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--**Soulmate**--Kriyaansh n Swaron OS*Chap 1-11* (Page 47)

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
It was a cute update...boyz ki dal nahi gal rahi in girlz ke saamne...tumne kab update kia pataa nahi chalaa!!!! Hope u PM when u update next as I'm luking forward to it...I know ur a busy lady yaar...but index mein toh update kardo so we will find our way out Smile

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Im presently busy wid my upcoming entrance xams..wil updt as soon they finish.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 21 April 2012 at 5:05am

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snigdha_arsha

       HeartChapter 7- TimeforunrevealedloveHeart


Kriya came out taking enough of her tym wearing a dark blue lace top n jeans.She was slowly creeping outside but soon was stopped by her mom, whom she was trying to avoid.

Dimple:Kriya  kahaan ja rahi ho..

Kriya kya bathaogi??!!Will u tell her u r gng wid rey den she wil ask u abt d lame reason u told yesterday!!Better to carry on wid dat one instead of formiing a fresh one!!

Dimple:Kriya!!!

Kriya:Daisy mein clg ko jaa rahi hun..I told u yesterday itself ryt..!!

Dimple:Ok beta..jaldi aao.Bye..

Kriya:Bye mom..

Uff...bach gaya!!!

Kriya stepped out to see poor rey who was desperately waiting for her from d past half an hour or so sitting in d car.She sat in d car beside him.He started driving, the spell of silence was broken when Kriya's cell started ringing loud.Her face almost glowed on seeing d caller ID.Rey wondered who was calling her n y was she so happy.She picked up d cal n rey was listening to d convo keenly.

Kriya:Hello...

Sharon:Hi baby..kahaan ho??

Kriya:Mein Rey ke saath hun...he is taking me somewhere.

Sharon:Where??

Kriya:Patha nahi..

Sharon:Tho poochona..V'll join u.

Kriya:Ok..I'll msg you.

Sharon:OK..bye.

Kriya disconnected d cal n looked up at rey.

Kriya:Rey hum kahaan jaa rahe hain..

Ye sach mein humara beech mein kisiko bhula hee rahega..wat shud I do now??

Kriya:Rey..Where r v gng??

Rey:U'll come to kno wait..

Kriya:Rey, sharon n swayam...u told us v r gng together!!!!

Rey:Haan baba..dey wil join us.

Kriya:But how??Sharon was d one who called me to kno where v r gng..

Rey:Mein Swayam ko address batha di, he wil bring her.Ok..

Kriya:Ok..

There was dat spell of silence again..god!!How he hated it!!!They finally reached d destination place, Rey got down n opened d door for Kriya.She stepped out n started wandering around looking for someone.

Rey:Whom r u searching for??

Kriya:Swayam n Sharon..

Rey:They wil be here in 5 mins..Ok.

Kriya moved around never d less caring for his presence around her, she was a bit in tension too so she made up dis way.He tried many of his ways but it really had no impact on her, she kept on moving.

                                   ***************

Sharon hurried downstairs checking her phone at every min for Kriya's msg, but she dint get one.She has her breakfast n was going up, she noticed Swayam who was out in his car.She felt too bad for being rude wid her words after seeing him.She moved out to him.

Sharon:Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho..

Swayam:Waiting for you..

Sharon:Tab se yahi par ruki ho..u shud hav told me!!!

Swayam:U dint giv me dat chance.

Sharon:Ok..y r u waiting for me??

Swayam:V r going out..

Sharon:V??Rey n Kriya..

Swayam:We'll meet dem too..Now stop questioning n get on!!

Sharon:Wait a min..

She went in n came out dressed in a heavy graced pink top n jeans.Swayam was busy checking her out when Sharon got him off his thoughts uttering his name as loud as she cud.Swayam started driving to d place but was continuously disturbed her non-stop talking n all d way only she was talking n he was just nodding his head in between in order to not to disappoint her.

"Kriya ka friend..worth believeable!!!!",he thought to himself.

                                 *************

A car stopped on d spot just beside Kriyaansh's car n Swaron stepped out of it.Kriya went to Sharon n both of dem shared a hug for a while n started walking leaving deir boys behind.They proceeded further n after some time noticed dat d boys weren't nearby.They looked back n found dem still near d cars folding deir hands n shotting dem glares fumingly.Krisha realised dat they were far too ahead n walked upto dem.They went together to d house nearby arranged specifically for dem.They spent almost d whole day over deir talking, chatting n enjoying tym to d fullest but one thing was not realy acceptable, krisha sticked to each other without seperating even for a minute.Reyam understood dat deir plans weren't actually working n they had to decide something other, they gav some silly excuses n stepped out.

Rey:Swayam ye toh tumhara plan tha..kriya n sharon ko ek hee jagah lane..see wat d crap now??

Swayam:Rey!!Atleast better, they wudnt have even come if dey r seperated.

Rey:Ab kya kare wo bathao..

Swayam murmured d plan to him n again dat evil smile spread across deir faces.They went in n Krisha were still busy.

Rey:Ok girls..chalo.V r going out..

Sharon:Kahaan Rey..its realy gud here.

Rey:V r here frm morning, now lets enjoy going out too..

Sharon looks at Kriya for a response n Kriya nods her head in acceptance n they go out.Rey was driving d car n Krisha sat together back, now Rey was realy annoyed wid dem but Swayam told him it was just for few mins n he cooled.They drove to another place which was certainly too far from d previous one.It was a typical place with so many ppl around but was a gud sightseeing place they had never visited upto den.Rey winks his eye n deir plan starts.

Rey:Shit man!!Keys wahaan hee bhul gaya...Sharon pls get it for me.

Sharon:Rey tum aisa kaise bhul jaati ho...

She shouted at him n went to d car which was a bit far.

Swayam:Rey..Im feeling very thirsty can u pls get me a coke frm deir..

Rey:Oh..sure.

Rey walked upto a certain distance.

Swayam:Wo..bhul hee gaya.Rey ka wallet mera saath hain..Kriya jaake dhedo na..I wil b waiting for Sharon.

Kriya:OK..

Kriya went to Rey n Swayam waited for sharon.                                                                       

                                ****************









IT WAS FABULOUS I JUST LO0VED IT
THE WHOLE CONCEPT WAS AWESOME
THE WAY REY SENDS SHARON TO BRING KEYS AND THE WAY SWAYAM SENDS REY FOR COLDRINK AND THEN FOR KRIYA BY SAYING ABOUT WALLET WAS MINDBLOWIN
BUT U DID NOT PM ME Y I WONT TALK TO U








Edited by anniemathias - 21 April 2012 at 5:30am

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Nice update.reyam try to separate krisha.bechara boys,hope their plan work n pls pm me when u update

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anniemathias

Originally posted by snigdha_arsha

       HeartChapter 7- TimeforunrevealedloveHeart


Kriya came out taking enough of her tym wearing a dark blue lace top n jeans.She was slowly creeping outside but soon was stopped by her mom, whom she was trying to avoid.

Dimple:Kriya  kahaan ja rahi ho..

Kriya kya bathaogi??!!Will u tell her u r gng wid rey den she wil ask u abt d lame reason u told yesterday!!Better to carry on wid dat one instead of formiing a fresh one!!

Dimple:Kriya!!!

Kriya:Daisy mein clg ko jaa rahi hun..I told u yesterday itself ryt..!!

Dimple:Ok beta..jaldi aao.Bye..

Kriya:Bye mom..

Uff...bach gaya!!!

Kriya stepped out to see poor rey who was desperately waiting for her from d past half an hour or so sitting in d car.She sat in d car beside him.He started driving, the spell of silence was broken when Kriya's cell started ringing loud.Her face almost glowed on seeing d caller ID.Rey wondered who was calling her n y was she so happy.She picked up d cal n rey was listening to d convo keenly.

Kriya:Hello...

Sharon:Hi baby..kahaan ho??

Kriya:Mein Rey ke saath hun...he is taking me somewhere.

Sharon:Where??

Kriya:Patha nahi..

Sharon:Tho poochona..V'll join u.

Kriya:Ok..I'll msg you.

Sharon:OK..bye.

Kriya disconnected d cal n looked up at rey.

Kriya:Rey hum kahaan jaa rahe hain..

Ye sach mein humara beech mein kisiko bhula hee rahega..wat shud I do now??

Kriya:Rey..Where r v gng??

Rey:U'll come to kno wait..

Kriya:Rey, sharon n swayam...u told us v r gng together!!!!

Rey:Haan baba..dey wil join us.

Kriya:But how??Sharon was d one who called me to kno where v r gng..

Rey:Mein Swayam ko address batha di, he wil bring her.Ok..

Kriya:Ok..

There was dat spell of silence again..god!!How he hated it!!!They finally reached d destination place, Rey got down n opened d door for Kriya.She stepped out n started wandering around looking for someone.

Rey:Whom r u searching for??

Kriya:Swayam n Sharon..

Rey:They wil be here in 5 mins..Ok.

Kriya moved around never d less caring for his presence around her, she was a bit in tension too so she made up dis way.He tried many of his ways but it really had no impact on her, she kept on moving.

                                   ***************

Sharon hurried downstairs checking her phone at every min for Kriya's msg, but she dint get one.She has her breakfast n was going up, she noticed Swayam who was out in his car.She felt too bad for being rude wid her words after seeing him.She moved out to him.

Sharon:Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho..

Swayam:Waiting for you..

Sharon:Tab se yahi par ruki ho..u shud hav told me!!!

Swayam:U dint giv me dat chance.

Sharon:Ok..y r u waiting for me??

Swayam:V r going out..

Sharon:V??Rey n Kriya..

Swayam:We'll meet dem too..Now stop questioning n get on!!

Sharon:Wait a min..

She went in n came out dressed in a heavy graced pink top n jeans.Swayam was busy checking her out when Sharon got him off his thoughts uttering his name as loud as she cud.Swayam started driving to d place but was continuously disturbed her non-stop talking n all d way only she was talking n he was just nodding his head in between in order to not to disappoint her.

"Kriya ka friend..worth believeable!!!!",he thought to himself.

                                 *************

A car stopped on d spot just beside Kriyaansh's car n Swaron stepped out of it.Kriya went to Sharon n both of dem shared a hug for a while n started walking leaving deir boys behind.They proceeded further n after some time noticed dat d boys weren't nearby.They looked back n found dem still near d cars folding deir hands n shotting dem glares fumingly.Krisha realised dat they were far too ahead n walked upto dem.They went together to d house nearby arranged specifically for dem.They spent almost d whole day over deir talking, chatting n enjoying tym to d fullest but one thing was not realy acceptable, krisha sticked to each other without seperating even for a minute.Reyam understood dat deir plans weren't actually working n they had to decide something other, they gav some silly excuses n stepped out.

Rey:Swayam ye toh tumhara plan tha..kriya n sharon ko ek hee jagah lane..see wat d crap now??

Swayam:Rey!!Atleast better, they wudnt have even come if dey r seperated.

Rey:Ab kya kare wo bathao..

Swayam murmured d plan to him n again dat evil smile spread across deir faces.They went in n Krisha were still busy.

Rey:Ok girls..chalo.V r going out..

Sharon:Kahaan Rey..its realy gud here.

Rey:V r here frm morning, now lets enjoy going out too..

Sharon looks at Kriya for a response n Kriya nods her head in acceptance n they go out.Rey was driving d car n Krisha sat together back, now Rey was realy annoyed wid dem but Swayam told him it was just for few mins n he cooled.They drove to another place which was certainly too far from d previous one.It was a typical place with so many ppl around but was a gud sightseeing place they had never visited upto den.Rey winks his eye n deir plan starts.

Rey:Shit man!!Keys wahaan hee bhul gaya...Sharon pls get it for me.

Sharon:Rey tum aisa kaise bhul jaati ho...

She shouted at him n went to d car which was a bit far.

Swayam:Rey..Im feeling very thirsty can u pls get me a coke frm deir..

Rey:Oh..sure.

Rey walked upto a certain distance.

Swayam:Wo..bhul hee gaya.Rey ka wallet mera saath hain..Kriya jaake dhedo na..I wil b waiting for Sharon.

Kriya:OK..

Kriya went to Rey n Swayam waited for sharon.                                                                       

                                ****************









IT WAS FABULOUS I JUST LO0VED IT
THE WHOLE CONCEPT WAS AWESOME
THE WAY REY SENDS SHARON TO BRING KEYS AND THE WAY SWAYAM SENDS REY FOR COLDRINK AND THEN FOR KRIYA BY SAYING ABOUT WALLET WAS MINDBLOWIN
BUT U DID NOT PM ME Y I WONT TALK TO U






Anny really a big bear hug for uHug for dis comment...

Thnks for filling my post wid latest Arsha's pics..

Luv you really a lot..

N u dnt hav d chance to be angry wid me bcoz I didnt complete d chapter yet n dint pm anyone too...



Edited by snigdha_arsha - 21 April 2012 at 6:27am

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
LOL LOL pehle to kriya ne Daisy se jhoot bola hi clg ja rahi hai Wink
bechaara rey kitna pareshaan ho gaya hoga LOL
nd Krisha wow kya frndship hai jst like ours Tongue
sharon checking her mobile like i check my inbox LOL
nd yaa mai bhi swayam se agree karti hu Kriya ki frnd hai to sharon bhi non-stop Big smile
Krisha sticked together bechare Reyam aur kitna jalaenge vo
nd boys excused with silly reasons they r again with a plan Wink
nd waah kya point pe end kia meow Ouch 
but loved it like hell ab to Kriya ko rey ke paas nd Swayam ko sharon ke paas bhej dia Embarrassed
waiting for the nxt update...


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