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This is a short update
The sentences between the brackets represent thoughts of a character...
Around 6.30 am
Everyone is in the living room...
Jeevika and chachi are sitting on the same sofa while Manvi and Viren on the same sofa and Virat is sitting alone..
Jeevika is just quiet and looking at her Chuddas and counting them..
Viren is busy looking at Jeevika again like a puppy..
Chachi: Haaiyne.. I have to wake up Inder.. You guys stay here I'll be back..aur mera shloku puttar..
Manvi shuts her eyes and relaxes..
Manvi ( Yes Manvi.. Breath in.. Breath out... Breath in... Breath out)
Virat looks at Her and let's out a quiet laugh..
Virat ( Meri bandaria yeh tu kya kar rahe hai..)
Virat looks at Viren and is about to say something to him but doesn't bother because he knows he won't get any response. He nudges Jeevika..
Jeevika: Hmm... * looks at Virat*
Virat: Look at your Behen.. She is taking deep breaths like she is going to go in major labour pains... * laughs*
Jeevika: Viraaat... * disapproving*
Viren: Not Virat.. Viren...
Manvi opens here eyes and looks at Virat.
Manvi: Oye.. If you want to say something than say to my face..
Viren: Yes...boliyee... JeevikaJi... * winks*
Jeevika stands up and everyone looks at her.. She holds Viren's hand and takes him towards the garden..
Manvi and Virat whistle at this and start laughing..
Manvi: Oyye Hoye kya Baat hai? In the garden as well..
Virat: Kuch toh sharam rak..kaise Baat Kar rahe hai apni Didi aur Jeeju ke mare mein..
Manvi: Partnerrr please Pakka maat.. Anyways I'm trying to focus on my breathing..
Virat: Seems like you are in labour pains..* laughs*
Manvi: Labour pain... Oh My God... How dare you say that.. * shocked* that's it I'm going to complain to Jeeju..
She is about to stand up and walk towards the garden when Virat holds her wrist tightly and pulls her back.. She lands on his lap.. Her duppata on her face..
Manvi's heart beat is raising.. She can feel Virat's steady Heart beat..Virat Removes the duppata from her face gently and finds Her eyes are shut.. He just stares at her.. Then Manvi opens her eyes...
They both see something unusual in each others eyes... They both are aware where they are but don't care what anyone thinks if they see them like this..
Virat: Maanvi I have to tell you something * looks deeply in her eyes and his voice has a lot of sincerity*
Virat makes her stand up and he gets up too..
Virat: Come with me.. * holds her hand and takes her towards his room*
In the garden..
Jeevika: VirenJi Im serious... Stop this acting warna...
* hands on her hips*
Viren: Haaiye .. Mein toh Daar gaya teachers ji... Please mere Mummy ko complain maat Karna..* hands joined*
Jeevika: Oooh lawyerJi you think this is funny Huh?
* raises her eyes brows*
Viren: Tum gusse mein kitni naughty lagte ho.. Haaiyee
* shuts his eyes*
Jeevika: Waiseee mein bohot naughty mood mein * touches the button of his kurta*
Viren suddenly opens his eyes when he feels her hands..
Viren: Dekho Jeevika.. Agar kisse ne..
Jeevika: Shh... Haaiye aap Daarte hua kitne cute lagate hai..* winks*
Viren: Dekho jeevika... If Someone comes then.. * walks away from her*
Jeevika: Oye Hoye Soniyo.. Tusse Daar kaye.. * cheeky smile*
Viren: Pfff.. Please Viren Singh Vadhera is not scared of anyone.. * walks backwards; away from Jeevika*
Jeevika: Accha... * walks towards him*
Viren: Dekho.. I don't think your intentions are good.. Stay away from me.. * still walking backwards*
Jeevika walks towards him.. Her hands behind her..
Viren: Jeevika we are fasting today.. So this all is not right..
Jeevika: PatiJi who said fasting means no romance..
Viren: Dekho...Bade Maa
Saying this he runs inside the house..Jeevika folds her hands and grins..
Jeevika: Works everytime.. I'll get you back LawyerJi..
Jeevika walks towards the house..
Viren reaches the living room and no one is there..
Viren: Soch Soch.. How should I hide from jeevika.. God knows what's happened to her.. Seriously..
He bumps into someone..
Edited by ani29 - 23 April 2012 at 9:49am