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FF-Sarhad paar ki ek kahani {part-4,pg-28) plz read (Page 14)

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by todayzstar

Aww..amazing updatee
cntnue sioonn..


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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by megh_piyashi

amazing update dear...



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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 7sanjiri

Update soon

thank u dear so much
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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by punam2712

LOVED THE BONDING BETWEEN MAAN AND FAMILY
ALL ARE SO CLOSE
MAAN IS IN THE FORCE
BET HE LOOKS DASHING IN HIS UNIFORM

HE IS GOING TO A DANGEROUS AREA ya he is




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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Awesome
loved it.
please update soon.

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wow Kajal superb. thank u dear..anytime sweety loved it so much.Smile. jaisa decide hua tha u make it totally different but only one thing is there and that is diwali... haaye me too drooling over maan. new ideas come while writing..yeah i know while some ideas came.. raj was so funny..Smile now precap is nice...Smile will they meet? LOLsomewhere i knew the answer but it depends on u...Smile waiting for next tuesday.Smile.. keep it up..
love u dear...
love u dear me tooEmbarrassed
and thanks for making it according to both of us wish(u & me) Smile

when will you update next part... me waiting eagerly...Smile

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Part-2 

Batakot Village: {morning time}

In the morning Jahangir was doing his prayers {reading namaaz} Gazal was making tea for her abu. She came and stand behind her father and smiles seeing him. Jahangir finished his prayers and stands up and sees Gazal smiling.. he also smiles.

Jahangir: hmm meri gudiya aaj subah subah itni khush kya baat hai beti
Gazal {giving tea}: Abu { father} hum aapse izazat {permission} maangney aaye hai.
Jahangir {sipping tea}: woh kisliye beti jaan
Gazal: Abu aaj pass ke goan mey mela laga hai, mey aur naaz waha jaana chahtey hai.
Jahangir: o nahi nahi beti kaisa baat karta ho tum hum tumko waha nahi jaaney dega {stands up}
Gazal: lakin abu kuch hi ganto ki baat hai, hum waada kartey hai jaldi wapas aa jaayengey

jahangir looks at gazal with worried eyes Shocked

Gazal{ smiles, comes to him}: abu hum koi choti bacchi thodi na hai ki kho jaayengey bas yu gaye aur yu aaye
Jahangir: tumari zid ke aagey aaj tak tumara abu ka chala hai. Lakin azu ko kya kahogi
Gazal: ae lo yeh toh humney socha hi nahi {she makes innocent face}
Jahangir: ha toh beti jaan jaaiye aur usey manaiye uske baad jaaiye. lakin ha hushiyaar rehna aur ghar jaldi wapas aa jaana. {he turns to go}
Gazal: Abu

Jahangir turns while going, Gazal nodes her dupatta Smile

Gazal: woh hum azu ko bi saath le jaaye
Jahangir: dekho beti azu chota hai aur jab sey woh haadsa hua hai azu ke liye bahut fikarmand {worried} hai
Gazal: hum jaantey hai abu lakin aap fikar mat kijye hum uska pura dhyan rakhengey.

Jahangir thinks for sometime and gazal looks at him with questioning eyes..

jahangir {smiles}: theek hai beti jaan le jao par zara sambhal kar
jahangir goes {murmers}: paagal ladhki
Gazal:{smiles} : ji abu khuda hafiz {good bye waves her hand}

Here maan also reaches to village . He has to report Maj. Nayor {Army intelligence officer}. 

Maj. Nayor: He is a strongest, intelligent person in Indian army. No one is smarter then him. Army chiefs says Mr. Nayor has eagle eyes to catch lies and enemies and detect them. He doesn't want war, want to live his life in peace with his family. But time has decided something else for him so he has been posted to Batakot village. Maj has two beautiful daughter Rashmi and Vidhi. His wife Avanti.  Maj always want boy and want him to be like in army. But Maj. Nayor loved his daughters too much and consider maan as his son. Both Rashmi and Vidhi consists Maan as his brother. So now Capt. Maan Singh khurana will going to stay with them.




Maan comes in with another solider carrying his luggage. Maj. Nayor was reading book. He looks up, smiles and rush to Maan. Maan hugs Maj. Nayor tightly. Meanwhile Avanti, Rashmi and vidhi joins them. Maan looks at them and smiles.

  {Avanti Nayor W/O Maj. Nayor}

Maj. nayor: so captain kaisi thi chutiya tumari.

Maan in attention position and salutes him.

Maj. nayor: yaha tum mere under nahi ho capt yeh ghar hai field nahi. 

Maan smiles. Rashmi and vidhi runs to him and first antra hugs him. 

 
{rashmi elder daughter of maj nayor.. very bubbly , she is getting engaged}

Rashmi: Maan bhai aap kaisey ho.
Maan: hey sweety bilkul fit and fine like always n u
Rashmi: o bhai its so bore here yaha kuch nahi hai, i dont know papa ko kyu jagah pasand hai
Maj; { removes his specs} betey duty comes first, rashmi makes face.
Maan: fikar mat kar ab mey aa gaya hu na
Rashmi: yeah yeah i know u bas duty shuru honey ki deri hai lets see kaun kitna free rehta hai.

Maan sees avanti comes to her and touches her feet. Avanti hugs maan.

Maan: kaisi hai aap mam
Avanti: jaisey tum chodh kar gaye they
Maan: o common aap bahut slim hogayi hai mam
Avanti { looks at her stomach}: nahi toh

Maan start laughing..

Avanti: aatey hi badmaash shuru hogaya tu.

Scene shifts:

Gazal making something in chulah { a kind of heater or cooking gas}, she gets up and comes to room. Small baby sleeping hugging gazal dupatta with him tightly. Gazal sees him and smiles. She comes to him and bends down kisses his forhead. She caresses his hair.

 

{Gazal brother and sister in law Ayaan and khwaish khan.. both are died will reveal in story soon}



{Gazal brother and sister in law son Azaan khan 3years old.. he was only 4 months when he lost his parents... from that time Gazal takes his care.. she is just like mother to him but he loves to call her too much.. very innocent , soft spoken.. he cannot live without Gazal a min. Gazal himself is nave but she loves azaan more than a mother . sometime she becomes kid with azaan}


Gazal: humare shehzaade uthiye dekhiye subah hogayi hai...
Azaan: Ammi {mother} humheey aurrr sonnaa haaiii

Azaan was still sleeping...Gazal removes the curtains from window

Gazal: hmm theek hai toh aap so jaaiye hum abdul aur rehmaan ko apney saath le jaatey hai meley mey.

 Azaan gets up in jerk.. Gazal makes him sit on her lap.

Gazal: aap kyu uthey aapko toh sona hai na...
Azaan: ammi  humheeey biii saath jaa na hai...{ he kept his head on her chest]
Gazal: chaliye phir hum aapko jaldi sey tayaar kar  detey hai...

Scene shifts:

Vidhi looks at maan, Maan comes to her and smiles. She touches his feet. 



{Vidhi second child of Maj. nayor. she is funny , studious and great fan of hindi culture and traditions and loves Raj}

Maan: hey vidhi kitni baar kaha aisa mat kiya kar...mujhe lagta hai mey buddha ho gaya hu
Vidhi: brahta shree {brother} aap jaanety hai na humare purano aur shastro mey likha hai.

Maj. Nayor, Avanti, Antra and Maan makes faces.

Maan:yaar vidhi {he put his arm around her} maana ki u r researching on hindu culture and traditional values lakin is research ke chakkar mey lagta hai tera maansik santalun {mental balance} bigad gaya hai...

All of them laughs and vidhi makes faces... Antra comes to maan

Rashmi: bhai iska toh roz ka aisa hi hai... yaha bahut acha mela laga hai chaliye na chaltey hai aur mujhe kuch  lena hai
Vidhi: lakin didi brahta shree {brother} ko thoda vishraam {rest} toh karne dijye {she puts her specs up}
Rashmi: arey meri puraney zamaaney ka upgrade model tujhe bi chalna hai {she turns to maan} bhai kal meri engagment bi toh hai na phir aisa maukha kab milega... plz chaliye...{she looks at maj. nayor} papa plz boliye na.
Maj: hmm meri princess kuch kahe aur mey na sunu aisa kabhi ho sakta hai jao
Maan: lakin sir yaha kitney kaam hai.
Maj: woh sab hogaya hai tum jao aur waisey bi parso sey tumhey duty join karni hai phir mauka miley ya na miley.
Maan: theek hai sir...mey fresh hokar aata hu...

Gazal and her frnd Naaz  reaches mela. Three of them were so excited. Here Maan, Rashmi and vidhi also reaches there at same time. Rashmi sees Golgappa stall..

Rashmi: bhai mujhe Golgappe khaaney hai
Maan: ha toh khao kisney manaa kiya hai.
Vidhi: lakin didi yeh aapke sawasthya {health} ke liye sahi nahi hoga
Rashmi: Vidhi {threating} agar tu chup nahi hui na toh mey tera so called swasthya bigaad dungi..

Vidhi looks at Maan. Maan smiles at them... Meanwhile Gazal and Naaz with azu reaches at the same stall.. Gazal was very excited to see all the rides and people enjoying so much.. Azu see golgappa stall. He pulls geet dupptta. She bends down.

Azu: Ammi humhey {pointing at stall} yeeehhh khaaanaa haiii

Gazal sees there. She smiles and took azu in her arms.

Gazal: humare azu yeh khaana hai.. theek hai aapki ammi aapko yeh khila dehgi lakin pehale hum waha chale tey hai { pointing at gaint wheel}
Azu: yeh jhulla jhulla {he start jumping in her arm}

Rashmi was about to take golgappa in his mouth when she saw making vidhi face and maan was laughing.. Rashmi stops eating and looks at them

Rashmi: mey joker nahi hu jo aisey muh bana rahi hai
Vidhi: di aapka swashtya {health LOL} kharab h jaayega LOLLOL
Rashmi: ale oo tu yaha bi shuru hogayi Confusedhey bhagwan kya karu mey tera

While maan were seeing them fighting he turns around to see view... But a white color duppata comes over him and cover his face. Wind start blowing... Maan peeps out from that sees here and there but no one is there...he sees back and then duppata... Rashmi makes vidhi eat golgappa and she was making face..Maan was still staring at that duppata. Rashmi comes to him and see maan.. she snaps her finger... Maan sees her. She takes maan with her and dupatta falls and Gazal comes, and take her duppata around her..



Naaz: Gazal tu bi na ek dam paagal hai... ek duppate ke liye roney lagi...

Gazal was looking down with tears. Here maan turns sees Naaz talking with Gazal.{see above picSmile}. he looks here and there... he turns again to vidhi and Rashmi...

Gazal: nahi naaz hum sach mey bahut dar gaye they yeh dupatta hi humari izzat hai agar yahi na rahey toh hum kisi aur ki shetani nigaho sey kaisey bachayengey apney aap ko

Naaz: Gazal sab isnaan ek jaisey nahi hotey kuch achey aur nake dil {good hearted} bi hotey hai

Gazal: hum bas yahi jaantey hai ki humara yeh duppata na raheta toh hum abu {father} ko kya jawab detey...

Naaz:  arey meri jaan ab yeh aansu bahakar mazaa kharab mat kar..dekh azu bi seham gaya hai...

Gazal looks down and see Azaan...Azaan wipes her tears and hugs her,.Gazal takes azu in her embrace.. Naaz takes geet to golgappa style...While maan went with Rashmi and vidhi to bangle stall.

Rashmi: bhai yeh kaisi hai {showing maan bangles}
Maan: dekh yeh sab tu hi kharid mujhe yeh sab pata nahi

Rashmi puts down bangles and comes to maan

Rashmi: maan bhai aap apni dream gal ke baarey mey baatiye na.

Maan stares at him and vidhi who was making sorry face

Maan: dekh tu phr shuru mat ho jao.
Rashmi: plz maan bhai bataiye na aap kabhi nahi batate ho jab bi mey puchti plz plz plz plz plz bhai {she pulls his arms}
Maan: ek ek ek min batata hu meri maa lakin tum dono promise karo ki kisi ko nahi bolo gi khas kar raj ko warna woh meri band bajayega...

Vidhi looks down.. Maan smirks...Smile Maan folds his arms.. he looks at them {guys maan imagination}






Maan: meri girl frnd hmm {thinks} jiska chehra maasom ho aur aakhney hmm jheel se gehri ho jismey bas doobney ko ji chahey



Gazal was looking somewhere and smiling little 

Maan: Jo phoolo sey komal aur bacho ki terha maasom ho



Gazal showing her hands to Naaz while feeding chocolate to azu. She eat herself also...{guys ignore car scene LOL plz see only  geazal}

Maan: jo bas meri ho sirf meri



Gazal was laughing as azu was dancing and he was happy...

Rashmi and vidhi rolls her eyes... she comes in front of her maan and start laughing LOL

Rashmi: too much bhai but aisi ladki miliegi kaha
maan: hmm kya pata yahi kahi bas aanko ko uski talash ho
Rashmi: wow yaar yeh ladki nahi koi pari lagti hai...
maan: ha pari hi hai
Rashmi: hmm

Maan hits rashmi head Smile

Maan: now lets go home
Vidhi: yeh toh bahut acha vichaar hai...

Rashmi hits her forehead...

Rashmi: tere yeh vichaar humhey ek din bimaar zarur kar denga

Maan comes to vidhi and put his arm around her...

Maan: yeh kya keh rahi ho humari vidhi ko bimair honey se bachane ki dawai hai mere pass..

Vidhi looks at maan... Maan also looks at her.. Vidhi feels shy and bends her head down...Rashmi comes from her other side and put her arm around her...

Maan: lets go home...
Rashmi: yes boss...

Night scene:

Jahangir was worried about Gazal and azu .. they didn't returned home yet. He was roaming here and there in tension... Suddenly someone open doors. Gazal comes in with azu. she was bends her head down.. Jahangir quickly comes to them..

Jahangir: beti tum kaha reh gayi thi tum janti ho hum kitna pareshan ho gaya tha
Gazal: abu woh hum meley mey itney khush they ki waqt ka pata hi nahi chala... abu humhey maaf kar dijiye
Jahangir:  hum tumko kitni baar samjhaya tha ki waqt pe jaldi aa jaana

Gazal looks down and azu hides behind gazal... Jahangir looks them and start lauging and azu peep out from Gazal back...

Jahangir: tum janta ho na beti hum tum par kabhi gussa nahi ho sakta 
Gazal: hum jantey hai abu
Jahangir: phir bi
Gazal: dubara aisi galti nahi hogi allah pak ki kasam {god's sware}
Jahangir: theek hai jao beti aur jaldi sey khaana banao bahut bukh lagi hai tab tal hum azu ke saath khelety hai

Jahangir takes azu in his arms and while Gazal makes dinner...

Scene shifts:

Maan finished his food when he gets call...checks his cell and smiles

Maan: hello 
Raj: bhai kaisey ho aap 
Maan: oey shaitan kaisa hai tu aur kaha hai
Raj: kya bhai mey koi baccha hu kya
Maan: tu bada kab hua tha kuch yaad nahi
Raj:  Bro...
Maan: arey arey mey toh mazak kar raha tha
Raj: hmm that;s better
Maan: oey hoey kya tevar lakin dadi ke saamney kaha jaatey hai yeh tevar
Raj: o god bro plz jab sey aap gaye ho hitler ney mera dimaag kharab kar diya hai.. raj yeh nahi ...raj woh nahi...raj yaha jao... raj yeh karo...yaar tang aa gaya hu mey
Maan: aww 
Raj: acha mey zara bahar hu baad mey call karta hu bye bye bro love u and miss u bro apna dyan karna aur ha mom tumhey yaad kar rahi thi
Maan: Paagal

Maan looks at cell ... he listen something and turns to window...

{ sorry guys i dont have video link but this is a song from movie koi mere dil sey pooche plz listen this song on songs,pk plz plz listen it frnds}

hanse tim tim chotey chotey taarey,
kahey chand bi aaja aaja pyare,
{Gazal smile at azu in her arms and patts his back
 to make him sleep}

tera naam le pukare tujhe neend ki pari,
soja soja re merey pyare,
hanse tim tim chotey chotey tareey
{ Maan see sky and stars.. Azu looks at gazal, she smiles}

kabhi tu jo mujse ruthey,
koi mere dil sey poochey,
tu kitna lage pyara
{ Gazal takes azu face in her hands and sings}

kabhi mey tujhe manau ,
kabhi khudh hi maan jaaye,
aur chahu tu ruthe dubara
{ she bends little and touches her nose with azu nose and nodes}
rup tere aur dulhare, teeno log se hai nyare
bada natkhat hai too na sata re
{Gazal sit on the side of window taking azu in her lap, she covers him
with blanket, she puts his head on her chest and play with his
hairs slowly slowly..azu smiles}

kahe chanda bhee aaja aaja aa re
teraa nam le pukare tujhe nind kee paree
so ja so ja re mere pyare
hanse tim tim tim chhote chhote tare
{Maan was smiling listening song and sees small lights of 
many homes near to his room window. he sits down 
and thinks about the person who is
singing}

tod duneeya se tar, jamin aasman ke par
nayee duneeya me too kho ja, khel tune bade khele
{azu looks at Gazal, she shows him stars and make
him sit}
thake ang ang tere, godh me ma kee too so ja
so ja so ja kar na deree, mai bhee aau rah teree
{Azu rubs his eyes,gazal patts his back and remember her
brother and sister in law wipes her tears}

nain mere bhee huye nindiya re, kahe chanda bhee aaja aaja aa re
teraa nam le pukare tujhe nind kee paree, so ja so ja re mere pyare
{Maan lays on bed, here Gazal also lays on bed
with azu on her . she caresses his hairs}


hanse tim tim tim chhote chhote tare
kahe chanda bhee aaja aaja aa re
teraa nam le pukare tujhe nind kee paree
so ja so ja re mere pyare - (3)
{Gazal makes dim light, put quilt and blanket
on azu, she also closes eyes, here 
maan also smiles and closes his eyes}



Precap: Gazal Interrogation...
OOPS IS IT TRUE!!!! GUESS Smile



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Edited by stary_kajal - 19 April 2012 at 1:09am

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