Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 33)

-princess- Groupbie

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
I loved it!! HeartCant wait for the next part!! Smile

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Tishuu Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
Awesome hi awesome
Totally jhakaas
Koi jawab ni
Absolutely super splendidly mast ek dum rapchik bole toh

Hehehehhee i duno where the above came from
Love this

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DivanIsh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged
once again a awsome part but i have a complaint...the parts are very short...i know i am cranky but plz update more and more and update soon...heheh...i wish this story never ends :P 

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
thaanks for the PM
loved it!!!!!!!!
please continue soon =)

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Hello guys Big smile
Thank you for your likes and comments Smile
Silent readers hope you like the update...

The sentences between the brackets represents thoughts of a character...

Part 17

Manvi and Virat are still lost in their thoughts about each other...
Suddenly manvi's Phone rings... Both of them come back to reality...
Manvi smiles when she sees the caller ID...
Manvi: Oi hoi Dabbe
Dabbu: Uggghh... Didi... Mera
Naam Dabinder Singh Chaudhary hai...
Manvi: Haaiye meri jaan kya hua? Sab kaise hai, chachi, chachu, Beeji and meri favourite Badi Beeji...
Dabbu: Sab Teek hai..
Virat: Muhje de...
Takes the phone from manvi
Virat: Dabbu kaisa hai?
Dabbu: Mein Teek hu aur aap?.. Mujhe bhi Chandigarh aana hai...
Virat: Dabbu... Kal karwa chauth hai...
Dabbu: Toh.. Mein kya karu..
Virat: Tu bhi vrath Kar summi ke kiya...
Dabbu: Kya Virat Bhaiya.. Aap
Bhi.. * shy*
Virat: Haaaiye... Tere manvi Didi bhi Kar rahe hai...
Dabbu: * shocked* Sacheee!!
Manvi snatches the phone from him...
Manvi: Dabbu meri jaan... Yeh Jhoot bol raha hai... Mein aur vrath..
Dabbu: Hain Manvi Didi aap Nahi Kar chakti... Virat Bhaiya toh jhoote hai...
Manvi: Chal mein tujhe baad mein phone karti hoon.. Teek hai... Bye
Dabbu: Bye Didi...
Manvi disconnects the phone...
Manvi: Partner have you gone nuts... Dabbu cant keep anything inside him... He can't keep a secret...
Virat: Keeping a vrat is not a secret...
Manvi: I know but everyone in
Chandigarh won't understand... Anyways i have to talk to Vanshika Aunty so I'm going...
Virat: Okay...

Viren still has his head on jeevika's lap...
Jeevika is playing with his hair...
Jeevika: VirenJi
No response...
Jeevika looks down at him... He is fast asleep... She just smiles...
She tries to get up by putting Viren's head on a pillow but Viren gets hold of her folded legs while still sleep...
Viren starts to mumble..
Viren: Why is my pillow running away... Stay...
Jeevika starts to giggle...
Viren is back in his deep sleep... And Jeevika feels bored so she reaches to get a random book from the drawer... Suddenly she sees a Diary...
Jeevika: Who's diary is this? Seeing it for the first time...Must be VirenJi's... I never knew he wrote diary..
She hesitates if she should open it or not.. She doesn't want to invade his personal thoughts... She finally opens it...and reads the date...
6th October 2011...
Jeevika ( This diary is so old.. Hmm... Let's read what my Pati ji has written... This is the first time we meet )

Jeevika... jeevika... jeevika... Today Im going to go see this Girl.. Seriously I have lost count to how many girls I have meet for marriage but This time it feels like it is meant to be...
Virat seems quite eager to meet this girl... He feels she will be right for me.. Let's see what happens..
Jeevika just smiles... And reads further..

I meet her... Due to all the misunderstanding and prank.. She still must be thinking I'm Virat...
Badi Maa has asked me a couple of times by now what I think about her... Im seriously speechless.. I like her... I won't ever admit this to anyone but she is just seems perfect for me... When I looked into her eyes I could tell she is the one for me... I still don't think I will rush into it but I think she is the One... God will prove me right...

Jeevika turns the pages but there is nothing written... She looks in the drawer too but doesn't find any other diaries...
She wants to know what he felt..
Viren turns sides on her lap and opens his eyes a little...
Viren: Jeevika..
Jeevika: Finally you are awake... Pati Ji this is not the time to sleep.. Chalo get up.. Let me go and prepare for tomorrow...
Viren gets hold of both her hands and holds them tightly...
Viren: Jeevika bad manners...* winks*
Jeevika is shocked...
Viren: Reading my diary huh... Was it fun... * kisses her hands*
Jeevika: I didn't know you wrote diaries... Where are the rest of the diaries...
Viren: This is the first and last one.. I didn't want to write diary because I found you to share all my feelings..
Jeevika just Blushes..
Viren gets up and lays Jeevika down and goes on top of her..
Jeevika caresses his face...
Viren just looks at her...
Jeevika: I love you so much...
Jeevika guides him to lay down and she goes on top of him..
She kisses his eyes; then moves down to kiss the tip of his nose; kisses his checks and stares at his lips..
Viren just tightens his hold on her waist... And rolls her so she is under him...
He kisses her passionately on her lips and then deepens it.. He removes his shirt and leaves trails of wet kisses on her jaw, neck, shoulder...
Jeevika arches her back so he is more close to him... She clutches on him... Her heart is uncontrollable fast..
He manages to remove her karmeez... And showers his love even more...His Chest crushes her bosom... Jeevika has her eyes shut and says his name... His hands push her shalwar down and he pushes his jeans off...
He kisses her stomach and jeevika just smiles...He pushes her leg apart... And showers her with his love... Proves that she belongs to him... Jeevika let's out a moan...
Viren: Was I too harsh Jeevika... Sorry... I always end up hurting you...
Jeevika is panting...
Jeevika: Never say that.. I'm all yours...

Virat is still in his room... Wondering about her and Manvi...
Virat ( God I think I do have feelings for Manvi.. I won't as yet share my feelings.. It seems to early.. If this develops into Love ... Jeevika Bhabhi and Bhai will be so happy.. Two behnas in ones house... And two bhaiyas) * smiles*

Manvi is in Vanshika's Room...
Vanshika: beta.. Are you sure you want to do this Karwa chauth?
Manvi: Jee Aunty... Even your son wants to do it..
Vanshika: I know Beta... Viren does it for Jeevika..
Manvi: Aunty... Your other son * smiles*
Vanshika: * shocked* Virat...sach?
Manvi: Jee Aunty... He is giving me company...
Vanshika: I still can't believe it... Tum dono hamesha Khush rehna...
Manvi smiles...
They talk about plans for tomorrow and how Manvi should fast...

It's evening... Around 5 pm

Sargi meaning
Vanshika is preparing Sargi for Jeevika.. And manvi too...
Virat hugs his mum from behind...
Virat: Mum... Oooh Sargi for Bhabhi... And this other one... * confused*
Vanshika: For Manvi...
Virat: Mum she is not your daughter in law so why?
Vanshika: She is not but she is my daughter... You know Virat how much I wanted a girl... But now I have two... Jeevika and Manvi... I couldn't ask for more from shiv ji..
Virat: Haaiyee Mummy.. Kitne touchy story hai * kisses her cheeks*
Vanshika: Shetan... Mera bacha... Good luck with your fast too...
Virat: Im sure manvi told you about me fasting with her...
Vanshika: I have my spies * laughs*
Virat hugs her tightly and leaves...

Suddenly He bumps into Manvi...


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