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FF: Teri Ore.. Updated Part ten on pg21 (21/5) (Page 4)

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Wonderful update dear..carry on..loving Ahem's character..he will ask her something naughty tonight ..kiss or..???Wink

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Beautiful update! Embarrassed Love how Ahem is getting drawn towards Gopi! Plzz continue! Smile
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SriB

Prithi, truly awesome. Can't wait to read more, what is Ahem going to say? Will he find  out ?? please continue soon.
 
oh..thanks so much for the comments.. making you wait a bit longer for what Ahem will say.. hope you still like it.. Tongue
 
Originally posted by Aish3003

Wow... Loved the scene where she sees him and smiles radiantly and then restrains herself... Beautiful!! 
 
Thank you.. so glad you liked it.. i know it was a small part but this is what i love about Gohem, the small actions and glances and smiles.. hope my writing does the characters justice.. Tongue
 
 
Originally posted by sbp1971

Really nice OS, please continue soon.
 
 
Welcome to SNS forume. Hoe you enjoy yourself here.
 
Thank you for the warm welcome and the positive comments.. hope you enjoy Part two.. Smile
 
Originally posted by -neela-

Aw what a lovely os, it's always nice to ready Ahem's inner voice Smile
 
there wasn't much of Ahem's inner voice in Part two, but i do promise, he will be back..
 
Originally posted by swasthi

Welcome to the forum and thank you for an interesting OS.
 
I look forward to reading more of your stories on this forum.
 
Thank you Swasthi for the welcome and comments.. definitely enjoying writing so hopefully more stories to come soon..
 
Smile
 
Originally posted by ShaunSA

Wow that was great Prithi!!! Clap Clap Clap

Looking forward to the next Chapter! Cool

And if this was your first attempt I can only imagine what you are going to do as you go on! Thumbs Up
 
Thanks Shaun.. Big smile.. hopefully i can live up to this applause.. 
 
 

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Wonderful update. naughty Ahem bring it on. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Lovely update.
 
I enjoyed Ahem and Gopi far more than Jigar and Rashi.
 
I cannot wait to know what he is going to ask from her. It has to be something more than a kiss.
 
Update soon.

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
lovely update.. i really loved the raji parts.. wish it was shown like this.. much better.. please write raji in coming updates too.. i like them much much more than gohem..

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
nice update...loved the raji scene...it was very sweet...plzz include raji in the coming updates as wellSmile

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
lovely update...i like this pace ...cant wait for ur next update prithi...

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