Dedicated lines to Kunal

Hi parichayans... First time i tried to write in hindi. Dedicated these lines to Kunal.


   "  Maanta Hu...
               Hum Shuru kiya Zindagi Ek doosre ko Parayi maankar...
               Ek chat ke neeche raha Parayi bankar...
      Socha tha..
              Aage Poori zindagai, tume parayi banne ka hamesha hamesha ke liye...
      Par...
              Pehchan nahi paya, is parayi parayi ka chakkar mein...
              Tumne mujhe kab apna bana liya...
      Aye...
              abhi aaapka apne ko, aise akela chodkar chali jaogi tu...???
              Jaa sakti ho tu...????????????
             Tera pati kuch bolna chahata hain... tum sunna nahi chahte ho???
      Aye... Batavo na...
              Mein intezaar karne ka tayaar hu... Magar haar nahi maanoonga
              Mere man ka sachayi, zaroor tumko batana hai...
              Mein aisa jaane nahi doonga Tumhe..."

   ( I am from South India. My working place and my TV helped me in learning hindi. If any mistakes... Please let me know... I would like to correct ).
             
     
        
Edited by gayathrimsk - 12 years ago

wow!!! gayatri...

Hey gayatri...wow...beautifully written.
Jake CV's ko yeh lines dedo na..
Loved the way ..the Aye is included.
nowadays mei aye zyada use kar rahi hoon real life mei bhi...😆

BTW...cool so u r also from south india..mei bhi.

savi...

Originally posted by: sgumi82

Hey gayatri...wow...beautifully written.
Jake CV's ko yeh lines dedo na..
Loved the way ..the Aye is included.
nowadays mei aye zyada use kar rahi hoon real life mei bhi...😆

BTW...cool so u r also from south india..mei bhi.

savi...

savi dii...u too 4m south india????

Good try and great lines. Keep it up. So beautifully written which has lot of depth in it. 👏

hey gayatri

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

wow!!! gayatri...

superbly written...loved it...

meaningul lines :)

btw u too 4m south??? ahh..i'm 4m kerala

 Hi sonia. Yes I am from South ---> Hyderabad.

Originally posted by: sgumi82

Hey gayatri...wow...beautifully written.
Jake CV's ko yeh lines dedo na..
Loved the way ..the Aye is included.
nowadays mei aye zyada use kar rahi hoon real life mei bhi...😆

BTW...cool so u r also from south india..mei bhi.

savi...

Hi savi, Thats great to hear you too from south. Me too..

Originally posted by: Indomitable

Good try and great lines. Keep it up. So beautifully written which has lot of depth in it. 👏

  Thank you so much. I am getting a good support for my first attempt.

Originally posted by: sepiasunshine

hey gayatri

I knw how difficult it is to write in a language in which you don't think n speak or have a good command, for someone like that you've written very neatly...keep it up 👏 you'l go far ahead n best of luck for future writing 😃

BTW am also a southie from bengaluru 😛 😊

   Hi, thank you so much for your appreciation.
   And Parichay forum, has become a good platform to me i can say. I am reading many posts and improving myself and now am here with my lines.