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FF-Sarhad paar ki ek kahani {part-4,pg-28) plz read (Page 28)

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Posted: 06 December 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged


Maan sees Gazal. She was so scared. Her lips were trembling with fear. She was

 sweating heavily. The accused soldier comes to Gazal. Her eyes were stick on the

 floor. She was looking here & there.

Soldier: Mujhee...mujhee maaf kar dijiye dubara aisa kabhi nahi hoga...

Gazal was not looking up . She was looking down with teary eyes. Soldier goes from there.

M: tumhey darney ki zarurat nahi hai. Sab theek hai ab, woh wapas nahi aayega.

Gazal nodes her head, she goes from there. Maan looks at her while she was just walking and turns. In a mid way she turns back and look at Maan.

G: Suniye...

Maan turns and again looks at her.

G: shukriya... {She turns and start walking again }

In a room:

Vidhi was getting ready, she was setting her dupatta when she looks herself in

 mirror and her eyes popped out in surprise. She was about turn when he comes

 and hugs her tightly. She was so startled that she was not able to react..

Boy: Baby I missed you so much...

Vidhi was shocked and when she heard her voice then she came to know that he is

 actually there. She hugged him tightly and closes her eyes. Yes it was none other

 than Raj. He smiles lightly.

Raj: Oh mera bacha itna miss kiya mujhe..

Vidhi was in tears. She just nodded her head while hugging him. Raj caresses her

hair and  looks at her. She was in tears. Raj smiles and wipes her tears.

Raj: no more crying hmm.. I don't like tears baby...Smile

Vidhi smiles: Raj lakin aap yaha...Smile

Raj: yes sweetheart I am here for you...aur ek aur news hai...

Vidhi: Kya bataiye ..

Raj: I have joined Air force... And I am posted in Leh... aaj hi formalities puri karke yaha

 aaya hu.

Vidhi: Wow Vaayu sena {air force} hum kitney khush hai aapke liye... humari taraf se

 dher sari shubhkaamnaye...

Raj smiles: thank you..but no more this typical hindi shona...

Vidhi: okay so happy for you...

Vidhi hugs her...Raj also hugs her...


Lawn Scene:

Gazal comes in sees many people. She was scared but yet her eyes were searching

 for her  best friend Rashmi. Avanti sees her and she comes to her. Gazal sees her

 and smiles little.

Gazal: Ji who humhey rashmi sey milna tha...

Avanti: ha zarur beta..mujhe acha laga ki tum yaha aayi..

Everyone was waiting for ceremony to start. Even prem also came with his

 friends and family. He was curious to see his sweetheart...Vidhi comes down and

 brings rashmi with her. Prem looks at her. she was looking so pretty. Rashmi

 comes to prem. She takes blessings of prem family. Maan was also there, when

 someone put hand on his shoulder. Maan turns and sees it. It was raj...Maan was

 also surprised like vidhi...He hugs his brother...

M: tum yaha...

raj: yes bro...woh kya hai na bro n aapke bina mera waha dil nahi laga..

M: tu nahi sudhrega...ab jaldi bata how you came here

raj: bro  maine air force join kar liya hai.

M: what??? air force... r u joking dekh agar joke maar raha hai na toh i will not spare you...

Raj: bro its not a joke...yeh dikhiye { he showed him documents}...

Maan checks it two times he gets a big shock but he was happy for his small bro..

M: so leh mey posted ho,,,,congrts raj...

Raj hugs maan and maan ruffles his hair...he sees vidhi...

M:vidhi ko bataya...

Raj: hmm

M: so happy for you lakin yaar bahut bada jhatka bi hai chal lets meet sir and mam and rashmi and prem...

Gazal comes Rashmi ...She hugs her and wishes her for engagement. Rashmi was 

so happy to see her best friend there. Rashmi holds her for sometime as like they

are meeting after ages... Vidhi smiles at them... Maan and Raj comes but stop 

after looking Rashmi and Gazal...


Imp note: i friends this is your friend kajal . I am updating this ff after so many

 months...sorry guys...please read this like and long comments...thanks

 and love u all,,,,,Tongue

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Donnaa IF-Addictz

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Posted: 07 December 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged
kajal after long time u updates...
nice update
gazal is so scared...
the accused solder says sorry too gazal...
raj too join air force...n came to leh...
maan is happy for his brother...
loved it...
hope u'll update next part soon...
how r u???
hope u r fine :)
punam2712 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 December 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posts: 51601

Posted: 08 December 2013 at 2:57am | IP Logged
part 4
nice part...
cont soon...

PS - can u plz post the link when u update in this thread dear?
FF Daily Updates 8 Groupbie

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Posts: 72

Posted: 09 December 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
hey...after so long time... fabulous...ultimate
u know i am liking Raj more than Maan...
OMG air force...eee really every character is realistic...
I mean i can imagine Karan wahi as raj in air too gud
this raj character really suits him...
Gazal and maan were gud...
aww her yar...
looking forward to see more...
update soon dear...

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