Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 8)

ShivRajput IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Wow... Story s gttng vry intrstng waiting 4 der confession

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2189mansi Senior Member

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Ohh well written..update us soon...n do pm me.!

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virmanforever Goldie

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Wa wa wa what a nice job please PM me when you update

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virmanrox8542 Groupbie

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
blusher lipstick bindhi . cant stop laughing ROFL ROFL
it was amazing
pleaseee write the next prt soon
dude it was amazing Heart

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kanishkakaran Groupbie

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
i want part 5 now!! lol.!! awesum..!!Clap

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-Anika- Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Hello Guys Big smile Thank you do much! Sorry if I forgot to PM anyone about this update. The sentences between the brackets represents thoughts

Here is Part 5 :

Each step on the stairs made Jeevika's heart beat faster. She was nervous... She was getting the same feeling as her first night with Viren. Manvi was calm as a cucumber. She wanted to Call Dabbu and tell him about this prank but jeevika told her not to tell him right now.

Manvi: Di... Ek plan hai jo app...
Jeevika: Maanuuu... Ab tu kuch plan nahi karege.. Ek number ki shetan hai tu..
* starts to mumble* Pata nahi Viren ji kya karege.. Im so scared.. I hope he doesn't get mad... Mein kya karungi.. Think jeevika Think... Please Shiv Ji help me..
Manvi: Di stop mumbling.. Mere Jeeju toh solid angry hone wale hai.. Aap toh.. Tch tch tch..
Jeevika: Mannu stop scaring me.. It's okay jeevika.. All izz Well..All izz well...
Manvi: Di.. All izzz Well * laughs*
Jeevika: chup Kar Shetan.. All this is happening because of you..
Manvi: Yes Yes Pranking mein toh maine phD ki hai..
Jeevika and manvi reach upstairs.. Jeevika: Maanu please apologise to Virat nicely. Okay?
Manvi: Yes di and Good luck Di * winks*
Jeevika just smiles and heads towards her room. Manvi heads towards Virat's Room.

Jeevika in front of the Door outside her bedroom. ( Jeevika it's only Viren Ji he will forgive you.. Don't worry! Shiv ji please help... ) She takes a deep breath and opens the door.
She sees Viren Engrossed in his files. He is sitting on the sofa and seemed in quite a serious mood.
Viren( Vaah Vaah.. Come on Jeevika say what you have to say.. This is so fun)
Jeevika(how should I start... VirenJi kal raat..Nahi Nahi.. Jeevika
Jeevika walks up to the sofa.
Jeevika: Viren Ji?
Viren: Hmm...
Jeevika: Vi..Viren Ji...
Viren puts his files on the side and crosses his hands. This makes jeevika more nervous. He just observes her.
Viren: Ji boliye Jeevika Ji
Jeevika: Viren Ji woh mein aap se..
Viren: Yes tell me..
Jeevika sits on the sofa. Viren is having a lot of Fun..
Jeevika: Kaal Raat..
Viren: Kaal raat kya? Jeevika is everything okay?
Jeevika( just say it in one go) : The lipstick mark on your cheek last night was done by me.. I did that.. I'm sorry Viren Ji.. I didn't want to do it..Manvi forced me to.. I didn't kiss you on your cheek. I kissed my hand and touched it at your cheek that's what made the mark.. Im...
Viren put his finger on her lips...
Viren: Shhh... Ek dum chup... * removed his finger from her lips.
So Mrs Vadhera...Manvi forced you to kiss me huh?
Jeevika: Well to be honest.. It was my idea.. * winks*
Viren: Oh Really... Do you want to do it again? * cheeky smile*
Jeevika manages to get up from the sofa slowly and Viren gets up too.
Jeevika: Virenji please...
Viren: Jeevika Ji please... * smiling*
Jeevika: Viren Ji I think Ma is calling me..
Viren: Oh really..
Jeevika keeps moving backwards and Viren moves towards her...

Manvi outside Virat's Room..
Manvi: ( This has got to be a bad day.. Mein uss Chep ko sorry bol ne wali hoon. Kya Shiv Ji.. I wish Dadaji ka Daar Nahi Hota.. This is cheating Shiv Ji... Kya yaar. Okay manvi just say sorry and Kisko from here)
She knocks..
Virat: Who is it?
Manvi: * changes her voice* Mein aapke..
Virat: Kyon hai?
Manvi: Ji mein..
Virat: ( Paaka yeh Bandaria hi hogi) Oh kahin Aap Naaye Bai toh Nahi?
* laughing quieting*
Manvi: (Mein Bai... I'll slap you Chep!) Ji Uncle.. Please Darwaza koliye
Virat: ( Uncle! chaudharian Mujhe Uncle... Ruk ja tu)
He Opens the Door..
Manvi: Uncle Ji thank you for opening the door..
Virat: Oh please stop your sad jokes.. They are sad like you and your pranks..
Manvi: Oooh Hoii.. Uncle Ji bora Maan Gaye..please forgive me..
* hands joint*
Virat: Bora for what?
Manvi: Kal raat woh make up.. Maine kiya tha Uncle Ji.. I'm sure refreshing tha.. Hai nai.
Virat: Refreshing huh? Tu ruk ja.. Virat runs after manvi. Manvi runs around the whole first floor and then she goes inside Virat's Room. Virat still chasing her. He shuts the door and locks it...
Virat: Ab kaha jaaye ki tu..chaudharian...
Manvi: Uncle Ji please Kuch maat Karna.. otherwise I won't be able to show my face to anyone..
Virat: * shocked* Bandaria Tu...
Manvi: time please... Idiot yeh Sab tune start kiya..
Virat: What? I didn't do anything it was You!
Manvi: Kal raat... You called me an idiot! And that's how this all started.. You said it in your dream but I don't care.. How dare you call me an idiot...
* hands on her hips*
Virat: * laughs* Bandaria... Hahahahaha
Manvi: Isse kya ho Gaya hai.. Oh hello.. Uncle ji Stop laughing...
Virat: Manvi tu naa..
He just runs towards her and hugs her...

Jeevika: Viren ji please.. Yeh aap kya..
Viren: Jeevika ... Tumein Jurmana Bharna hoga..
Jeevika reaches her bed side and can't go backwards.. Viren still taking tiny steps towards her. Jeevika's heart beat was uncontrollable... Jeevika sprints.. And Viren chases her. She is behind a chair and he is in front of it. They are going around in circles.
Viren: So you want to play a game.. It's fine by me.. Don't blame me for extra penalty then * winks*
Jeevika runs towards their bed and Viren follows her. She is standing on the bed and Viren is standing on the bed side..
Jeevika: Tch tch tch... So slow..
Viren: Slow huh?... Ill show you..
Jeevika tries to run but trips over a pillow and falls on the bed face down.
Viren climbs on the bed quickly and gets hold of Jeevika's Wrist..
Viren: So Jeevika ji... What were you saying? Im slow huh?
Jeevika: please Viren ji chodiye naa
Viren: why should I.. I won the game.. Now I should get a reward..
Jeevika: Reward?...
Viren: Don't act all innocent now..
He let goes of her wrist and turns her around so she faces him. He lays himself on top of her..
Viren: So... Are you going to give me my reward or do I have to...
Jeevika: Viren ji * blushing*
Viren moves the strand of hair from her beautiful face. Jeevika's heart is beating really fast. She closes her eyes. Viren closes their distance further by moving closer. He kisses her forehead; Jeevika clutches on the blanket. He then kisses both her eyes... Jeevika smiles. She feels like she is in heaven. Viren moves down further but doesn't kiss her on her lips; he kisses her jaw. Jeevika clutches the blanket more.
Viren moves down and removes her Duputta that is around her neck. He kisses her neck a couple of times. Jeevika clutches on Viren's shirt now. He moves her karmiz to one side of the shoulder so he can excess the other side. He bites on her shoulder skin and she let's out a gasps.
Jeevika: Viren ji...
Viren: This was your punishment for last night's prank. Now for my reward you have to do something...

Manvi is shocked ( Yeh Chep ko kya hogaya hai) Virat is lost. He's having a weird feeling.. He doesn't want to let go of this person ever again. Manvi can feel Virat's steady heart beat. She gets lost in that heart beat; it feels like a child's laughter to her. She moves her hand around him and closes her eyes. Virat can smell her Shampoo; the one he hated but for some reason right now he loved it. Manvi loved his heart beat.. She felt like listening to it for the rest of her life. Virat clutches on manvi more.. He didn't feel like sharing her to anyone. Manvi clutches on him further too; not ready to let go of him.
Knock knock...

Edited by ani29 - 07 April 2012 at 5:48am

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
really fast service ..! itni jaldii part 5.!! lolz.!! d same thing which m sayingg for all ur parts.! awesum!<3  Clap

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-Tinu- Goldie

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Update soon pls . it was amazing as usual . plz update ssooon n fast

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