaar- i could literally hear them saying all that, esp mamiji :-) AMAZING writing!

PS: sorry for being this late in commenting. And you'll hear more from me soon:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

This is my third attempt at posting and i just pray that this time i make it :s

Where do i start? This is perfection!!!! I mean, honestly, if i had to pick out my fave parts i would end up pasting the whole OS here:p

Lol i still can't stop sniggering, which doesnt help as everyone is giving me eyes right now :p and i am probably redder than u were when u wrote this;) khushi's 'haw. Badmaash' is so the perfect reaction to arnav-thats probably how i have been reacting ever since he started being all naughty in the days before they got married.

Truly, it feels like you stepped into the minds of each and every character- and captured the soul of IPKKND! The transition from the gentleness arhi share which suddenly turns to passion and just as suddenly turns into an adorable fight and then to jocularity- i can so imagine their married life like this! Khushi as adorably crazy and unpredictable as always- and arnav's temper quick to flare and quick to die, that omg combination of tenderness and mischief. You brought them both alive in this OS, and very few people have succeeded in that.

The ending was just brilliant! I laughed out loud at that point. I dont even know to explain how ingenious that was- khushi's responses to arnav's timeless catchphrases were just- awesome! And of course tge escapades of the crazy raizada parivaar- i could literally hear them saying all that, esp mamiji :-) AMAZING writing! 


PS: sorry for being this late in commenting. And you'll hear more from me soon:)


So you have decided to make me blush like a tomato, have you?! Lol!

Thank You so much! :)

I am so glad you liked it and explained all that you did so beautifully! Really helps a writer! :)

And coming from a writer like you, it means a lot. :)