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Parichay Nayee Zindagi Kay Sapno Ka

Dedicated lines to Kunal

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Hi parichayans... First time i tried to write in hindi. Dedicated these lines to Kunal.


   "  Maanta Hu...
               Hum Shuru kiya Zindagi Ek doosre ko Parayi maankar...
               Ek chat ke neeche raha Parayi bankar...
      Socha tha..
              Aage Poori zindagai, tume parayi banne ka hamesha hamesha ke liye...
      Par...
              Pehchan nahi paya, is parayi parayi ka chakkar mein...
              Tumne mujhe kab apna bana liya...
      Aye...
              abhi aaapka apne ko, aise akela chodkar chali jaogi tu...???
              Jaa sakti ho tu...????????????
             Tera pati kuch bolna chahata hain... tum sunna nahi chahte ho???
      Aye... Batavo na...
              Mein intezaar karne ka tayaar hu... Magar haar nahi maanoonga
              Mere man ka sachayi, zaroor tumko batana hai...
              Mein aisa jaane nahi doonga Tumhe..."


   ( I am from South India. My working place and my TV helped me in learning hindi. If any mistakes... Please let me know... I would like to correct ).
             
     
        


Edited by gayathrimsk - 04 April 2012 at 9:40pm

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
wow!!! gayatri...
superbly written...loved it...
meaningul lines :)
btw u too 4m south??? ahh..i'm 4m kerala

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Hey gayatri...wow...beautifully written.
Jake CV's ko yeh lines dedo na..
Loved the way ..the Aye is included.
nowadays mei aye zyada use kar rahi hoon real life mei bhi...LOL

BTW...cool so u r also from south india..mei bhi.

savi...
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sgumi82

Hey gayatri...wow...beautifully written.
Jake CV's ko yeh lines dedo na..
Loved the way ..the Aye is included.
nowadays mei aye zyada use kar rahi hoon real life mei bhi...LOL

BTW...cool so u r also from south india..mei bhi.

savi...
savi dii...u too 4m south india????
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Good try and great lines. Keep it up. So beautifully written which has lot of depth in it. Clap
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:42am | IP Logged
hey gayatri

I knw how difficult it is to write in a language in which you don't think n speak or have a good command, for someone like that you've written very neatly...keep it up Clap you'l go far ahead n best of luck for future writing Big smile
BTW am also a southie from bengaluru Tongue Smile
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Superb lines...
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by awesumsonia

wow!!! gayatri...
superbly written...loved it...
meaningul lines :)
btw u too 4m south??? ahh..i'm 4m kerala


 Hi sonia. Yes I am from South ---> Hyderabad.

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